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  • great pic

  • you can really spit words. I just wish you had hit you're own hook to strap it to. Using this you were always pushing it uphill.

    Having said that - I like it for an upper take. Still prefer this for a funky jam on the low.

    Keep going but matey.

  • word homie

  • If people are hatin', Your doin' it right.

  • Love it. This is what youtube for

  • your pronounciation's really good, english is not my first language but i can understand you perfectly. i like it, just a little too many cuss words, you don't need to act so tough, your voice and skills will get you enough respect. take care :)

  • Fuck ya

  • we'd take over, areal.

  • isn't there a song like this, but with the original lyrics?

  • like this , you got style :)

  • good shit bro first thing the beat makes the whole song i mean the old school beat who dont love it but yuh got your flow keep at it i diggs and fuck people who hate they just mad cause ht cant do shit with a beat

  • Subscribe me for more House music!

    Abonneer mij voor meer House muziek!

  • ignorant bastards on youtube. good beat. tough to understand vocals, might be my speakers, i don't know. i played it all the way through though.

  • i love it

  • Not bad, pretty good actually. This coming from a born and raised detroiter. Keep at it.

  • not even that bad people

    

  • 'yo yo yo yo yo yo okay here we go' :|

  • I hope you guys no that he didnt change the instrumentals to the originals the beat is originally from DJ kool hurc, the creater and god of real hip hop.

  • We're not "Hating" if we say we don't like it. We just don't like it.

  • @djsunproductions Must not be listening to the lyrics...

  • who tryna say u wak....u arent no such thing

  • Not too bad a remix:D Still prefer the original, but either way I would dance my ass off to this song in the club.

  • cool

  • haha 81 suckers ...

    *thumbs up*

  • this is sum dope shit

    props for Norway

  • whats the song on the intro??

  • Why bother talking crap to this guy who's just putting up songs he likes? Love this song, good old school, keep them up!

  • @areal7813

    THANK YOU!!!!

    FINALLY!!!!

    DAMMIT!!!

    SOMEBODY WHO ACTUALLY KNOWS WHAT HE IS SAYING!!!!

    I H8 THE F4GG075 ON Y0UTU83 WHO CONSTANTLY TALK CRAP AT RANDOM PPOL!!!!

    4ND TH3Y N3V3R GET TH3 MESSAGE THAT 1DC ABOUT WHATEVA UR FF1N PR08 IS!!!!

  • y people hating, you got flow, sounds tight

  • goood shit bro, you know why you have haters? its cause you got an old school flow and people don't recognize that shit now a days

  • haters are whatt makes you famous soo these ppl are doinng a favor (:

  • I actually really like this. Good metaphors.

  • goddamn man is that you on the mic thats awsome and as far as your haters ther just jelouse cause they cant rhym like that badass keep it up

  • god damn dude is that you on the mic casues your prety good man thats cool and dont lisen to the haters there just jelous cause they cant do what you do badass and keep it up

  • ahha its not that bad. everyone chillll ay

  • Definitely hearing some Slick Rick influences here? Great job, your voice works crazy well with this (pronunciation++), keep up the good work.

  • Yo, Sonn That Was Pretty Good, Fuck The Haters Man, Your Voice Did Sound A Lil Funky Though, But It Was Tight!

  • good stuff mate!

  • well done bro!

  • ur a good rapper but it didnt sound right over that instro

  • Hey, its a hard one coz the original is so fuckin huge!!!!!! But try and clear that from your head, and jus listen to it like a new tune........ AND ITS SICK !!!! fuckin haters couldnt mc to twinkle twinkle haha anyways gotta clear my throat V

  • eyyyyy mayn its lyke epmd said u gots ta chill im fuckin luvin it man killah shit u do n im all da way down under fuck da haters love tha realists peace luv respect man

  • Not bad man! Don't worry about the haters just keep doing your thing!

  • Diggin this here! You sound better than alot of these new artist coming out to me man! You got balls to do what most wont! Keep doing your thing man!

  • keep doing what you do

    this is hype shit

  • perfect beat to eat some chickenwings 8D

  • No such thing as bad publicity.

    Almost 100 fucking thousand views.

  • Damn.... He's got Philly Style flo goin on.

  • Damn.... He's got Philly Style rap goin on.

