Archanaz poem 'naukri ki tokeri' in hasya kavi sammelan

[ThePankajrastogi]

awesome !

[nashmoviefreak]

Excellent!

[rajan1089]

badiya....



[krishnasut]

uff ! khub bhalo hoyeche !

[venuram1]

is it possible to get English translation? perhaps only the content

[jiyaupamanyu]

its soooo true

[kaje2212]

too good...U are talented:) keep it up:)

[KrishAgr]

Awesome.. So Simple, So Funny. :)

[umakantpatel]

mast hai... archana didi...:):)

[babla2489]

excellent

[kanuvaidya1]

Very good. Laugh on our own is not easy.LikeABCD.

[VineetBhatt2]

She is just awesome!...carry on Archana Ji...All your poems! are too good & too close to day-2-day routine.

[RajatRastogi85]

maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaast !

[aalaaala2010]

archanaji ye hasya kavita nahi ye to live philosophy hai

[sudhierjha]

hasya kavita bahoot badhiya chhand aur sabdaon ka mel-jol bhi badhiya hai.

[anilu2ub]

bahut acchi hai.. keep it up. looking for more.... :)

[komalrishabh]

क्या बात है अर्चनाजी , वाह वा ! नई रचना सुनने की उम्मीद है !

[MrNishu11]

very good her way of telling poem is really nice ,keep going archna j

[bhatianeetu]

Gr8 work Archana !! Out of all your poems I have heard so far...I like this one the best !! abcd ..definition is too good :).

[deependra2008]

arrey hamara bhee video dekhiyega headfone lagake...bahut pahle kee baat hai....lekin mast hai hahaha aapka....

[deependra2008]

hahahaha.....bahut sahee hai mam....hahaha...bahut sahee....

[kulriz]

Man, it looks like she is telling my story . . .. TOOOOO GOOD. Excellent work!

[ONKSDGR8]

besttttt ....tooo good ..........i am also a bay area localite ...and m getting married within few months ........m afraid ....my wife shudnt listen to this poem ....as shes also gonna come here on H4 :-) LOLZZZZ.............btw great poem ...

[sanuser321]

wah wah! talent!!!

wonderful....

[bikashj]

Straight from the heart.

[giridxb]

gr8 compostion, abcd, maa ya saasu was too gud.

wish u all the best in your life archana

[giridxb]

gr8 compostion, abcd, maa ya saasu was too gud.

wish u all the best in your life archana.

[ayyawark]

That was really great... cool composition.

[niraj5555]

you are toooo good!!!! i really liked your diction and your poem!!!

[pjavvaru26]

very nice one. very talented poem. ABCD was awesome

[manishvsg]

I am now your fan and we feel proud of you.

[rpendse]

Absolutely wonderful.

"A, B, C, D" was awesome...so very true!

[lifeisbeautiful01]

gud one real talent

[poonamppatel]

Very good .. lolz

[allthat24]

Exellent. Hilarious

[ishmit40]

nice archana abcd was good one.

[utubesanjay]

Very good. You are talented. Just remember, there will be many unpleasant comments from many folks. Just disregard them. These comments come from people who have had unhappy childhood or have grown up without parents.

[birdielane420]

congratulations. enjoyed your poetry very much.

[rumallaswathi]

Really Good one..

[dapohunter]

tooo gooood

[anusuu]

WOW ITS SUPER HIT!!!!

[sjaveedsjaveed]

Good Job.....

[nudepal]

zakaas

[subhagovindarajan]

A good peace of work..But if you could use as much time which went on composing this poem to prepare for GRE...you could have changed your status.Don't try to blame the system here.Instead of brooding over what you can't do,why dont you check out the opportunities.?!Compalining and cribbing about the status of the visa ....huh!!! get a life!!

[nsroot]

dude! u get a life first....this is poetry and humor, first understand that.

Get a dictionary and find the meaning of a vyanga..

[subhagovindarajan]

I understand that this is a satire poem!!I was talking about the meaning underneath buddy..!!And there's nothing but frustration and desperation !!If only this energy could be channelized into positives...!!!! Funny!!

