your pronounciation's really good, english is not my first language but i can understand you perfectly. i like it, just a little too many cuss words, you don't need to act so tough, your voice and skills will get you enough respect. take care :)
good shit bro first thing the beat makes the whole song i mean the old school beat who dont love it but yuh got your flow keep at it i diggs and fuck people who hate they just mad cause ht cant do shit with a beat
I hope you guys no that he didnt change the instrumentals to the originals the beat is originally from DJ kool hurc, the creater and god of real hip hop.
god damn dude is that you on the mic casues your prety good man thats cool and dont lisen to the haters there just jelous cause they cant do what you do badass and keep it up
Hey, its a hard one coz the original is so fuckin huge!!!!!! But try and clear that from your head, and jus listen to it like a new tune........ AND ITS SICK !!!! fuckin haters couldnt mc to twinkle twinkle haha anyways gotta clear my throat V
eyyyyy mayn its lyke epmd said u gots ta chill im fuckin luvin it man killah shit u do n im all da way down under fuck da haters love tha realists peace luv respect man
This is baller. I didnt even know it was you rapping till i saw the hater comments. This is sick nasty, bro! I'm faving this. Take it from a bboy, this beat is dope.
Whay all these cats hatin' it don't sound that bad.. Besides if this cat is free stylin then I really give it up too him. Obviously these clowns don't know the feeling of spitting your OWN shit on a track!!
lemme give you some honest feedback...I try to be objective. hater? NO
asskisser? NO
somewhere in between? YES
Okay, first off, it's gonna be bloody easy to sound good over that track. Just saying.
It reflects really well on your ability to find tracks that amplify your talents. But, my gramps could spit on this and get a 7/10, so me giving you a 10/10 has to be qualified.
But okay yeah. Honestly, I really think it's something special. Heres 5 things that are A+ about it:
1) I think your breath control is really good. Was this 1 take? Or even, if not 1st take, are all the verses back to back? Unless you did crazy editing, I'm genuinely impressed with how it came together. Assuming this is not over-produced, then your consistency is something at sets you apart from the Charlie Browns.
Its one thing (the most important thing though) to put bars together that sound mjusically correct, but then you gotta throw some cleverness into it, and i think this line did it. Its something that doesn't fit at all in a phoentic way, yet ABSOLUTELY fits in a storytelling way. As such...yo, it fits
4) I really appreciate that you've made the effort to pronounce well. Alot of dogs not realize how much that matters. Sure, everyone understands you in person, but when your words get dropped over a beat, it's pretty easy for a regional dialect to morph into un-understandable.
Wonder why Nas sells better than MF Doom? cause i can understand every syllable of Nas, and MF Doom sounds like he got a mouthful of marbles.
so, keep that theme going on your next tracks, okay?
5) Theres some legitimately impressive writing here. Most (not all, but most) bars lead well into the next one, which is my big hate on most aspiring artists. It seems like you either prepared very well, or just have a telent for it, but you've managed to put together something that could be realistically re-wrtitten as a poem and still be taken seriously. Thats a huge credit, and although i wrote this as #5), it is probably the thing i was most impressed with.
Now i got 2 digs at u. Not meaning them as personal digs, but more "constructive criticism"
dig 1) Theres not alot of variation through this track. I mean, verse one was hype, then verse two was just as hype but kinda similar to the other one, then verse three is more of the same. I'm not really sure how to suggest better, i think it would pertain to throwing more creativity into it, whatever that means. Consider throwing something memorable into each of the 3 verses.
You've basically got no punchlines. Its funny casue i normally bitch out people for having *too many* punchlines, but i think this is a track that could totally benefit from having a few. I dont (necessarily) mean a yo momma joke...but throw something that catches the ear of the listener, and do it when the beat suggests a natural pause. The "hheh hheh until my throat is clear" was a good start, now find 5 more so you can put 2 into each verse. It'll make memorable track.
Anyways dog, hope u appreciate some (your first??) constructive criticism. Take it as the most legitimate props i can give you that i favorited this song. Peace>.