  • yeah bwoy.

    all time favourite

  • haters gonna hate

  • dude i know im late on the conversation but i just caught this shit and dude, f*ck em. keep layin that sh!t down bruh. i thought this sh!t was tight

  • yo ya voice got that old school slick rick swag u GO my dude u GO fuck ur body hatin dis shit dope

  • This is baller. I didnt even know it was you rapping till i saw the hater comments. This is sick nasty, bro! I'm faving this. Take it from a bboy, this beat is dope.

  • when u say let me clear my throat it sounds fukked up but otherwise i think u did a pretty good job

  • Nice dude!

    Keep it up!

    yo-yo-yo.....na-na-nana-na...t­a-dada..

    Gta love it ;D

  • The rapping is quite good but the music was shithouse, very poorly sampled and put together.

  • thier talkin shit cause u spit old school... strait fire, no fillers or electronic shit

  • Dont let the h8ters sweat u.. Stay up

  • i still rip a beat if it was laminated, sick flow like your waters been contamitated.

    cant spell.

    listening to rhyme after that part.

    shud get lyrics up for that verse.

    killed it

  • u not bad

  • Whay all these cats hatin' it don't sound that bad.. Besides if this cat is free stylin then I really give it up too him. Obviously these clowns don't know the feeling of spitting your OWN shit on a track!!

  • yo u not bad homes nice faved it

  • This is tight man

  • this is cool but can you make one only with the background sound cuz it has a good riddim

  • sick work man

  • nice bro

  • YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHH

  • i love this song

  • This isnt to badd tbh!

  • It's raw but now gangsta, it's funky. Like The Pharcyde or the old skool stuff

  • this was tight,fuck those haters man.You did awesome!

  • I like what you've done - I remember this the first time around and its great to hear it updated.

    Forget all the haters - 'those who can do those who can't just criticise'

  • areal,

    lemme give you some honest feedback...I try to be objective. hater? NO

    asskisser? NO

    somewhere in between? YES

    Okay, first off, it's gonna be bloody easy to sound good over that track. Just saying.

    It reflects really well on your ability to find tracks that amplify your talents. But, my gramps could spit on this and get a 7/10, so me giving you a 10/10 has to be qualified.

    But okay yeah. Honestly, I really think it's something special. Heres 5 things that are A+ about it:

  • 1) I think your breath control is really good. Was this 1 take? Or even, if not 1st take, are all the verses back to back? Unless you did crazy editing, I'm genuinely impressed with how it came together. Assuming this is not over-produced, then your consistency is something at sets you apart from the Charlie Browns.

  • @illa5th

    2) i'm a big fan of mid-verse rhyme. example: @ 2:13ish

    i got tOO many ShOOs to ConclOOde

    it's unfortunately something that ranks <<< image, these days

    but rest assured that the real fans appreciate it, and that in the long run it distinguishes you from the also-rans

  • @illa5th

    3) The "Hheh-hheh until my throat is clear"

    Yeah man, this was the highlight to me.

    Its one thing (the most important thing though) to put bars together that sound mjusically correct, but then you gotta throw some cleverness into it, and i think this line did it. Its something that doesn't fit at all in a phoentic way, yet ABSOLUTELY fits in a storytelling way. As such...yo, it fits

  • @illa5th

    4) I really appreciate that you've made the effort to pronounce well. Alot of dogs not realize how much that matters. Sure, everyone understands you in person, but when your words get dropped over a beat, it's pretty easy for a regional dialect to morph into un-understandable.

    Wonder why Nas sells better than MF Doom? cause i can understand every syllable of Nas, and MF Doom sounds like he got a mouthful of marbles.

    so, keep that theme going on your next tracks, okay?

  • @illa5th

    5) Theres some legitimately impressive writing here. Most (not all, but most) bars lead well into the next one, which is my big hate on most aspiring artists. It seems like you either prepared very well, or just have a telent for it, but you've managed to put together something that could be realistically re-wrtitten as a poem and still be taken seriously. Thats a huge credit, and although i wrote this as #5), it is probably the thing i was most impressed with.

  • @illa5th

    Now i got 2 digs at u. Not meaning them as personal digs, but more "constructive criticism"

    dig 1) Theres not alot of variation through this track.  I mean, verse one was hype, then verse two was just as hype but kinda similar to the other one, then verse three is more of the same. I'm not really sure how to suggest better, i think it would pertain to throwing more creativity into it, whatever that means. Consider throwing something memorable into each of the 3 verses.

