sorry man but im not feelin it. dont get me wrong, the lyrics are good but i dont like the beat and flow. but thats just me. constructive criticism my friend. just work on your flow.
you it takes years to get decent at this....you got about 3-4 or before i'd listen to anything you do...the production is nice though...keep doin' ya' thing...first verse coo' second verse garbo...
musical genius at its finest. i love the vocals, josh groban would envy you for your beautiful voice. the instrumentals are something else that can just blow your mind. steve vai, joe satriani, yngwie malmsteen, watch out, youre about to be out done by the instrumental genius of kid cash, and crisco. and think about it, anyone with the name of a cooking oil {being crisco} sounds to me like they are out of everyones league musically.
Dis nigga say get holy like a pretcher or get holey like some doughnuts. Aye dis go hard yall just need to do better on mix n mastering.......Other den that dis shit was hot
damn man, so many garbage artists trying to come up on youtube has dumbed down the game, honestly i would not be surprised that it doesnt destroy the rap/hip hop gamecompletely. Point being is i cant even take any of you "rappers" serious because what every amatuer has put out on you tube has been absolute garbage and i got no love for ya.
only gods breathe, love is the answer hate is the question answer the question then breathe. nefrotite, well versed shakespear every human ryme, cleopatra and antone, ooOOoo julius favorite no middle name, julius ceaser, jxc.
god before mortal all mortals through body can give respect wehonor eight chinese gang move qi, unripeorange ambrosiabarkmagnolia bark 1-7 law of attraction feather a lawyer slate clean slater jxc heavy vowels, all to clepatra and antone wellversedshakespear clara barker aminors case social studies human animal kingdom to dat kill trust truth is a cloud drinking flower (water) mountain men provide warmth peguses air and 12 feet tall unicorns in line underwater no rice noodle dreem eat tofu beans
its alright.. BEATZ SICK! lyrics are almost there, but not fully. not even Nxt t us? did u just want tto rhyme? pick up ya lyricz too dat beatz too loud
yeaa man very cool but the thing is ........ i reckon yu need to be more confident and take rap a bit serious... i know this is good... but yu need to put pressure or extra work on some words when representing .. like yu no.... and yeaa jus one more thing
search this vid of mine comment on what yu think of it...?
actually not bad at all...man its real hard to make it in the rap game. thier's way to many rappers out there doin the same thang your doin. sounds like you got the potential. i think you needs to step up yo game. you realy needs to cetch peeps atention. i.g; lil wayne, daddy yankee, mase....nah mean? originality in the lyrics and beat. rappers gonna have to come up with somthin diferent to ketch peeps attention....keep up the good work!
Beter then the usual shit I get sent one here where some dudes they be sayin the samn shit over & over again.
Needs ta be cleaned up a lil, ya know, but it damn sure wasn't bad. & idt you sound like fab, But yer voice do kinda blend in tho, try ta make yourself stand out a lil more.
guys why always fricken hate..i want to see any of you RECORD..not write..RECORD a rap..it isnt as easy as you think..its not his fault he sounds like another rapper..and you guys like fab..why hate him..if he sounds like him..whats the problem..i aint a fan of the whole rap music that talks about being the best or gettin money..im into Christian rap, but i give him credit.
Is this what u hit me up for? You sound like a knock off Fabolous. i stay in houston and almost every new rapper here sounds the same or just chops it and screws it. we need something fresh and real thats why i stay listening to immortal technique. he will never go commercial
and overall delivery is so played out. You have good song structure but the substance is lacking and you sound like you literally rolled out of bed, use more wordplay and rap with more passion and I'm sure you can get a million hits,stay up.
its gud but needs more bass
owezyboy 8 months ago
yo b u ate dis bytch and fuck all d's lame azz haters let them do dey job my nigga do yo shyt
cjqb810 1 year ago
allright people here's the deal.
for every message he send to you you copy and paste this message to 5 other videos.
so if he send you 1 message you copy paste this 5 times if he send 2 you copy paste 10 times.
do mind 1 on his channel page and the rest onto his videos...
p.s. cbarne ur a bitch
mwahisgoed 1 year ago
yo daw type cat piss funk check out da shit den type cool hand juice
juicybadd 1 year ago
da wad up
juicybadd 1 year ago
SOUND LIKE FAB
driveru2 1 year ago
this is good i like it keep doing you.