"Sounds Like Hee-Haw vs. Eminem vs. ICP vs. Vanilla Ice vs. KMK vs. The CRAPPIEST Take that DJ Kool never took vs. an asthmatic donkey smoking a weeks worth of heroin/meth-laced marijuana vs. Oprah trying to rap like the Beastie Boyz. And I Love Brass Monkey!!!!!!!!!!"...Is what I would've said, but this sounds pretty decent.
@chickenlovingdogOreo hah retard its called let me clear my throat by dj kool and if you reall like the trumpet just type the name and song and write instrumental after :D and bobs your uncle fannys your aunt !:P
wow flattery will get u everywhere... id upload more vids cuz i have tons of new songs but my computer dont have any video software... but when the new mixtape drops i will let everyone kno
you did me a big favor with this one man it was my favorite song back in the day and its like you just gave it a spit-shine and refreshed it, so you know only a fool would contest it.
you're dope man don't spend the time to even bring up the haters. You could be the best at what you do and theres still going to be people on your dick. Ignore the shit.
ey bitches i got some new shit for my haters!! I Love u guys!!! u really entertain me! anyways soon as i get some video software on the p.o.s. Dell ill post up that new new for yall lamez!! all thanks goes to my supporters!
WOW DECEMBER AINT EVEN FUCKIN HERE BITCHES. YALL KNO U LOVE ME AND IF U DONT UR DUMB. I JUST WANNA SPREAD LOVE WIT MUSIC SO FUCK U IF U DISAGREE. IM THE THE LAB RIGHT NOW COOKIN UP SOME NEW SHIT SO KEEP SHOWING ME LOVE AND ILL KEEP SHOWING YALL LOVE.
@areal7813 you aint lying you could rip a beat even if it a was laminated so keep it up and dont let them haters get at you cuz they are the weak and powerless
i appreciate it. i can send u some shit if u want. its urs.. all i ask is u give it to everyone u kno. DJ, Friends, Promoters... ITS URS.. 2 mixtapes droppin very soon. ill keep u posted
id say about 1000 of the 19000 veiws are mine lol, i fuckin LOVE this track! a-reals tha fuckin bomb! gimme a shout ill send you some beats, get a international collaboration goin, well done blood, keep it up!!!
yoo thats wuts up! ill hit u up. i got MAAADDDDDD NEW SHIT COMING... just forward me to friends or w/e u gotta do to get my words out! and that collab can happen too! yo imma shout out all my peepz on here that gave me love... imma make a song just yall!! watch!
this aimed at me? so im white now? aight... well thanks for giving me another hit, im goin for 20,000 by december so ur just another statistic bitch. but its all love, white black yellow purple green w/e!
this is nice. i'm not tring to tell you that i can do better cause trust me i couldn't come close but less words and some more beat just like the real song. but great job.
very nice.. this is my sisters youtube account but i like it, its pretty nice. next time im feeling maybe you should put your lyrics in the vid or in the info.
great pic
theloveofthesunshine 1 month ago
you can really spit words. I just wish you had hit you're own hook to strap it to. Using this you were always pushing it uphill.
Having said that - I like it for an upper take. Still prefer this for a funky jam on the low.
Keep going but matey.
yeoldie 2 months ago
word homie
Dojour 3 months ago
If people are hatin', Your doin' it right.
Dante3025 4 months ago
Love it. This is what youtube for
Dante3025 4 months ago
your pronounciation's really good, english is not my first language but i can understand you perfectly. i like it, just a little too many cuss words, you don't need to act so tough, your voice and skills will get you enough respect. take care :)
lis0xtc 5 months ago
Fuck ya
RobbinBxnkz 5 months ago
we'd take over, areal.
Sheridan1423 5 months ago
isn't there a song like this, but with the original lyrics?
twinfrei 5 months ago in playlist Remix
like this , you got style :)
1978martyng 5 months ago
good shit bro first thing the beat makes the whole song i mean the old school beat who dont love it but yuh got your flow keep at it i diggs and fuck people who hate they just mad cause ht cant do shit with a beat
dannyhurt36 6 months ago
Subscribe me for more House music!
Abonneer mij voor meer House muziek!
