Tale of tongues (Music video) (Talsgar the Wanderer)

[Baldoxxx4000]

Why cant he be your companion and singing that song while fighting alduin?

[IceBaine]

@Baldoxxx4000 I hate Bethesda for not allowing that! -.-

[VannyixDragoon]

Love that Nord accent.

[Jallentime]

Had goosebumps the whole time. 20/10.

[badkiller2]

Excellent vid, I really liked it! Some vids fitted perfectly, others... less.

8.5/10. Really liked it, keep it up, you should have more views.

[xenadragon]

@badkiller2 thanks alot for the feedback! :) could you tell me what you think didn't really fit? Then I could think about how I could have done it better :)

[badkiller2]

@xenadragon Well, ok, for one, the whole color tripping thing gets kind of tiresome. Also, at 0:03, where Alduin's spits flame at the camera, the vid lingers on too long, would look cooler if the moment after the camera is filled with flame it will transit to the falming banner, to keep it consistant. The part where he sings about people burning and dying, showing the child wasn't necessary, eveybody hates them, and you should've had a fadeout between the scenario's not a slideshow. Want more?

[xenadragon]

@badkiller2 Hm.. true. I changed the colors so it would not be entirly the same as the other video, but I guess it's a bit overdone. as for the rest, in the first shot he sang about the wings of alduin that darken the sky :p so as alduin flies by, the only thing left is the sky, with a fadeout. The kid cowers, at the point he sings about people cowering. :) so I did think about the shots I chose, I just took the lyrics litteral.

[badkiller2]

@xenadragon Yeah noticed that, but the skies look the same even after he flies, so it's hard to get. The kid expresses no emotion, just ducks.

And your last sentence is very true, sadly. You made everything Literal. TOO LITERAL.

It just feels...wierd. Use Literal scenes when appropriate, otherwise it just looks abit wierd. I did like the part when you showed the Alduin's Wall though. and at 0:45, I think the image would look more impressing if it was zooming or moving. Just my opinion though ;)

[xenadragon]

@badkiller2 true, true, you're right. thanks for the feedback! seriously, I will keep it in mind the next time! :)

[badkiller2]

@xenadragon No problem, I was more than happy to watch and observe fellow Clip makers. I planned to make a Skyrim clip of my own, but I have literally NO time at all.

I do have other old vids though, if you'd care to take a look. Doesn't matter to me.