as you ask a commenting in detail, I'll tell you that all you do is remarkably exact and expressiv- the tone, the sound itself is very lovely- i'm an amateur treble recorder player and have studied this music- so I know it is rather difficult- if you allow me to give advice, I would try to make my rendition a littel bit more daring and emotional, as your techique seems to allow that ( mine doesen't!!!)- let me congratulate!!!
From 4:01 you should have the beginnings of a crescendo, quite strongly (piano can help you more with that [cello would if you were working with harpsichord]). 4:08 - 4:10 - should be ~very~ quiet with strong crescendo, 4:10 is very intense, dramatically. And again at each repetition until 4:16, major intensity (more volume - perhaps experiment with alternative fingering i.e. flattening so you can blow more?). Make *full* the note at 4:33.
Very good. As far as criticism goes, I think you need to work a little more on breath control. This will help with producing a stronger, fuller tone in the upper register as well. And if you employ vibrato, it should come deeply, from the diaphragm, not the throat.
I would make the dotted rhythms in the slow first movement more dotted and introduce more rhythmic vitaility, like a dance (have you seen really good French Baroque Dance? This will show you the feeling).
Great playing u hav a nice tone but my only issue was ur notes appeared to die away slightly as u went up a few of the high notes were slightly shaky and out of tune, u jst need more confidence with them. Fantastic ornamentation by the way, it's such a great piece in terms of what you can do with it, maybe increase ur dynamic range in it slightly although that was fairly good but slightly blockish. Great playing though.
Although not perfect, this is definitely one of the most impressive performance of this piece.
notaire2 5 months ago
as you ask a commenting in detail, I'll tell you that all you do is remarkably exact and expressiv- the tone, the sound itself is very lovely- i'm an amateur treble recorder player and have studied this music- so I know it is rather difficult- if you allow me to give advice, I would try to make my rendition a littel bit more daring and emotional, as your techique seems to allow that ( mine doesen't!!!)- let me congratulate!!!
magicflute3 5 months ago
Very well done.
brookwall 7 months ago
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axelabshalom 8 months ago
i have to play this for my lesson teacher and i'm sure this will be helpful!!
txtangel101 1 year ago
I could go on for ages on each little passage : )
I wish we were sitting with the score and instruments in front of us! I really enjoy this kind of work.
If you like, send me a message and we can go through it in detail.
(In case you are wondering, I used to study recorder at music college).
Thanks, I really enjoyed listening to this.
signingupiseasyd 1 year ago
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signingupiseasyd 1 year ago
If you don't mind, I'll add a little more : )
From 4:01 you should have the beginnings of a crescendo, quite strongly (piano can help you more with that [cello would if you were working with harpsichord]). 4:08 - 4:10 - should be ~very~ quiet with strong crescendo, 4:10 is very intense, dramatically. And again at each repetition until 4:16, major intensity (more volume - perhaps experiment with alternative fingering i.e. flattening so you can blow more?). Make *full* the note at 4:33.
signingupiseasyd 1 year ago
Very good. As far as criticism goes, I think you need to work a little more on breath control. This will help with producing a stronger, fuller tone in the upper register as well. And if you employ vibrato, it should come deeply, from the diaphragm, not the throat.
I would make the dotted rhythms in the slow first movement more dotted and introduce more rhythmic vitaility, like a dance (have you seen really good French Baroque Dance? This will show you the feeling).
signingupiseasyd 1 year ago
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signingupiseasyd 1 year ago
Great playing u hav a nice tone but my only issue was ur notes appeared to die away slightly as u went up a few of the high notes were slightly shaky and out of tune, u jst need more confidence with them. Fantastic ornamentation by the way, it's such a great piece in terms of what you can do with it, maybe increase ur dynamic range in it slightly although that was fairly good but slightly blockish. Great playing though.
DabaDooful 2 years ago
Magnifique ! Vous avez un son très doux et très expressif !
Estienne33Paris 2 years ago
Good playing! enjoyed...
rustydog1236 2 years ago
bravo!
unagondolaunremo 2 years ago
thank you very much. but do you mind commenting in detail on my playing? I would reapply appreciate it. thank you.
ShinAkiraX 2 years ago
Do forgive the mistakes.
ShinAkiraX 2 years ago