FunkyMusic07 6 months ago
ignorant bastards on youtube. good beat. tough to understand vocals, might be my speakers, i don't know. i played it all the way through though.
avilacarlos01 7 months ago
i love it
lisatothelee7 7 months ago
Not bad, pretty good actually. This coming from a born and raised detroiter. Keep at it.
addicted2reviews 7 months ago
not even that bad people
randyhandzor 7 months ago
'yo yo yo yo yo yo okay here we go' :|
xpowerout 8 months ago
I hope you guys no that he didnt change the instrumentals to the originals the beat is originally from DJ kool hurc, the creater and god of real hip hop.
MyVidsRockJR 8 months ago
We're not "Hating" if we say we don't like it. We just don't like it.
djsunproductions 9 months ago 28
@djsunproductions Must not be listening to the lyrics...
KazeJinn15 6 months ago
who tryna say u wak....u arent no such thing
ninnybaby1 9 months ago
Not too bad a remix:D Still prefer the original, but either way I would dance my ass off to this song in the club.
Pooky1991 9 months ago
cool
SuperWing0 10 months ago
haha 81 suckers ...
*thumbs up*
ssiso8 10 months ago
this is sum dope shit
props for Norway
ch1212 10 months ago 4
whats the song on the intro??
skatepunk1234 10 months ago
Why bother talking crap to this guy who's just putting up songs he likes? Love this song, good old school, keep them up!
opsman89 10 months ago
@areal7813
THANK YOU!!!!
FINALLY!!!!
DAMMIT!!!
SOMEBODY WHO ACTUALLY KNOWS WHAT HE IS SAYING!!!!
I H8 THE F4GG075 ON Y0UTU83 WHO CONSTANTLY TALK CRAP AT RANDOM PPOL!!!!
4ND TH3Y N3V3R GET TH3 MESSAGE THAT 1DC ABOUT WHATEVA UR FF1N PR08 IS!!!!
MrSupafly225 11 months ago
y people hating, you got flow, sounds tight
mafista 1 year ago
goood shit bro, you know why you have haters? its cause you got an old school flow and people don't recognize that shit now a days
aznable616 1 year ago
haters are whatt makes you famous soo these ppl are doinng a favor (:
xodsliceox 1 year ago
I actually really like this. Good metaphors.
HMachProductions 1 year ago
goddamn man is that you on the mic thats awsome and as far as your haters ther just jelouse cause they cant rhym like that badass keep it up
thunderbird948 1 year ago
god damn dude is that you on the mic casues your prety good man thats cool and dont lisen to the haters there just jelous cause they cant do what you do badass and keep it up
thunderbird948 1 year ago
ahha its not that bad. everyone chillll ay
HezWalshscoots 1 year ago
Definitely hearing some Slick Rick influences here? Great job, your voice works crazy well with this (pronunciation++), keep up the good work.
tabbott87 1 year ago
Yo, Sonn That Was Pretty Good, Fuck The Haters Man, Your Voice Did Sound A Lil Funky Though, But It Was Tight!
jayvee151 1 year ago
good stuff mate!
madeinamsterdam420 1 year ago
well done bro!
madeinamsterdam420 1 year ago
ur a good rapper but it didnt sound right over that instro
dambuster88 1 year ago
Hey, its a hard one coz the original is so fuckin huge!!!!!! But try and clear that from your head, and jus listen to it like a new tune........ AND ITS SICK !!!! fuckin haters couldnt mc to twinkle twinkle haha anyways gotta clear my throat V
cainedandunable 1 year ago
eyyyyy mayn its lyke epmd said u gots ta chill im fuckin luvin it man killah shit u do n im all da way down under fuck da haters love tha realists peace luv respect man
KoimaLechoN 1 year ago
Not bad man! Don't worry about the haters just keep doing your thing!
kburns2406 1 year ago
Diggin this here! You sound better than alot of these new artist coming out to me man! You got balls to do what most wont! Keep doing your thing man!
justsocool75 1 year ago
keep doing what you do
this is hype shit
saywha2003 1 year ago
perfect beat to eat some chickenwings 8D
TheKevko90 1 year ago 42
No such thing as bad publicity.
