Brutal man! i liked it. i listen to alot of fast rap, so the pauses were hard for me, i like those full line clean syllables. but the rhymes were nice. down a bit tho you missed 2 lines rhyming, you made inner rhymes which is dope but i woulda liked to see it all. preciate using the beat. ill post a link to your channel on the video!
@remix696 Appreciate the opinion, but I didn't miss anything ;). I just change line lengths, and I actually wrote this over about 6 different instrumentals so it forced flow changes every couple lines. It's just my style. I don't like being boxed in to ending when I'm 'supposed to'. But the beat was dope and I appreciate the cypher.
@UnknownCrypt This may be second only to Unknown :P so this is def up there on your bests, your past couple have been good actually, maybe your finding your shit man, stoked to see some more in the future
@wasasa666 I'm way more patient lately. I used to just rush track after track for something to do and force a style. So I think just letting things come naturally without force is helping me actually create what I hear in my head.
Brutal man! i liked it. i listen to alot of fast rap, so the pauses were hard for me, i like those full line clean syllables. but the rhymes were nice. down a bit tho you missed 2 lines rhyming, you made inner rhymes which is dope but i woulda liked to see it all. preciate using the beat. ill post a link to your channel on the video!
remix696 7 months ago
@remix696 Appreciate the opinion, but I didn't miss anything ;). I just change line lengths, and I actually wrote this over about 6 different instrumentals so it forced flow changes every couple lines. It's just my style. I don't like being boxed in to ending when I'm 'supposed to'. But the beat was dope and I appreciate the cypher.
UnknownCrypt 7 months ago
One of your best that i've heard man, liked the flow on it. Good lyrics too
wasasa666 8 months ago
@wasasa666 Very dope man. Happy you dig it.
UnknownCrypt 8 months ago
@UnknownCrypt This may be second only to Unknown :P so this is def up there on your bests, your past couple have been good actually, maybe your finding your shit man, stoked to see some more in the future
wasasa666 8 months ago
@wasasa666 I'm way more patient lately. I used to just rush track after track for something to do and force a style. So I think just letting things come naturally without force is helping me actually create what I hear in my head.
UnknownCrypt 8 months ago
@UnknownCrypt Yea man, keep doing your thing and i'm sure you'll only get better.
wasasa666 8 months ago