2pac2pac 2 years ago
It's Aight.
ibroooow 2 years ago
good work!
XXLParazitul 2 years ago
purty good mann thz shyyt rite hur is amzinn
locomaniacXD 2 years ago
yo crytopmogmv
Chaser780 2 years ago
It's ok, didn't like it as much as I'm On E
this is just-to put it bluntly- boring
a19791a 2 years ago
lyrics good beat not so good i love your other songs tho
amberoramby 2 years ago
ur other trax r betta..I sorry nigga but not feeling this 1 u feel me.. Just different beat. But u good dawg keep it goin..
-B.I.G. C
rcdrager 2 years ago
lil gangsta shit !
Ronaldinhox9 2 years ago 3
sorry man but im not feelin it. dont get me wrong, the lyrics are good but i dont like the beat and flow. but thats just me. constructive criticism my friend. just work on your flow.
-ryan
rydrag 2 years ago 2
Nice!
walkingblind06 2 years ago
hell yea! you gonna pop up rite off da internet at diz rate!
bigshot779 2 years ago
pretty sick
SkateOblivion 2 years ago 2
dis decent i like it
Stripes1231 2 years ago 2
get a new sound
maxmegatron1 2 years ago
:) Nice dud !!!!
robobot35 2 years ago 3
kool
RoseRune 2 years ago 2
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CHYNAHDOLL10 2 years ago
not bad
tentyptypa20 2 years ago
yea dis junt bumpin. tht beat go to hard!!
connected901 2 years ago 2
I peeped the videos...yall keep on doin what y'all doin...
2PARAGON 2 years ago 3
you it takes years to get decent at this....you got about 3-4 or before i'd listen to anything you do...the production is nice though...keep doin' ya' thing...first verse coo' second verse garbo...
2PARAGON 2 years ago
did u check out the feature vid
cbarne22 2 years ago
need to talk a bit faster
beelzmon 2 years ago
nice
johncena261995 2 years ago
wtf this dude stole my old name
smokush 2 years ago
U need to work on your delivery... N the beat don't have that bounce to it...Keep workin tho
heat313 2 years ago
load of shit
2k7duffy2k7 2 years ago
Thats some straight shit! Keep it strong. Be careful though, don't turn fake. Keep it real.
Charlie121387 2 years ago
cah
speedy04boy 2 years ago
shits tight, word to kidd cash, fucking lyrical genius, keep goin hard.
mmanitro 2 years ago
damn i think yall are good shit go to interscope
gzac95 2 years ago
wtf is this shit?
teamforteress 2 years ago
lol
mikesdjftr 2 years ago
all nice my bro...... from the fuckin RSA....rAp on :)
garadup75 2 years ago
good shit dont worry about these fucking haters fuck them keep on rocking these niggas. ull get big soon
123ninolover 2 years ago
thanks
cbarne22 2 years ago
fuckin whack
focus6637 2 years ago
:|...:-??....:-?....mmm.....LoL?
kissutonight 2 years ago
shit nigga
fifa3008 2 years ago
too slow
the lyrics are okay but step up the rapping
japbyjap 2 years ago
not bad for home made, but this song has been done 600 times over. music is so unoriginal these days.
Ketchum09 2 years ago
whats the original?
2pac2pac 2 years ago
nice song
32Bestfriendsforever 2 years ago
put up the instrumental cuz this sucks ass with you on it
imnotasin07 2 years ago 2
ahaha nice 1
rethedred 2 years ago
thumbs up man. i like that kinda rap.
