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From: ANTIanitmetalclub
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  • zzzzzzzz........ cool poetry

  • The video made me giggle at times. But the poetry was top notch, can't wait for more, brah.

  • you're a fucking faggot

  • Judging by your Frightmare bg and your Razorback avatar, I bet you think I'm a "poser" for sometimes listening to "shitty metalcore," too, right? Lol, forgive me if I'm taking too many liberties here, but you elitist fucks are all the same. I don't know why you even bother. Fuck off.

  • @ANTIanitmetalclub no i just think you're gay

  • Awesome, dude! I must say, I am envious of your poetic ability. Great job.

  • @MrAjYes

    Thanks, dude. :)

  • wow. This is honestly some of the best poetry I've heard.

  • @m0sfett

    Wow. Well, that's encouragement if I've ever seen it. Haha, thanks a lot, man. :)

  • Way to make me feel insignificant............ next time use free verse, rhyming reminds me of Dr. Seuss

  • @xXDrDeathDefyingXx

    No, dude, it's supposed to make you feel significant. lol

    And really? Dr. Seuss wasn't the only one who rhymed, plenty of great poets rhymed.

  • @ANTIanitmetalclub I know, rhyming used to create unity, but i feel it restricts writers.

  • @xXDrDeathDefyingXx

    I see where you're coming from, but definitely think it depends on the poem.

  • Hnnnngggghhhh not a fan of this introspective approach to memory and time in poetry it's been done so many times so for me it really has to make in imprint, that's just me though. It's cool what you're doing though keep at it, though didn't get what the boneless at the end had to do with anything xD

  • @scream4thehellofit

    I kind of interpreted it as me doing something I love, skateboarding, and leaving a mark on the world with it. And since all of life is based on perception, and the closest thing to 'forever' I see is the duration of my own life, that mark that I leave will last 'forever.' Which is exactly what the poem is about.

  • Where the fuck are the album reviews?

  • Surprisingly good poem, nice.

  • Nice!

  • i wish i could write poetry :/ im not very good at it

  • Are you seriously gay?

  • this is amazing. my my my, Spencer, you sure are quite the talented poet.<3 Cx

    oh, and i loved that skate outro, too, haha.

  • @parawhorez

    thanks bouncycakes x]

  • Not my most enthusiastic performance, but I suppose that fits the apathy that's kind of part of the poem. Well, depending on how you read it. Eh.

  • @ANTIanitmetalclub genius.

  • @chiaromontestephen

    haha, wow. thanks bro :)

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