Detachment Remix

[Mapmakermaster]

Nice editing, love the music. Good Job dude.

[fleshfit]

better....editing, look, and feel.....good job...

[jloughry1976]

one of the better videos I have seen on here that has not used "stock" film clips. Nicely done.

[MyXL2]

I did see the world trade center disaster at 00:28. Sorry. But very good entry.

[Shadowcorporation]

Very nice work, I love the black & white imagery, it fits the song quite nicely. I like the elevator shot, a bag of luggage or a headless person going down? cool.

[dahard]

Thanks for the kind word on my video.

Congrats for yours too :)

[perfectdrug39]

not bad. doesnt really come to a conclusion though. hes detatched yes but what does he do about it? kill off his detachment perhaps?

[Xiatter]

Props for killing the narration--Along with being painfully repetitive, there was far too much going on at once.

I enjoyed the second take of the escalator.

[laviergenoire]

for me now it's better, like really your vid.. good luck, kinda.

[laviergenoire]

I love it.

[malco2001]

i liked the original better.

[T12392]

Whats the obsession with depicting oneself walking around, looking at horizons, etc. Its mind-numbing

[exnihilio13]

Really well done. I agree too that it's better to let the viewer fill in their own dialogue but I really think the imagery captures the music.

Hope you take a run at some of the other Ghost tracks too!

[ssuhyy]

Really amazing with previous video - Detachmed... i think it'll be one of "winner" videos of the festival ;]

[CellarDoorVI]

Wow, this is one of the few videos so far that isn't complete crap.

Refreshing.

[madamejoker]

Some of these shots are pure gold. 2:20 til the finish -- incredible. I literally shivered. I think it works extremely well with Reznor's quiet, melancholic, haunting style. I hope it gets used.

[autumn145]

This is awesome...good luck. Best one I've seen so far...but it's just the beginning.

[danielacastilho]

Use slow motion. Try to show slower some details. Eyes blinking works better with slow motion, as facial expressions. Cut the Statue of Liberty, is a cliché. Check some Bill Viola videos, he always pick something and explore at maximum. If you explore more few elements, using slow motion and keeping the focus on these elements alone, you will get where you want. Try.

[l45hious]

I enjoyed both of your submittions equally, but differently.

[javemport]

Very good, best vid for the NIN fest I've seen yet.

[Sumrow]

Prtty damn impressive. Loved it. : )

[orangutanvolador]

Very well done. I love how it works with the music.

[verbalalchemy]

I totally dig it! Go R!

-Geoffrey

[Shadowtechnique]

Much, much better now. Very nicely done!

[wseyffer]

better without narrative, definitely.

good call.

[WretchedTora]

MUCH better without the narrative. 4 stars, best so far.

[MarcelMaynard]

More like refined! That was Perfect!

[kida101]

Thanks very much but I still enjoy the version with the narration because I feels it tells a more specific story. But I like this version equally.

Thanks to those who suggested making an alternative version!!!

[MarcelMaynard]

I liked the narration as well, i just thought it was a little repetitive, i mean i know it was supposed to but it was a little much lol. Hey i love both either way... so great job to you, You have a pretty good eye for shooting... i cant wait to start working on mine...

[kida101]

Hehehe...thanks!! Can't wait to see yours!!

[Desecrated]

Wow, this is incredible. It fits the music perfectly. You've definitely captured the feel.

[whozyapappy]

this one is pretty good

[SamCamStudios]

Great Editing, Great Remix, Great Directing, Amazing video...

[micahs3g]

sick dude...