Almost 100 fucking thousand views.
jamiejensen13 1 year ago
Damn.... He's got Philly Style flo goin on.
donniesgotu 1 year ago
Damn.... He's got Philly Style rap goin on.
donniesgotu 1 year ago
yeah bwoy.
all time favourite
porndasprodukt 1 year ago
haters gonna hate
BirdmanHT07 1 year ago
dude i know im late on the conversation but i just caught this shit and dude, f*ck em. keep layin that sh!t down bruh. i thought this sh!t was tight
DMDS623 1 year ago
yo ya voice got that old school slick rick swag u GO my dude u GO fuck ur body hatin dis shit dope
DAstlACE 1 year ago
This is baller. I didnt even know it was you rapping till i saw the hater comments. This is sick nasty, bro! I'm faving this. Take it from a bboy, this beat is dope.
AznInvazn160 1 year ago
when u say let me clear my throat it sounds fukked up but otherwise i think u did a pretty good job
PhattPhilliams3 1 year ago
Nice dude!
Keep it up!
yo-yo-yo.....na-na-nana-na...ta-dada..
Gta love it ;D
ViruzB 1 year ago
The rapping is quite good but the music was shithouse, very poorly sampled and put together.
drukenhard 1 year ago
thier talkin shit cause u spit old school... strait fire, no fillers or electronic shit
spastiq28 1 year ago
Dont let the h8ters sweat u.. Stay up
Basisforstace 1 year ago
i still rip a beat if it was laminated, sick flow like your waters been contamitated.
cant spell.
listening to rhyme after that part.
shud get lyrics up for that verse.
killed it
ABOM420 1 year ago
u not bad
WEshine100 1 year ago
Whay all these cats hatin' it don't sound that bad.. Besides if this cat is free stylin then I really give it up too him. Obviously these clowns don't know the feeling of spitting your OWN shit on a track!!
Lemurai 1 year ago
yo u not bad homes nice faved it
LaughNowCryLater323 1 year ago
This is tight man
HypeChannel 1 year ago
this is cool but can you make one only with the background sound cuz it has a good riddim
malefikin12 1 year ago
sick work man
BR1AN21SON 1 year ago
nice bro
PhokusProductions 1 year ago
YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHH
CogarDM 1 year ago
i love this song
defrooze 1 year ago
This isnt to badd tbh!
BAW4EVA 1 year ago
It's raw but now gangsta, it's funky. Like The Pharcyde or the old skool stuff
sadziom 1 year ago
this was tight,fuck those haters man.You did awesome!
Emperor00id 1 year ago
I like what you've done - I remember this the first time around and its great to hear it updated.
Forget all the haters - 'those who can do those who can't just criticise'
Tumblemouseuk 1 year ago
areal,
lemme give you some honest feedback...I try to be objective. hater? NO
asskisser? NO
somewhere in between? YES
Okay, first off, it's gonna be bloody easy to sound good over that track. Just saying.
It reflects really well on your ability to find tracks that amplify your talents. But, my gramps could spit on this and get a 7/10, so me giving you a 10/10 has to be qualified.
But okay yeah. Honestly, I really think it's something special. Heres 5 things that are A+ about it:
illa5th 1 year ago
1) I think your breath control is really good. Was this 1 take? Or even, if not 1st take, are all the verses back to back? Unless you did crazy editing, I'm genuinely impressed with how it came together. Assuming this is not over-produced, then your consistency is something at sets you apart from the Charlie Browns.
illa5th 1 year ago
@illa5th
2) i'm a big fan of mid-verse rhyme. example: @ 2:13ish
i got tOO many ShOOs to ConclOOde
it's unfortunately something that ranks <<< image, these days
but rest assured that the real fans appreciate it, and that in the long run it distinguishes you from the also-rans
illa5th 1 year ago
@illa5th
3) The "Hheh-hheh until my throat is clear"
Yeah man, this was the highlight to me.
Its one thing (the most important thing though) to put bars together that sound mjusically correct, but then you gotta throw some cleverness into it, and i think this line did it. Its something that doesn't fit at all in a phoentic way, yet ABSOLUTELY fits in a storytelling way. As such...yo, it fits
illa5th 1 year ago
@illa5th
4) I really appreciate that you've made the effort to pronounce well. Alot of dogs not realize how much that matters. Sure, everyone understands you in person, but when your words get dropped over a beat, it's pretty easy for a regional dialect to morph into un-understandable.