  • @illa5th

    dig 2)

    You've basically got no punchlines. Its funny casue i normally bitch out people for having *too many* punchlines, but i think this is a track that could totally benefit from having a few. I dont (necessarily) mean a yo momma joke...but throw something that catches the ear of the listener, and do it when the beat suggests a natural pause. The "hheh hheh until my throat is clear" was a good start, now find 5 more so you can put 2 into each verse. It'll make memorable track.

  • @illa5th

    Anyways dog, hope u appreciate some (your first??) constructive criticism. Take it as the most legitimate props i can give you that i favorited this song. Peace>.

  • MY DICK IS THROBBING TO THIS SONG

  • "Sounds Like Hee-Haw vs. Eminem vs. ICP vs. Vanilla Ice vs. KMK vs. The CRAPPIEST Take that DJ Kool never took vs. an asthmatic donkey smoking a weeks worth of heroin/meth-laced marijuana vs. Oprah trying to rap like the Beastie Boyz. And I Love Brass Monkey!!!!!!!!!!"...Is what I would've said, but this sounds pretty decent.

  • WTF:^\

  • kool i like it not bad....these guys just jeliuos cuz they can't rap

  • lol....yo?? thats sick son ...straight sick...5 stars nigga

  • this shit is hot keep up the gd work

  • Original was better, but this is Ok. I guess.

  • hey man i like it :) ur trying keep hip hop good not like this lil wayne gangsta crap these days!!!

  • "I luv all mi h8rz"

    LMFAO

    Big up yourself la :)

  • This go too hard, never thought i'd find somebody who could spit positive like me!

  • oops i did it again has 2 be 5 stars...peace n greetz

  • i gotta say it's 20 more times better than all the other swill out there... keep it up!!!

  • mate your good dont take any shit from these haters your the future

  • this is fucking shit.

  • sounds like boy george on crack...

  • Awesome dude, love it.

  • i think this is crackin m8 keep up the good work people slaggin you off are only jealous your doin what they wish they could do!!!

  • monsta beat

  • Heh, i liked this

  • nice man :D

    whats the trumpet part called

    cuz i know the sax is 900 number by 45 kings.

    but do you know what the trumpet part?

  • @chickenlovingdogOreo hah retard its called let me clear my throat by dj kool and if you reall like the trumpet just type the name and song and write instrumental after :D and bobs your uncle fannys your aunt !:P

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  • hollywood swinging by kool and the gang

  • i love you <3

  • dude that is so sick really

  • LOVE IT MAN!

  • dope!

  • Lyrics :D

  • dope stuff man , keep it real !

  • went ham cheese n turkey.

  • Haha holy shit thats an awesome flow man.

  • youre not that bad

  • wow flattery will get u everywhere... id upload more vids cuz i have tons of new songs but my computer dont have any video software... but when the new mixtape drops i will let everyone kno

    it should be some time after newyears

  • Shit, I remember when I first listened to your songs this video had like 400 views.

  • diz song is jaamiin' very cooll!!

  • Phenomenal for what I was expectin'

    Keep it up man, great work

  • not bad man. lyrics are fluid.

  • nice job man!

  • " Enter your text here" xD

  • Ripped it.

  • you did me a big favor with this one man it was my favorite song back in the day and its like you just gave it a spit-shine and refreshed it, so you know only a fool would contest it.

  • you're dope man don't spend the time to even bring up the haters. You could be the best at what you do and theres still going to be people on your dick. Ignore the shit.

  • This is some good shit here man! let's keep it rollin. these lyrics are sick too

  • definitely feelin your rhymes, keep it up man.

  • sick beat dude xD wasn't expecting an 09 version of a classic song. Keep it up man

  • this is pretty raw props check out some of my shit if u want stay up

  • ey bitches i got some new shit for my haters!! I Love u guys!!! u really entertain me! anyways soon as i get some video software on the p.o.s. Dell ill post up that new new for yall lamez!! all thanks goes to my supporters!

  • crap

  • seriously everyone needs to stop haha. you go dawg

  • WOW DECEMBER AINT EVEN FUCKIN HERE BITCHES. YALL KNO U LOVE ME AND IF U DONT UR DUMB. I JUST WANNA SPREAD LOVE WIT MUSIC SO FUCK U IF U DISAGREE. IM THE THE LAB RIGHT NOW COOKIN UP SOME NEW SHIT SO KEEP SHOWING ME LOVE AND ILL KEEP SHOWING YALL LOVE.

