my solo

[1stupidclowns]

great very good



[oOMitchell98Oo]

That's very impressive

[Esteladoceu]

Very beautifuulllll!!!!!!!!!!!

[broadwaynballet]

Well your stylization is mostly good, but iwould say your fingers are a little gymnasty and you need to work on your right split

[dancer141994]

slow down and finish the movement your doing before you start the next one

[LollipopGummiDrop]

Did you choreograph this yourself?

[LetzteEclipse483]

pretty

just make ur moves more full out and use ur whole body for ur turns

[toiletsmafia]

i like it but i think you should more let yourself feel the dance...

[ThisIsMe140693]

you need to connect the moves together more - the dance didn't seem to flow that well. but otherwise good :)

[tennisdancer05]

dont wind up before a turn :)

[bobogagada]

i liked the dance alot ... =) one thing though try not to sing along... try not to say what she is saying but try and feel what she is saying ! otherwise your a great dancer !

[tennisdancer05]

connect your possess on your turns, and make sure you listen to the artists words, understand the point there trying to get accross. because ultimatley dancing is the emotion your protraying, not just doing steps but overall nice work

[purpledancinyogo]

try not to flick your wrists so much, it breaks the line of your arms

also, make sure you arent contracting your stomach all the time

otherwise, very good

[HachikoStrawberry]

That's lovely.

Nice to see someone respecting the music and choreographing to the feel of the music.

[Aliciaa76]

J'aime beaucoup ce que tu fait (y)

[dancex3lifee]

you're a very good dancer, but i think you'd make a better dancer in ballet and not so much lyrical.

[5678dancer4eva]

pretty good but just a suggestion it looked like you were kinda slipping a bit and didn't have a very good grip on the floor so you might wanna dance with socks, either bare foot or with bare paws.

[lovedancex33]

you need to finish your moves and stretch them, feel the emotion since its a slow dance. it will make the dance alot more entertaining and fun to watch. just be most into and it'll look alot better :)

[ilnaafn1a2]

Nice dance! BTW, what is the name of this song?? :) Very good dance!!!

[alyssabriannesmiles]

i did a solo to this song

and i started it off exactly how you did

i liked it just a lil sloppy

[megustacantar310]

i agree you need to just close you eyes and listen to what the music is saying and just dance.. and everything else will come together

[foxportions92]

you need to FEEL the music..not just hear it. You need to just do what you feel..you're thinking too much. You're focused too much on the technicality instead of the natural movement.

[roxbobox]

it feels like you are just dancing instead of getting into it. try to feel a stronger attachment to the song.

also a tip i can tell if your wearing socks but if so try folding the down so that they are only on your toes (it looks as tho you are sliding a lot) having bare heals will keep you from sliding around or try foot undies.

great job keep it up :)

[whatiamtoyou]

youre trying to be too technical. feel the music and have some emotion.... very beautiful lines though :)

[Citroenvliegje]

I liked it! :D

[iimiissmiibby]

your a bit stiff and sloppy, bend the knees. also stretch yur arms out all the way

[sunkissedcherio]

great job but instead of just dancing the choero, try and make it your own you seem to be just going through the motions, so put a little emotion into it and deffinatly try and bring your personality out through your daning. Other wise great job and keep up the hard work.

[PT01vs10LP]

WOw

[xobellisimaox]

you are very turned out on everything, just make sure you connect your foot to your knee in passe and work on your flexibilty :]

[Meagan1016]

youre good. Your movements are a little sloppy in some places, and i agree with vhoney1.. you should pause after turning,especially after your arabesque..

otherwise, good job.

[eazybreezyxoxo]

your amaing! i wish i could do anything

CLOSE to that; i wish i could dance soo

bad! :/ but (anways) this gives me so much inspiration!

[vhoney1]

Oh and another thing also on that first original flip...I love the head bent to the front when you start, but when you flip you go sideways a bit...try to go directly back. It happened to me all the time when I would try to that...I would go sideways. Aim your leg straight back and it will lead you. And go all the way through with the split...past your knee that is because it seemed unfinished. :-)

[vhoney1]

Hey hun. You are a lovely dancer. Just a few comments here. 1. On your first flip back...point your feet more...it turns out longer and more graceful. 2. Try either a different floor or pur rosin on your shoes because you are slipping quite a bit. 3. Finish...that's very important. a common mistake is to go from one move into another without making the first one completely. So if you do a turn, pause after you turn completely, and after your lovely arabesque stay there for a bit. Good job. :-)

[coold00dfasho]

wow you have wonderful technique!

i would just looovvve to see you put your whole body into everything.

[justgottadanc08]

I definitely agree, I think you have great potential. Keep up with your ballet and technique classes and you'll get it in no time :)

Best wishes to you!

[Dance2Live88]

Hey! Im not quite sure how much training you've had, but i would just suggest taking more classes, because the potential is definately there =) As for the solo, I at least needed more POWER...keep dancin, girl!

[jen521gv]

intensity i mean

[jen521gv]

try not always looking at the audience, it adds intensive to your moves

[boogiebhiphop]

umm well. thanks to everyone´s comments. i really appreciate

i´ll work on dat.. :)

bless !

[cecexcastillo]

mm maybe when you start the routine

and your going back over your shoulder

your should try and split your legs:)

[thatlakegirl]

whats the name of this song?

[ang3lfrmh3vn]

its called Cry by Rhianna << [howeva u spell it]

in case you still wondering

[thecolornay]

well danced!

I really liked what you've come up with, just remember to have shoulders back and have a good presence.

:]

[JESShardGORE]

it was a good dance, just work on the arms, theyre a bit awkward.

[XxocaseyoxX]

Loveee itt : )))

[cute15thing]

Beautiful job!! :D

[Gdancer11]

your a good dancer but u need to make your moves more fluent and not so choppy

[hollercrombiedancer]

yes. i agree with adcdancr.

the slide was like the best.

[adcdancr]

im lovin the slllideee.

[caroline2324]

wow! really good ! :)

[ladeeryder]

Wow!! Great Job!!=)

[boogiebhiphop]

em.. i dance ballet and jazz.. and i like contemporary .. so i think is kinda a mix.. and thankx:)

[Aljajcaj]

uhh..... u have such great feet but what kind of dance was this??

[ReesesPieciesMama]

it was gud but i think u connect 2 much with the audience.you shood connect with audience some but i think u r losing part of ur story

[Shanbumm]

This is really good

but it looks really hard

to do on this slippery floor lol

[yumalicious1]

complete your turns! complete also your steps. you can improve, but your very good! :D

[dancnchk01]

whats this sonng

[3KUYKENDALLGIRLS]

the song is cry by rihanna

[gavinkeen]

really good! i am actually choreographin a dance for this song at the moment and u did a really good job..

[123sharliie]

lol yr gud man!!! u shudda tried out 4 britians got talent!! u woulda bown them away!!! x x x x

[Daroenamen]

Heey that was good:D but how old are you? I also want to take ballet classes

[ZenithsTV]

lol u run fast in the first part of the video!xd

[jessicashinin07]

luv it

[ZenithsTV]

very very good!i love it

[nickynikitaa]

q hdpp yo si hago eso me parto en 10 ejejje

buenooo te felicitoo amigaa

te dejo el re beshoo chauu