Wonder why Nas sells better than MF Doom? cause i can understand every syllable of Nas, and MF Doom sounds like he got a mouthful of marbles.
so, keep that theme going on your next tracks, okay?
illa5th 1 year ago
@illa5th
5) Theres some legitimately impressive writing here. Most (not all, but most) bars lead well into the next one, which is my big hate on most aspiring artists. It seems like you either prepared very well, or just have a telent for it, but you've managed to put together something that could be realistically re-wrtitten as a poem and still be taken seriously. Thats a huge credit, and although i wrote this as #5), it is probably the thing i was most impressed with.
illa5th 1 year ago
@illa5th
Now i got 2 digs at u. Not meaning them as personal digs, but more "constructive criticism"
dig 1) Theres not alot of variation through this track. I mean, verse one was hype, then verse two was just as hype but kinda similar to the other one, then verse three is more of the same. I'm not really sure how to suggest better, i think it would pertain to throwing more creativity into it, whatever that means. Consider throwing something memorable into each of the 3 verses.
illa5th 1 year ago
@illa5th
dig 2)
You've basically got no punchlines. Its funny casue i normally bitch out people for having *too many* punchlines, but i think this is a track that could totally benefit from having a few. I dont (necessarily) mean a yo momma joke...but throw something that catches the ear of the listener, and do it when the beat suggests a natural pause. The "hheh hheh until my throat is clear" was a good start, now find 5 more so you can put 2 into each verse. It'll make memorable track.
illa5th 1 year ago
@illa5th
Anyways dog, hope u appreciate some (your first??) constructive criticism. Take it as the most legitimate props i can give you that i favorited this song. Peace>.
illa5th 1 year ago
MY DICK IS THROBBING TO THIS SONG
russiausa 1 year ago
"Sounds Like Hee-Haw vs. Eminem vs. ICP vs. Vanilla Ice vs. KMK vs. The CRAPPIEST Take that DJ Kool never took vs. an asthmatic donkey smoking a weeks worth of heroin/meth-laced marijuana vs. Oprah trying to rap like the Beastie Boyz. And I Love Brass Monkey!!!!!!!!!!"...Is what I would've said, but this sounds pretty decent.
D201RECORDS 1 year ago
WTF:^\
MrJfigueroa120 1 year ago
kool i like it not bad....these guys just jeliuos cuz they can't rap
tHeJaMeZsH0w 1 year ago
lol....yo?? thats sick son ...straight sick...5 stars nigga
icymanipulator75 1 year ago
this shit is hot keep up the gd work
imortalmage9 1 year ago
Original was better, but this is Ok. I guess.
symnsez14k 1 year ago
hey man i like it :) ur trying keep hip hop good not like this lil wayne gangsta crap these days!!!
jake1266 1 year ago
"I luv all mi h8rz"
LMFAO
Big up yourself la :)
jamessoulsby 1 year ago
This go too hard, never thought i'd find somebody who could spit positive like me!
7thWardBoyMike 1 year ago
oops i did it again has 2 be 5 stars...peace n greetz
BIOGRAFIE23 1 year ago
i gotta say it's 20 more times better than all the other swill out there... keep it up!!!
bwolfleg 1 year ago
mate your good dont take any shit from these haters your the future
123marcooooooo 1 year ago 33
this is fucking shit.
dallasmay22 1 year ago
sounds like boy george on crack...
7didasj 1 year ago 3
Awesome dude, love it.
neilswann80 1 year ago
i think this is crackin m8 keep up the good work people slaggin you off are only jealous your doin what they wish they could do!!!
morryrfc 1 year ago
monsta beat
BombVS 1 year ago
Heh, i liked this
0ox0ox0ox 2 years ago
nice man :D
whats the trumpet part called
cuz i know the sax is 900 number by 45 kings.
but do you know what the trumpet part?
chickenlovingdogOreo 2 years ago
@chickenlovingdogOreo hah retard its called let me clear my throat by dj kool and if you reall like the trumpet just type the name and song and write instrumental after :D and bobs your uncle fannys your aunt !:P
SeanC2k9 2 years ago
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dandan4525 2 years ago
hollywood swinging by kool and the gang
GTH8991 2 years ago
i love you <3
baker500877 1 year ago
dude that is so sick really
Gnikman33 2 years ago
LOVE IT MAN!
ricerockethunny 2 years ago
dope!
packermanfavre 2 years ago
Lyrics :D
iMixMusicProductions 2 years ago
dope stuff man , keep it real !
