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  • iz this story true becuz it doeznt seem true i mean how the hell did the author get all their point of veiws that makes no sense and i wud have gave bryan sum long tyme ago

  • @kaybabigotswagg no it's not true..it's just a story i wrote and just added characters to it but it's based on true events that happened to people i know.

  • Great Story... Even Though I'm 2 Years Late

  • @TeamEdward151001 lol thanks :)

  • OMG I Loved It lol My 3 Time Reading It xDD

  • 5:03 dang patrick act like a man!! he fainted lmfao

  • thats my song Kc and jojo

    wow bry and sel did that dance that must have been cute..lol

    5*S

    Loved the ending i know im late..lol

  • thanks=)

  • welcome

  • OMG i luvvvveeeed it!! Wow pat fainted.

    5*

  • make sure to check out my latest story, High School Wifey: A Patrick Story

  • i luved the whole story .

    at the ending of each chapter i was so eager to find out the rest .

  • aww thanks=)

  • noooooo its ending!!! diz iz a sad day in the youtube world!! dis storet was great!!

  • lol aww thanks and if you didn't know already i have a Bryan story out. Check that one out too but i like this one better lol

  • aww i love this story !

    patrick & mia had a baby! lol.

    it was really good!

  • aww thanks love:)

  • omg gurl i truly 10000 times lol loved your story it had da perfect endin for your next story can i be in it pwease lol

  • lol thanks and i already started my next story and im almost done with it..check it out if you can its a Bryan story:)

  • Brava, Brava, Brava!!!! I loved it. Hahaha Pat fainted. I loved it all. Thankz for writing it! Love ya girl!!!!!!!!!!!

  • lol thanks for reading and showin love:) I really appreciate it

  • lol we can have a life like that just keep prayin lol

  • loved it!

  • Aww Love It<33

  • thanks:)

  • what a beautiful story ending

    if u ever decide to do a next story a wanna be in it..no doubt

  • wow that was cute and funny when bryan and carnell said were next !!!! and the babies have patricks hair i bet they are gorgous

  • lol i know right

  • Esther....I'm litterly crying!!!...MI THAT WAS OUR PRESENT TO YOU...Naming the babies after you!

  • aww dnt cry sis:)

  • good ending.

    das my song all my life.

    love this story.

  • i know i LOVE that song

  • i could see myself doing balley to it lol.

    i dont even do balley.

    but i will learn. lol

  • lol..girl u crack me up

  • im glad i do.

    i have been asking my parents if they can let me do balley but their still like we'll think bout it. lol

    ive been wanting to do it ever since i was younger.

  • well i hope you get to finally do ballet some day

  • lol,

    i hope so. lol

    it seems fun.

  • lol

  • ii cant belive its the end!!!! :(

  • diz is a qood endinqq

  • thats such a good ending

  • aww that was so cute. nice ending. Loved it

    5*

  • I loved this story.

    Good job!

  • Aww thiss was so sweet.

    Whyy it gotta end? : (

    I lovedd it thoughh

    I alwayss do.

  • perfect ending lol he fainted i waz crackin up wen she waz havin da babiez

  • lol

  • OMG!!!i luved it..great endin:]

  • thanks:)

  • Dat was like da best story ever!!!!!

  • thanks:)

  • and patrick popped the question im glad he did

    so i wont have to pop him

    NO KISSIN IF FRONT OF MY NEICE AND NEPHEW they dont need to see all of that yet

    ur wlecome love!!!!

    i told u u'd finish ur story b4 i did

    what a shame

  • lol hahahaha ur neice nd nephews eyes were closed lol and you guys were carrying them lol and i finished becuhz i have no life so i work on them..u have a life lol

  • haha a life

    good joke

  • lol im serious lol

  • i am too

  • why do all good things have to come to an end?

    NOT FAIR!!!

    but yeah I loved it

    I hat 2 read it again cuz i sag the whole song the first time and barely paid attention to the words HEY Y'D U CUT MY SONG OFF!?!?! lol that movie came on last night

    oh ok im calm now u put my song back on "skittles boy say what?"

    if i had 2 push out twins i swear ill b faintin right along with patrick lol the doctor has jokes omg my neice had my name and my ephew has my husbands name i think ima .... smile

  • OhEm Gee imma have to go bak and read becuz im lost like  a mugg..Lol be right back to comment

  • lol ok

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