    -{end transmission}-

  • Amen!

  • @areal7813 you aint lying you could rip a beat even if it a was laminated so keep it up and dont let them haters get at you cuz they are the weak and powerless

    P.S. love that ending!!!

  • i subed great mix, props

  • hey man can u send me this. its SICK !! thxx :))

  • will do. im doin a mixtape now, ill set up downloads for everyone. subscribe so i can keep u posted!

  • oh plz

  • Legit cuz. i played this shit at a party i had in cleveland. shit was legit dude.

  • i appreciate it. i can send u some shit if u want. its urs.. all i ask is u give it to everyone u kno. DJ, Friends, Promoters... ITS URS.. 2 mixtapes droppin very soon. ill keep u posted

  • il take a copy, for real!! send me the link when it finished man, keep it up blood

  • id say about 1000 of the 19000 veiws are mine lol, i fuckin LOVE this track! a-reals tha fuckin bomb! gimme a shout ill send you some beats, get a international collaboration goin, well done blood, keep it up!!!

  • yoo thats wuts up! ill hit u up. i got MAAADDDDDD NEW SHIT COMING... just forward me to friends or w/e u gotta do to get my words out! and that collab can happen too! yo imma shout out all my peepz on here that gave me love... imma make a song just yall!! watch!

    keep in touch... i appreciate it cuzin!!

  • (hancock) holds broken bottle, then turns head lol

  • shut up white boy

  • this aimed at me? so im white now? aight... well thanks for giving me another hit, im goin for 20,000 by december so ur just another statistic bitch. but its all love, white black yellow purple green w/e!

  • this slapss!!! love from the bay areuhhhh

  • pretty nuts, but original is untouchable!!

  • I like it. the original is hard to beat, but your song is pretty damn good.

  • thanks man!

  • yes he's with Planet Oki..so u kno he got the SKILLS. fuck the haters though they just sad. but u going in!

  • this is dope

    dont listen to the idiots who say its not

    props man

  • Not the right song for you but i like it

  • You suck. People click on here to see if you got skills and you fail.

  • lunitic squad? fuck you and your mom./

    only reason you exist /

    is cuz the trojan man wasnt doin his job.../

    the bitch Alexterishi beneath me- i dont care whoever u are/

    however on the topic i could cover atleast two hundred bars/

    in my mind my rhymes will forever be raw/

    in a battle ud get severed, id bloody residue yall.

  • Yo, THAT WUZ ILL!! NICE JOB!!! "only reason you exist /

    is cuz the trojan man wasnt doin his job.../" ROFL

  • Ahahaha.(:

  • Nigger

  • killed it sorry but u did

  • thanks homie.. forward it to a friend so we can get more hits!

  • dont lie to this kid..its not good son...

  • honestly i sat down infront of my mic, 30 min later this is wut i came up with, and 8 months later 15,000 hits...

    get off my nuts nigga

  • more power to your voice mc.. otherwise nice!

  • this is nice. i'm not tring to tell you that i can do better cause trust me i couldn't come close but less words and some more beat just like the real song. but great job.

  • thanks for the criticism, i will definitely keep that in mind next time! stay tuned im redoing my studio right now so i should have new songs up soon

  • i got them shoes in blue YO MTV RAPS

  • first verse you on fire!! nice!

  • Its ok ... Instrumental versions better :)

  • thanks, i suggest that you go find the instrumental then cuz its easier to find that my vesion! ha syke

  • lol

    i like this :)

    good job :A

  • very nice.. this is my sisters youtube account but i like it, its pretty nice. next time im feeling maybe you should put your lyrics in the vid or in the info.

  • mu hahahaha

  • please tell me this is a joke

  • why the fuck would i be joking. if u dont like my shit get the fuck on.. cuz imma keep doin this anyways..

  • love it

    great tune to shake it to...lol

    thanks

  • I'll be sure to tell all my friends about you.

  • Mannnn I can't get over this song. you need to be famous.

  • thanks man, im gonna try to get my songs out there to be heard. i appreciate ur support

  • Great job man!

  • lolt hats bombing haha nice man!

  • i do 20 airchair jumps of this song

  • splashii

  • not bad, sweet MF doom shoes.