Gilla2oo6 2 years ago
went ham cheese n turkey.
ChampThe18 2 years ago
Haha holy shit thats an awesome flow man.
Respect876 2 years ago
youre not that bad
FunkyVagina 2 years ago
wow flattery will get u everywhere... id upload more vids cuz i have tons of new songs but my computer dont have any video software... but when the new mixtape drops i will let everyone kno
it should be some time after newyears
areal7813 2 years ago
Shit, I remember when I first listened to your songs this video had like 400 views.
jamiejensen13 2 years ago
diz song is jaamiin' very cooll!!
erazzledazzle5 2 years ago
Phenomenal for what I was expectin'
Keep it up man, great work
HardingBMG 2 years ago
not bad man. lyrics are fluid.
grabass136 2 years ago
nice job man!
d4prince 2 years ago
" Enter your text here" xD
eeeee777 2 years ago
Ripped it.
C0r3z 2 years ago
you did me a big favor with this one man it was my favorite song back in the day and its like you just gave it a spit-shine and refreshed it, so you know only a fool would contest it.
wesbecool 2 years ago
you're dope man don't spend the time to even bring up the haters. You could be the best at what you do and theres still going to be people on your dick. Ignore the shit.
Juelzsanpana 2 years ago 2
This is some good shit here man! let's keep it rollin. these lyrics are sick too
IchigoHayabusa 2 years ago 3
definitely feelin your rhymes, keep it up man.
HiphopRising 2 years ago
sick beat dude xD wasn't expecting an 09 version of a classic song. Keep it up man
amazingcybersurfer 2 years ago
this is pretty raw props check out some of my shit if u want stay up
CrakStreetTeam 2 years ago
ey bitches i got some new shit for my haters!! I Love u guys!!! u really entertain me! anyways soon as i get some video software on the p.o.s. Dell ill post up that new new for yall lamez!! all thanks goes to my supporters!
areal7813 2 years ago
crap
cvhijgyu7 2 years ago
seriously everyone needs to stop haha. you go dawg
MrFields55 2 years ago
WOW DECEMBER AINT EVEN FUCKIN HERE BITCHES. YALL KNO U LOVE ME AND IF U DONT UR DUMB. I JUST WANNA SPREAD LOVE WIT MUSIC SO FUCK U IF U DISAGREE. IM THE THE LAB RIGHT NOW COOKIN UP SOME NEW SHIT SO KEEP SHOWING ME LOVE AND ILL KEEP SHOWING YALL LOVE.
-{end transmission}-
areal7813 2 years ago
Amen!
IchigoHayabusa 2 years ago
@areal7813 you aint lying you could rip a beat even if it a was laminated so keep it up and dont let them haters get at you cuz they are the weak and powerless
P.S. love that ending!!!
wesbecool 2 years ago 2
i subed great mix, props
ThePS3Adict 2 years ago
hey man can u send me this. its SICK !! thxx :))
730799999 2 years ago
will do. im doin a mixtape now, ill set up downloads for everyone. subscribe so i can keep u posted!
areal7813 2 years ago
oh plz
1shad0ww 2 years ago
Legit cuz. i played this shit at a party i had in cleveland. shit was legit dude.
skielskiel 2 years ago
i appreciate it. i can send u some shit if u want. its urs.. all i ask is u give it to everyone u kno. DJ, Friends, Promoters... ITS URS.. 2 mixtapes droppin very soon. ill keep u posted
areal7813 2 years ago
il take a copy, for real!! send me the link when it finished man, keep it up blood
djbadboybryce 2 years ago
id say about 1000 of the 19000 veiws are mine lol, i fuckin LOVE this track! a-reals tha fuckin bomb! gimme a shout ill send you some beats, get a international collaboration goin, well done blood, keep it up!!!