SouthRapids 2 years ago
this is preety dope
staurtway79 2 years ago
sick instrumentals bruh! :) Where's the mixtape?...
maharv23 2 years ago
haha
ptsocr 2 years ago
nice
danideedanielle 2 years ago
niice
makav3lirise 2 years ago
pretty sick pretty sick i give you a 5 star 4 da sick ass beat
hal0warrior117 2 years ago
musical genius at its finest. i love the vocals, josh groban would envy you for your beautiful voice. the instrumentals are something else that can just blow your mind. steve vai, joe satriani, yngwie malmsteen, watch out, youre about to be out done by the instrumental genius of kid cash, and crisco. and think about it, anyone with the name of a cooking oil {being crisco} sounds to me like they are out of everyones league musically.
marty051892 2 years ago
mozart-esque if you may say maself
dchs11 2 years ago
@dchs11 youre right, but whatever you say, this guy is a musical genius
marty051892 2 years ago
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FrancisTaylor253 2 years ago
the beat go hard gave ya five stars
lilstunna41 2 years ago
feeln the beat too
lezzgetit 2 years ago
i like it:) nice!
ZHANiB3K 2 years ago
yo this dope ass fuck, especially the beat! what program?
broadcastmyass4u 2 years ago
im the author and the editor love that
adreannahambygoddess 2 years ago
wow sounds like fabulous but worst......
hoodie112 2 years ago
hahah
EcFXSN1P3RX 2 years ago
cool
MrSpirit19 2 years ago
Garbage.
pkinredt 2 years ago
Dis nigga say get holy like a pretcher or get holey like some doughnuts. Aye dis go hard yall just need to do better on mix n mastering.......Other den that dis shit was hot
GVCNI66A 2 years ago
dat line was dope
casplash4 2 years ago
cbarne GOOD:P<3
MrLearTt 2 years ago
gonna buy some fried chicken, some biscuits.. maybe put some grrraavvyyyy on it playboi BLLLLLLLLL, birdman playboi
rastaangel 2 years ago
makes me wanna sleep
damn what a bad voice..
go eat some chicken
WorthyVideos 2 years ago
legal gostei
cleiacandeo 2 years ago
Not bad, but try to do your own thing, don't try to sound like everyone else.
Skeletine 2 years ago
not bad dude
matiassanchez13 2 years ago
this shit is garbage
xander2541 2 years ago
this is some good shiz keep goin
JasperAndEmmettLover 2 years ago
Nice!!! brb I gotta doo doo
fw6766 2 years ago
sound great but one think you voice sounds to like lil soundin make it a lil louder tweek it a lil bit add something besides that i love it>!!!!
APupAndMushMush 2 years ago
big ups homie
UndergroundResidents 2 years ago
Something doesn't sound right about this song.. dunno what
Jutey1337 2 years ago
It's the beat man, it's too "busy".
JackBursh 2 years ago
this shit is waak man
royjones786 2 years ago 2
damn man, so many garbage artists trying to come up on youtube has dumbed down the game, honestly i would not be surprised that it doesnt destroy the rap/hip hop gamecompletely. Point being is i cant even take any of you "rappers" serious because what every amatuer has put out on you tube has been absolute garbage and i got no love for ya.
rrmmt23 2 years ago
if u like hip hop then check out my feat vid. .. common like stuff ya dig
cbarne22 2 years ago
only gods breathe, love is the answer hate is the question answer the question then breathe. nefrotite, well versed shakespear every human ryme, cleopatra and antone, ooOOoo julius favorite no middle name, julius ceaser, jxc.
swebuterc 2 years ago 2
god before mortal all mortals through body can give respect wehonor eight chinese gang move qi, unripeorange ambrosiabarkmagnolia bark 1-7 law of attraction feather a lawyer slate clean slater jxc heavy vowels, all to clepatra and antone wellversedshakespear clara barker aminors case social studies human animal kingdom to dat kill trust truth is a cloud drinking flower (water) mountain men provide warmth peguses air and 12 feet tall unicorns in line underwater no rice noodle dreem eat tofu beans
swebuterc 2 years ago
shiteeeeeeee
sellerz123 2 years ago
not feelin this
liverpoolmassive 2 years ago
it's iight the beat is sic but the rythms ain't as good
Mizz19Boo 2 years ago
The lyrics are okay but it's got a tight beat.
