The Pillow Man (Intermediate Directing Scene: Point Park University)

[Utopiansybill]

Camera work: awesome

Acting: awesome (love your choices for Ariel and Katorian especially)

Set: amazing! The chairs, the lighting, excellent.

There's something off though. I can't put my finger on it...too long of spaces between lines, the age of the actors, not enough back story...idk. But it's still wonderful. Best rendition I've seen outside a theatre.

[mattl129]

@Utopiansybill Thanks, I appreciate it.