djbadboybryce 2 years ago
yoo thats wuts up! ill hit u up. i got MAAADDDDDD NEW SHIT COMING... just forward me to friends or w/e u gotta do to get my words out! and that collab can happen too! yo imma shout out all my peepz on here that gave me love... imma make a song just yall!! watch!
keep in touch... i appreciate it cuzin!!
areal7813 2 years ago
(hancock) holds broken bottle, then turns head lol
indianajonesfan3 2 years ago
shut up white boy
anthony32394 2 years ago
this aimed at me? so im white now? aight... well thanks for giving me another hit, im goin for 20,000 by december so ur just another statistic bitch. but its all love, white black yellow purple green w/e!
areal7813 2 years ago
this slapss!!! love from the bay areuhhhh
briggsm 2 years ago
pretty nuts, but original is untouchable!!
commissar999 2 years ago
I like it. the original is hard to beat, but your song is pretty damn good.
ScottStrange819 2 years ago
thanks man!
areal7813 2 years ago
yes he's with Planet Oki..so u kno he got the SKILLS. fuck the haters though they just sad. but u going in!
PlanetOkiTV 2 years ago
this is dope
dont listen to the idiots who say its not
props man
Officailbboywhiteout 2 years ago
Not the right song for you but i like it
SweetBoyMix 2 years ago 2
You suck. People click on here to see if you got skills and you fail.
LunaticSqad22 2 years ago
lunitic squad? fuck you and your mom./
only reason you exist /
is cuz the trojan man wasnt doin his job.../
the bitch Alexterishi beneath me- i dont care whoever u are/
however on the topic i could cover atleast two hundred bars/
in my mind my rhymes will forever be raw/
in a battle ud get severed, id bloody residue yall.
areal7813 2 years ago
Yo, THAT WUZ ILL!! NICE JOB!!! "only reason you exist /
is cuz the trojan man wasnt doin his job.../" ROFL
Harborx 2 years ago
Ahahaha.(:
DrunkWalrus 2 years ago
Nigger
Alexterishi 2 years ago
killed it sorry but u did
ThExFonZ99 2 years ago
thanks homie.. forward it to a friend so we can get more hits!
areal7813 2 years ago
dont lie to this kid..its not good son...
Fightu35 2 years ago
honestly i sat down infront of my mic, 30 min later this is wut i came up with, and 8 months later 15,000 hits...
get off my nuts nigga
areal7813 2 years ago
more power to your voice mc.. otherwise nice!
RudeBoyAl 2 years ago
this is nice. i'm not tring to tell you that i can do better cause trust me i couldn't come close but less words and some more beat just like the real song. but great job.
Finfanatic19 2 years ago
thanks for the criticism, i will definitely keep that in mind next time! stay tuned im redoing my studio right now so i should have new songs up soon
areal7813 2 years ago
i got them shoes in blue YO MTV RAPS
SaNiggz93 2 years ago
first verse you on fire!! nice!
djbadboybryce 2 years ago
Its ok ... Instrumental versions better :)
Hard2BeatRecordsUK 2 years ago
thanks, i suggest that you go find the instrumental then cuz its easier to find that my vesion! ha syke
areal7813 2 years ago
lol
i like this :)
good job :A
Hard2BeatRecordsUK 2 years ago
very nice.. this is my sisters youtube account but i like it, its pretty nice. next time im feeling maybe you should put your lyrics in the vid or in the info.
tecgirl2010 2 years ago
mu hahahaha
sursentoic 2 years ago
please tell me this is a joke
bmas220890 2 years ago 3
why the fuck would i be joking. if u dont like my shit get the fuck on.. cuz imma keep doin this anyways..
areal7813 2 years ago
love it
great tune to shake it to...lol
thanks
codycobourg 2 years ago
I'll be sure to tell all my friends about you.
jamiejensen13 2 years ago
Mannnn I can't get over this song. you need to be famous.
jamiejensen13 2 years ago
thanks man, im gonna try to get my songs out there to be heard. i appreciate ur support
areal7813 2 years ago
Great job man!
jamiejensen13 2 years ago
lolt hats bombing haha nice man!
luffybey 2 years ago
i do 20 airchair jumps of this song
VanMinSooLee 2 years ago
splashii
flybaby92 2 years ago
not bad, sweet MF doom shoes.
AHole0 2 years ago