KILLERONROAD 2 years ago
Well, it's not my kind of music... But I sure can see it's appeal...
swingcity7 2 years ago
very nicee
eyemanidiot 2 years ago
this is sick(:
fangster88 2 years ago
FINEE SOONG(=!
qekitapicosa 2 years ago
im sorry man. im not feeling it.
rydrag 2 years ago
this has a mad cool beat!!!
JoniMae2000 2 years ago
cool
Pieperson277 2 years ago
nice beats mayne
wohzehtecomba 2 years ago
NICE FUCKING SHIT
TEKONE353 2 years ago
ouuuuuuu yeeah
Leidyseah 2 years ago
it has a catchy beat
iluvmydogfrvr77 2 years ago
u got some nice beats out there
realkewlmann 2 years ago
Good song!
Sdzamarron 2 years ago
nice song i just dont like rap that much
dshark69 2 years ago
hi;)
1alexandra12 2 years ago
ok very good
juanluparkour 2 years ago
Simpa :)
titlou94 2 years ago
nice one bro, give this a shot at something like E.M.I, they made a contract wit my dad, so dis should go right in their bank ;)
nice one man.
micromind1337 2 years ago
awsome beat
djnoreg 2 years ago
Madd!!! XD
MissLavo92 2 years ago
Niice boii... thankz for sending the viideo... xoxo
MissLavo92 2 years ago
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CherryPlix 2 years ago
i kinda like it xD
lokofox69 2 years ago
i liked all of it. very good dude. send me more man.
stupidvoodoodoll 2 years ago
Yeah, nice ;)
Marcelaeminem 2 years ago
sweet as bruv lol your really good
georgiegirlxo 2 years ago
Once you become famous, REMEMBER ME AND LEND ME MONEY!
TheVanillaChapstick 2 years ago
Thank you for sending this so me. Its very nice.
ARCANEWIND1 2 years ago
i can't wait.... can't wait until you get signed
rexandmax 2 years ago
Pretty C00l.
LibyasSon 2 years ago
i dont like the beat., more practise., your almost near.,=)
sweetmemories14 2 years ago
not bad brahh
jneubert21 2 years ago
nigga go bak to tha guttahhhh
mahawj1 2 years ago
nice song...
SamagonEmcee 2 years ago
its alright.. BEATZ SICK! lyrics are almost there, but not fully. not even Nxt t us? did u just want tto rhyme? pick up ya lyricz too dat beatz too loud
Bano04 2 years ago
its hot! loven it!
Jashley4eva14qz 2 years ago
yeaa man very cool but the thing is ........ i reckon yu need to be more confident and take rap a bit serious... i know this is good... but yu need to put pressure or extra work on some words when representing .. like yu no.... and yeaa jus one more thing
search this vid of mine comment on what yu think of it...?
Fifa 09 Great Skils Great Talent
luckyLagolas 2 years ago
u is good
Selenafan0998 2 years ago
nice!
shannonandjessica1 2 years ago
Fucking terrible! Kill yourself.
yootubeisforfags 2 years ago 2
amateur
lbcitezen 2 years ago
really terrible listen to big L bro
MoMerks 2 years ago
i like da flow and the beat... the chorus(guess dats wat its called) was tight wit da predator....
uthkairi 2 years ago
nice!
Hondalad19 2 years ago
aint very clear kinda like soulja boy even. but fuck, if u make it more clear and the flow is already whacked dude keep it up. STEP IT UPP!!
reducingASH 2 years ago
ya this shit hot
joesephburns 2 years ago
lol is dat u singing it?
lol if it is u dats alsome
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RappingIsThePriority 2 years ago
nice i lv it!
