Judging by your Frightmare bg and your Razorback avatar, I bet you think I'm a "poser" for sometimes listening to "shitty metalcore," too, right? Lol, forgive me if I'm taking too many liberties here, but you elitist fucks are all the same. I don't know why you even bother. Fuck off.
Hnnnngggghhhh not a fan of this introspective approach to memory and time in poetry it's been done so many times so for me it really has to make in imprint, that's just me though. It's cool what you're doing though keep at it, though didn't get what the boneless at the end had to do with anything xD
I kind of interpreted it as me doing something I love, skateboarding, and leaving a mark on the world with it. And since all of life is based on perception, and the closest thing to 'forever' I see is the duration of my own life, that mark that I leave will last 'forever.' Which is exactly what the poem is about.
zzzzzzzz........ cool poetry
DarkWinnerFTW88 3 months ago
The video made me giggle at times. But the poetry was top notch, can't wait for more, brah.
chobitz7 4 months ago
you're a fucking faggot
dethronethesonofgod 4 months ago
Judging by your Frightmare bg and your Razorback avatar, I bet you think I'm a "poser" for sometimes listening to "shitty metalcore," too, right? Lol, forgive me if I'm taking too many liberties here, but you elitist fucks are all the same. I don't know why you even bother. Fuck off.
ANTIanitmetalclub 4 months ago
@ANTIanitmetalclub no i just think you're gay
dethronethesonofgod 4 months ago
Awesome, dude! I must say, I am envious of your poetic ability. Great job.
MrAjYes 4 months ago
@MrAjYes
Thanks, dude. :)
ANTIanitmetalclub 4 months ago
wow. This is honestly some of the best poetry I've heard.
m0sfett 4 months ago
@m0sfett
Wow. Well, that's encouragement if I've ever seen it. Haha, thanks a lot, man. :)
ANTIanitmetalclub 4 months ago
Way to make me feel insignificant............ next time use free verse, rhyming reminds me of Dr. Seuss
xXDrDeathDefyingXx 5 months ago
@xXDrDeathDefyingXx
No, dude, it's supposed to make you feel significant. lol
And really? Dr. Seuss wasn't the only one who rhymed, plenty of great poets rhymed.
ANTIanitmetalclub 4 months ago
@ANTIanitmetalclub I know, rhyming used to create unity, but i feel it restricts writers.
xXDrDeathDefyingXx 4 months ago
@xXDrDeathDefyingXx
I see where you're coming from, but definitely think it depends on the poem.
ANTIanitmetalclub 4 months ago
Hnnnngggghhhh not a fan of this introspective approach to memory and time in poetry it's been done so many times so for me it really has to make in imprint, that's just me though. It's cool what you're doing though keep at it, though didn't get what the boneless at the end had to do with anything xD
scream4thehellofit 5 months ago
@scream4thehellofit
I kind of interpreted it as me doing something I love, skateboarding, and leaving a mark on the world with it. And since all of life is based on perception, and the closest thing to 'forever' I see is the duration of my own life, that mark that I leave will last 'forever.' Which is exactly what the poem is about.
ANTIanitmetalclub 5 months ago
Where the fuck are the album reviews?
MetalMasochist 5 months ago 2
Surprisingly good poem, nice.
Kilgorin10 5 months ago
Nice!
DrummerMetalBoy 5 months ago
i wish i could write poetry :/ im not very good at it
erlc36 5 months ago
Are you seriously gay?
phillyphan4life94 5 months ago
@phillyphan4life94
lmao
ANTIanitmetalclub 5 months ago 4
this is amazing. my my my, Spencer, you sure are quite the talented poet.<3 Cx
oh, and i loved that skate outro, too, haha.
parawhorez 5 months ago 12
@parawhorez
thanks bouncycakes x]
ANTIanitmetalclub 5 months ago
Not my most enthusiastic performance, but I suppose that fits the apathy that's kind of part of the poem. Well, depending on how you read it. Eh.
ANTIanitmetalclub 5 months ago
@ANTIanitmetalclub genius.
chiaromontestephen 5 months ago
@chiaromontestephen
haha, wow. thanks bro :)
ANTIanitmetalclub 5 months ago