U might want to think more with the song and make it very raw and hit everything strong, make it more sharp and angled. I felt like u did a lot of flowing with your body that didnt seem to match the song. But continue working :)
imma be real wit yu its not bad but some moves yu could've hit a lil harder it was good i liked how yu started nd yea dats how i feel, dont think im saying it sucked it was good but... yu kno ... room for improvment
Though there are a couple points of criticism I wanted to mention. Because of the hard bass beats, those moves really need to hit it fast and clean if your aiming to match the beat. Your leaps could have a bit more height as well. But you have great creativity. and it was a fantastic routine. :]" Wonderful and keep it up.
Pretty good. Work on pointing your feet and especially your jumps!!!! You need to have straight legs and get more air when you jump. Not too bad though.
@Dogluvr611 some jumps are supposed to be low i would know i've been in dance since i was 3 but not sure if they were supposed to be low or not and feet not sure if she had them flexed or what but this song has the edge to it so she might have meant that but yes a little more air and straiten a little and point ur feet! BUT your a wonderful dancer! It was divine to watch you! :)
i know it's super-trendy, but pleeaase take OFF your socks! you'll feel much more secure shifting ur weight barefoot or @ least wearing foot-undies. good job overall =)
it was good just when ur makin a dance try to go off the music alittle bit more
chachi8246 4 months ago
did you choreograph this yourself?
laughattack21 5 months ago
U might want to think more with the song and make it very raw and hit everything strong, make it more sharp and angled. I felt like u did a lot of flowing with your body that didnt seem to match the song. But continue working :)
emilyj819 6 months ago
Good job, girl! Keep going! :)
SweetBubblyPrincess 7 months ago
wow you did really good!! i've done that song before....wasn't as good as yours though!
Cinder3lla35 9 months ago
I like the song Walking On Air also lol :) Great dance!
eskimoicecream1 10 months ago
@Laur1134 I think those r trophy's
Mrsdanceaholic14 1 year ago
i love the moves you do when it goes I LOVE YOU BABY, it looks great and REALLY affective!
fiyacake 1 year ago
Good choreography! :) Love it!
IrishCutieful 1 year ago
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Vaagen483 1 year ago
and work a lil bit on the technique
anneboucher 1 year ago
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anneboucher 1 year ago
not bad, just try to fill up the music a bit more.. good effort though
anneboucher 1 year ago
imma be real wit yu its not bad but some moves yu could've hit a lil harder it was good i liked how yu started nd yea dats how i feel, dont think im saying it sucked it was good but... yu kno ... room for improvment
superman4214 1 year ago
are you beginner or intermediate?
webloopisode 1 year ago
How come so many people like to dance to this song?
You did great loved it.
sabaths1fan 1 year ago
That was lovely ^__^"
Though there are a couple points of criticism I wanted to mention. Because of the hard bass beats, those moves really need to hit it fast and clean if your aiming to match the beat. Your leaps could have a bit more height as well. But you have great creativity. and it was a fantastic routine. :]" Wonderful and keep it up.
KyoTarik 1 year ago
dyingg
MelissaMuis 1 year ago
the dance was good, i got the concept of it and it connected to your song which is very important..... good job (:
tinkadanz 1 year ago
Well I could see u were thinking the moves....but other than that it was ok! There were some interesting parts!
manoman19902 1 year ago
Woah -Has A Long Jaw- Your Really Good -Hits Jaw Closed
XxPinkPop2010xX 1 year ago
this was great i loved it i could see that you put yourself in the music. thunbs up :D
funniYuki1 1 year ago
this is way better than what Ive seen on here.
Thank you.. aha.
LaurensBomb 1 year ago
this was pretty good! do u take dance?
dancerbutt30303 1 year ago
@dancerbutt30303 of course she takes dance, its a a senior solo.
kjhghginator 1 year ago
Pretty good. Work on pointing your feet and especially your jumps!!!! You need to have straight legs and get more air when you jump. Not too bad though.
Dogluvr611 1 year ago
@Dogluvr611 some jumps are supposed to be low i would know i've been in dance since i was 3 but not sure if they were supposed to be low or not and feet not sure if she had them flexed or what but this song has the edge to it so she might have meant that but yes a little more air and straiten a little and point ur feet! BUT your a wonderful dancer! It was divine to watch you! :)
crazaydancer98 1 year ago
Good but i no you coul do better! Just work on every thing that everyone else said
kaciraye4 1 year ago
Your need to work on transitions and musicality, also pointing your feet
SammiLuv28 2 years ago
goodness!!! point ur feet on ur rolls!!! but other than tht good!!
iluvdance07 2 years ago 4
work on your turnout and you'll be great! Also, I get that its supposed to be Modernish so you need to make it more modern.
FlyleafAndVampires8 2 years ago
you were good just work on your grande jete en tournes kay?
laladoodles 2 years ago
its cute but your really stiff..& you have moments where your standing for like 3 counts doing nothing
danileeyo 2 years ago 2
i know it's super-trendy, but pleeaase take OFF your socks! you'll feel much more secure shifting ur weight barefoot or @ least wearing foot-undies. good job overall =)
xscorpkidx 2 years ago 2
Miss ma'am! I really like your concept. I know how mind boggling a practice can be. Don't let some of these haters on youtube tell you otherwise.
It's dance. Just have fun. Which you are.
Period. =)
justforkadi 2 years ago 11
Its only practise, give ppl a break. Those on so you think you can dance train 24/7 with some of the best in the world
namfonda 2 years ago
cool!
chloeming1 2 years ago
i do jazz and my recital is saturday
scooter12198 2 years ago
that was really good. =] i did that song for our schools dance show and i love it!
LANINAMASCEREZA 2 years ago
thank you thank you=)
kelissamel 2 years ago
what's the song before "the garden"? the song that you played wrongly.... thanks=)
kelissamel 2 years ago
walking on air by kerli
CaliGurl10134 2 years ago
walking on air by kerli
TwlightFanLover 2 years ago
Awesome dance =] what song are you dancing to??
ShakeItUpGood16 3 years ago