Before the STORM-- chapter one (DESCRIPTION BOX)

[gracesuelto]

AMAZING! i love it. this is incredible. you should be a published writer.

[waaybackintolove]

amazing yuo are an amazing writting

[nileystorysftw]

Amazing

[patrisha020517]

WOW! its just a big WOW to me..

i feel the hurt in my heart and its like im more in pain than them..its just OUCH!!!

btw..nice chapter..i LOVED it

[jessicca704]

this is awesome are they famous??

[anotherNILEYstory]

Yeah :)

[SelenaFanSomeone]

Wow this is the best chapter ever I mean the other ones were so lame and stupid I'm mean selena is an orphan SERIOUSLY that's crap. Anyway awesome jobfrom my

[knoxa25]

wow telenalover was rite it is really good

[o0oCyrusViruso0o]

wow this is amazing! i'm gonna watch em all right now! haha!!

[xoLivetoLaugh]

wow. i'm totally watching your series!

[joekevnickluv]

Gah!!!! I'm hooked!

[amangelsinger]

Wow just found out about the story and im hooked im subbing for sure!!

[JoeBroLuver4Eva]

Oh wow amazing. really Love it. :]

[millstown680]

omgg! tht was sooo good! i luv'd it!

[adamlevinex3er]

OMG AMAZING <3 I love it.

I love how its real-like but its not too real-like how everyone else is making them :D

[TatianaSabaxTragedy]

WOW :|!

[nbabiggestfan12]

THIS WAS REALLY GOOD :)

[smiley0smiley03]

is cool

[angelkinns]

AMAZING

[LasFitits]

cant wait! i love it so much!

[candy00123]

cant wait!!

[NickJsGirl4life]

Loved it its so good :)

[oOSTiiLLOo]

that was so good.

can't wait for the next one.

:D

[NILEY4EVER777]

amazing!((:

[harrysayerschica]

SO SUSCRIBING :)

[DisneyStAR4fun]

ah-ma-zing...poor niley...=[

[NileyLoveStory]

how did you get a non-static version oh this song!?

[mfancyketchup]

ah !! i bet it know who her best friend issss :)

[hadiy101]

loved it

cant wiat for the next chapter

[yanna36]

Why do you make me cry?!?!?!?! Haha.

Next one please :D

<3

soooo amazing!

[xxRawrForeverxx]

omgg that was wow. i loved it.

amazinggg. omggg lol cant waitt.

[lilchigrl]

wow this is a really good story! :)

cant wait for more!

[WrightReyes0507]

omg that was sad but amazing

[TeamNiley]

my jaw just dropped. that was

AHMAZING!!! AHH I LOVED IT!

you have got talent. glad your

showing it =D

[NileyWorldTV]

OMJ! That was sooo ah-mazing! =D

I'm awfully tempted to rape that pretty yellow "Subscribe" button... >.>

[NileyJirus]

OMG!

i need more.

LOL

[Aislynx3]

It's soooo good(:

good writing too(:

[BrookeCatherineC]

cant wait.

[anotherNILEYstory]

chapter one is in description box :)

[vickit335]

man i cant get over this song lol...looks good!

[anotherNILEYstory]

thank you! chapter one is in the description box! :)

[vickit335]

oh haha didnt even see that!

amazing job :)