People are being pretty tough on the animation. I'll leave the writing critiques to smarter folks than myself, but for a single animator to be doing this as a series, it's pretty well executed. Remember that family guy is spending upwards of 2 million dollars per episode just for the visuals. This guy is getting this done in his basement.
@aniBOOM True. I admire his dedication, but the plot line is lacking. I'm not telling him to give up, I'm telling him to get better at what he's passionate about. But I wholeheartedly agree that some people are throwing vitriol rather than ascorbic acid tablets. (ok, judging by that comment it's time for me to get back to my science work...)
Eww, it's so forced, and all the jokes are so tightly knit it's hard to watch... Take the slice of life thing in another direction and trust yourself with more natural humor, this didn't work. I'm constantly reminded that I'm watching a lazy internet cartoon.
They say good writing can carry mediocre artwork, but that requires good writing first. :/ The jokes are really lame and the whole plot of the episode is shallow and boring. It just seems like it's trying too hard to imitate Family Guy...
@MegaCortez69 oh please, if you ask me, Mexicans are the most racist ethnic group in the states. I can't go anywhere without some migrant worker shouting at me in spanish then laughing
I love the bold animation style, but the writing is just not funny at all...
xxTaKe2xx 1 month ago
mildly interesting. not!
MrJsanchez801 1 month ago
i think this just gave me diabetes.
zakieboy123 1 month ago
People are being pretty tough on the animation. I'll leave the writing critiques to smarter folks than myself, but for a single animator to be doing this as a series, it's pretty well executed. Remember that family guy is spending upwards of 2 million dollars per episode just for the visuals. This guy is getting this done in his basement.
outstandingpajamas 1 month ago 23
@outstandingpajamas Well said! :)
aniBOOM 1 month ago 2
@aniBOOM True. I admire his dedication, but the plot line is lacking. I'm not telling him to give up, I'm telling him to get better at what he's passionate about. But I wholeheartedly agree that some people are throwing vitriol rather than ascorbic acid tablets. (ok, judging by that comment it's time for me to get back to my science work...)
vinceat852 1 month ago
It was alright~ Attempting to be something big but not really, BUT most of the jokes were pretty funny. ^^ lol, that tri-corn~
CyberB07 2 months ago 2
Eww, it's so forced, and all the jokes are so tightly knit it's hard to watch... Take the slice of life thing in another direction and trust yourself with more natural humor, this didn't work. I'm constantly reminded that I'm watching a lazy internet cartoon.
JazLyte 2 months ago
They say good writing can carry mediocre artwork, but that requires good writing first. :/ The jokes are really lame and the whole plot of the episode is shallow and boring. It just seems like it's trying too hard to imitate Family Guy...
literacyscaresme 2 months ago
@MegaCortez69 and @MusicallyRetardedKid you both realize that saying one ethnic group is "most racist" is pretty much racist in and of itself?
billionthb 2 months ago
i thought the phone was just lazily animated at first lmao
theonlyonebuttwo 2 months ago
loved it!
Saiyan1987 2 months ago
Man, I want a hover phone...
smay96 2 months ago 5
lol this is pretty dang funny.
TruthatCearcie 2 months ago
the adam's apples look fucked up
ids5621 2 months ago
reminds me of family guy, but really cheap
VolcomNancyDope 2 months ago
The gags could be great, but somehow the pace of the cartoon ruins it for me.
Elflovag 2 months ago
I was good bit it would be nice to show that racists come in all colours, shapes and sizes. Not just white.
global001 2 months ago
family guy?
BLOODBATHDAVID 2 months ago
Well most of them are my brothers white and he's racist o and I'm a Mexican
MegaCortez69 2 months ago
@MegaCortez69 oh please, if you ask me, Mexicans are the most racist ethnic group in the states. I can't go anywhere without some migrant worker shouting at me in spanish then laughing
MusicallyRetardedKid 2 months ago
Yes, because racists are always white.
Abreodan 2 months ago
more or less the show friends, animated...cool
peacefulshades 2 months ago
Yay! Another episode :). I like this.
Naasika 2 months ago 18
Go animate? lol
hassmann2000 2 months ago
boring.
no more epiSodeS pleaSe.
KaiserAugustus72 2 months ago
Dear Aniboom, I like most of the stuff you guys post. This is just painful.
farflungfloyd 2 months ago 22
I did laugh at the hover phone. I was like "Oh they meant to do that."
digjunk3d 2 months ago 2
tricorn???
Derrymaine148 2 months ago
Fail. It wasn't even funny.
JFREEDOML 2 months ago
not very funny but good enough to be on mtv. needs work on the movement still. i give it a 4.5/5
zeonwaber 2 months ago
its pretty darn good, love the first episode too
exo84 2 months ago
I don't know why this is good but i love it
Oranges8 2 months ago
Brilliant.
2BA1000 2 months ago