Frame The Motion: If only you were lonely

[jenniferiley87]

The instrumentals are really really beautiful and your voice works well with the piano.

I think you should stop worry about rhyming so much in your lyrics. Try writing the music before writing the lyrics.

Either way, great job. Look forward to hearing more.

[SWITCHSK8R]

@jenniferiley87 thank you! really good advice, i know what you mean i should have written what i felt more. thanks!

[foreverwedanceyo]

sounds really good man you should check out my page and some of my songs. do you have a band facebook page?

[SWITCHSK8R]

@foreverwedanceyo i did dude i like them! yall are a local band right!?

[SWITCHSK8R]

@foreverwedanceyo yeah man i do. look up author of the moment. lol. its actually called frame the motion.

[jacobkovach]

i love this the vocals are great at first it sounded a little like sunday bloody sunday by u2 but then like it just started to sound amazing im in a band to im a drummer and i play guitar and scream but this is pretty good

[SWITCHSK8R]

@jacobkovach dude! lol thank you! everything you hear in any of my songs is all just me:] and drums are like my main thing actually! I'm actually gonna be adding a few more songs on here. you should subscribe and check em out when they're up.

[jacobkovach]

@SWITCHSK8R sure will

[SWITCHSK8R]

@jacobkovach sweet man. thank you.