Did you read the play before you did this? Lizzie is upset, devastated by how her brother treats her. In the part following this monologue she's crying because she doesn't think she's pretty. I'm sorry, but though well-done, this isn' how the scene should go. You changed a very important word. She says 'how it feels to say "husband". This play is set when a woman's expected to find a husband. The word HUSBAND is the most important word in the monologue and should not have been changed..
Yeah, where did you get this monologue? I'm just curious, because there are definately some things added and changed from the original.
angelkat3050 2 months ago
Did you read the play before you did this? Lizzie is upset, devastated by how her brother treats her. In the part following this monologue she's crying because she doesn't think she's pretty. I'm sorry, but though well-done, this isn' how the scene should go. You changed a very important word. She says 'how it feels to say "husband". This play is set when a woman's expected to find a husband. The word HUSBAND is the most important word in the monologue and should not have been changed..
WinningDirector 4 months ago