[nsroot]

:) ... ok... that may be your point of view... but i myself strongly feel that this is a form of light poetry that creates a effect of "gudgudi" to listeners.

[alicolumb]

Oh Bhosadi... this is just comedy....

[erasmus96]

bahut khubh ,,tres bien

[ajaktha]

Kya baat hai behan. kya baat hai. subject ki originality aur vichar bahut badiya the. mazaa aa gaya.

[avinash2060]

Archanaji - Bahut khub. Aap mahan kalakar hain. please kavita likhte rahiye....

Simply amazing.

[vishalwall]

idea is good but its not funny..

[kolonspy]

talented..

[simoneiy]

hey kewl poeme and true let me knw wen and wer ur next show gonna be luv 2 wacth t....

[ajitktripathi]

true

[jaydesh9]

apke last stanza ko salaam... !!!!!!!!!!

[kaputpratapgarhi]

यूं तो हम गाने की कला में

काफी आगे निकल चुके हैं

हमारा गाना सुन कर

हमारे सात सात पड़ोसी बदल चुके हैं

और ये जो कई दिनों से ठहरे हैं

पता चला है सपरिवार बहरे हैं

अर्चना जी बहुत अच्‍छी रही आपकी नौकरी, ऐसी नौकरी की अर्चना ही करनी चाहिये

[abhipanfan]

This is awesome, thank you!

[MrJekyllDrHyde]

quite mediocre

[sujatakm]

enjoyed it so much....Good work archana!...I appreciate your talent!...Thanks for sharing

[kolonspy]

she is talented as hell..she wrote it in 2 days? I doubt it!! .. :) but that doesn't matter.

she is good..

[samratdp]

Great Stuff!! I suggest you link this video to DynamycDesi. They give weekly awards to such talents and since this site is international and focussed on Desi community may give a good platform for promotion

[cjogesh]

Great Reciting.....

[dranoopjain]

thats how most Indian women land in USA, just marry any ass hole with a GC and then become a parasite

[alljunktrash]

I disagree with you...it is very unfair to generalize your personal experience!

[desigirlatusa]

This is great, you have a lot of energy and talent

[sakathvenu]

hahaha :D

[yaarppd]

Really good. It can touch any heart.

[mskadu]

Good one Archana!

[anoop142]

nice one

[shwethasatish]

Too good.Njoyed it throughly.

[lannamalai]

awesome!! aap bahut talented hain.

[aditnarayan]

SHABAASH! Kya kamaal ki dil ki bhaddas likhi hain aapne! mubaarak ho!

[mayukhchakravartti]

This lady is aweosme!!! Rocking....

[pashminu]

Great, why not participate in the Great Indian Laughter Champions? Can we have more of such clips from the same show?

[phreezed]

Awesome.. Beautiful.. Impressed. Don't have words to appreciate it, but lady you have some great talent. So glad to see this video.. Can someone please post more videos of that function?

BTW...who come east coast is so dry!! never heard of such talents..

[rsaraog]

very true ..

[rkparsi]

btw.. I liked ur new version of ABCD...

[rkparsi]

Arewaa!! kya baath hai.. Nice... badiya hai aap ka kavitha.. But u know what.. please don't make Indian gals get scared of coming to USA... Aapke agle videome USA ke bare me kuch acha boliyega.. please.. :)

[itsshanu]

Awesome kavita Archana. Beautiful and very true to heart version of ABCD....am sailing in the H4 boat too.

[praveenpandey]

Wow!!!! That was really good.....

[hindimusicfan]

Arrey yaar...bahut sahi..Wah..Wah!. Mazey aa gaye

[kavyaatkims]

Aapka likhneka aur padne ka andaaz bahut achha hai... Bahut maza aaya... Cool poetry, very close to real life... All the best :)

[yoursnilu]

where was this held...??

[amitmehra1974]

aap ki kavita sun ke apni biwi ki story yaad aah gayi :)

[rohitpreety]

awesome :)

[waqar94702]

kaya bata hai hi jii aap ki 'no' karne kii, 'no' bhii karii or naukarii kii bhii. - waqar

[ultimateusername]

Amazing!!! Where's your next show?

-Kiron