TheEmodawn 2 years ago
this is shit get off of youtube and hang yourself jungle bunny
Whisper95Productions 2 years ago
I like it. Nice flow.
Satonica 2 years ago
I like this sound man, it's different and it's good 5/5
LocalRailfan 2 years ago
monkey
ohbucki53 2 years ago
Its really good.
MissPopp 2 years ago
actually not bad at all...man its real hard to make it in the rap game. thier's way to many rappers out there doin the same thang your doin. sounds like you got the potential. i think you needs to step up yo game. you realy needs to cetch peeps atention. i.g; lil wayne, daddy yankee, mase....nah mean? originality in the lyrics and beat. rappers gonna have to come up with somthin diferent to ketch peeps attention....keep up the good work!
fabalis1218 2 years ago
na run wey wit da vmax n Rrule da best from trinidad dis fell have non on Vmax!!!!!!!!! noooooooooooooooooooooo
XpliciTTRecords 2 years ago
focking nice dude
keep us this good work man
4BadKarma 2 years ago
Shit was pretty good.
Beter then the usual shit I get sent one here where some dudes they be sayin the samn shit over & over again.
Needs ta be cleaned up a lil, ya know, but it damn sure wasn't bad. & idt you sound like fab, But yer voice do kinda blend in tho, try ta make yourself stand out a lil more.
Apopkalipss 2 years ago
true dat
bolen50 2 years ago
yoo the beat is freaking awsome ur sounds is cool too , lyrics aint that gd tho
soo let's say 3/5
gd job!
3bod1234 2 years ago
bull fucking shit man
swedoj2 2 years ago
sounds like somebody just woke you up.
ya you got money. great.
ion1984 2 years ago
whoa i lykez diz ..diz clean du!!!!!!
TarynLovezMichael 2 years ago
NICEE!
Nmarryat24 2 years ago
guys why always fricken hate..i want to see any of you RECORD..not write..RECORD a rap..it isnt as easy as you think..its not his fault he sounds like another rapper..and you guys like fab..why hate him..if he sounds like him..whats the problem..i aint a fan of the whole rap music that talks about being the best or gettin money..im into Christian rap, but i give him credit.
CalebL603 2 years ago 2
Is this what u hit me up for? You sound like a knock off Fabolous. i stay in houston and almost every new rapper here sounds the same or just chops it and screws it. we need something fresh and real thats why i stay listening to immortal technique. he will never go commercial
MAFIX210 2 years ago
nice
scarman1999 2 years ago
Fuck all ya Haters, he is hot !
shalawsorchi 2 years ago
fag lol
Expyallodoshus 2 years ago
This shit is hot yo !
shalawsorchi 2 years ago
your can rap but your style,aura,demeaner
and overall delivery is so played out. You have good song structure but the substance is lacking and you sound like you literally rolled out of bed, use more wordplay and rap with more passion and I'm sure you can get a million hits,stay up.
MrNemy86 2 years ago
you spammed my youtube mail to show me this? this is wack man, sound like fabolous with a speech impairment rhyming on crappy ass khalad beat.
Magikano 2 years ago
LMAO!!!!! WOW
cbarne22 2 years ago
aye man fuck the haterz...dis shit go hard !
fukkarape 2 years ago
YOU PRETTY GOOD BRUH
Jeffeezy23 2 years ago
like Rare HiDefChiCity Vid thou
papezet 2 years ago
what is this shit is it rap or lazy guy talkin? sorry dude but don't like the new wave in rap it makes me sick solja boy lil wayne crap no thanks!
papezet 2 years ago
oww..... at least he'd tried.
33a7x 2 years ago
yeaah good men continu i like da
YakuzAkiler 2 years ago
great song bro:=)
66Money66 2 years ago
that was really good
tarraye12 2 years ago
this is sum raw shit!!!!!
HotHoes100 2 years ago