Caqui- the majority of the awkwardness was not the script- it was instead the contrast of the levels that each actor displayed. the male actor displayed what I was bent more towards when we were writing the script, but the actress, to me, has somewhat more of a theatre feel to her acting than a film one- and this is indeed a film. This has already been addressed.. i'm privileged to be coming home from college to work on this project with Tatsuya. trust me- his work never ceases to amaze. - Greg
Ah, I see. I definitely saw the theater aspect you were talking about when I rewatched this. Hey, I'm no film critic (I'm just starting to get into film now), but I'm totally up for more videos, guys! Post more as soon as possible :D !
I liked it. I felt it got better as it progressed, though at times I felt the dialogue/acting a bit cheesy. Don't know if that was intended or not. Can't wait for "Red Rose" :D
Nice lighting. The editing could be a bit better at some moments, but it's looking good.
GuusSchuijl 1 year ago
Jesus, that was excellent. Ain't yall high school kids or college freshman?
Psyburn 3 years ago 3
Thanks!!!
We are still in highschool!
tatsy2009 3 years ago
Nicely done!
crazysphinx 3 years ago
The male actor is very good he seems much more at ease with his character and not overdoing it, how much experience does he have?
AtticusFinch0703 3 years ago
i liked it . The girl carried the scene even thouth the dialogue was dry ,your only as good as the script.
01071888 3 years ago 3
Caqui- the majority of the awkwardness was not the script- it was instead the contrast of the levels that each actor displayed. the male actor displayed what I was bent more towards when we were writing the script, but the actress, to me, has somewhat more of a theatre feel to her acting than a film one- and this is indeed a film. This has already been addressed.. i'm privileged to be coming home from college to work on this project with Tatsuya. trust me- his work never ceases to amaze. - Greg
PhoenixPhilms360 3 years ago
Thank you for the compliment!
- TG
tatsy2009 3 years ago
Ah, I see. I definitely saw the theater aspect you were talking about when I rewatched this. Hey, I'm no film critic (I'm just starting to get into film now), but I'm totally up for more videos, guys! Post more as soon as possible :D !
Caqui 3 years ago
Excellent!
esotericsean 3 years ago 3
LOL That guy on the right looks goofy as hell.
Thatguyfromnextdoor 3 years ago 3
It's nice to see you working on a film again.
RazorzTheName1991 3 years ago
yeah, i went to film school over the summer. Learned alot. Thats why i havent done much XD
tatsy2009 3 years ago
you're doing more than i am. dont get me wrong though, im still going to make films!
RazorzTheName1991 3 years ago
Oh yeah?
esotericsean 3 years ago
I liked it. I felt it got better as it progressed, though at times I felt the dialogue/acting a bit cheesy. Don't know if that was intended or not. Can't wait for "Red Rose" :D
Caqui 3 years ago