Demi: What? Joe: You look incredible!! Demi: What?! Joe: Look in the mirror! *he pulls her by her slender waist and puts her in front of the mirror.* Demi: What? Joe: Don't tell me you don't see how beautiful you are. Demi: Uh... Joe: You don't see it?! Demi: uh...no... Lena: HOLY COW!!! DEMI!!! YOU LOOK SOO FRIGGIN HOT!! Nick: You really do look great Demi. Demi: What are you people talking about?! Joe: Demi, just look in the mirror. Demi: Yeah, so?
Demi: *looks back and smiles. She never realized how slim, yet curvy she was. She had long, lean, tan legs. Her arms were lean and tan. She had a very tiny waist. She had velvety smooth, clear skin. Her hair was shiny and flowy. Her chest looked pretty good too, not that she was looking or anything...hehe...* Wow. *she starts to cry happily*
Joe: I hope those are happy tears.
Demi: They are. I finally realized just how beautiful I really am.
haha, denise is gonna do like a major huggy attack...my mom does that alll the freaking time...so annoying, i can see y joe is backing up, haha i can relate
That was the most touching thing I have ever read in a fan fiction... I know it sounds dramatic but that was amazing! The way you described her and everything was perfect. And the things that Joe said to her were sweeter than anything out there...
I love your series and you guys are amazing writers(:
That has to be one of THE BEST comments we have ever gotten. We always work really hard. A lot of series rush relationships and don't put in a lot of detail. They are also not really realistic. We try to make ours as real as can be, so it confuses people sometimes! Some think this actually happened. HAHA! Yay! We also make them curse, because they obviously do! I mean, come on! They are teenagers! Of course they curse!! Famous or not.
Haha yeah I like it when it is realistic.. Some of the stories I have read are just like "Demi, I like you. Okay! *they kiss*" and im like what?!? that doesnt happen!?!
i bet his moms gunna b lik
O im proud of u ur lik my little hero and blahblahblah
stuff tht proud mothers say
xxRoxtheVioletxx 1 year ago
uh, what are webkinz or whaever it was
dudeofdrizzle 1 year ago
Nick: Ya. Adorable. I only like mushy when it involves me.
Lena: Whoever said you were sensitive was seriously off.
Nick: *scoffs* Now you're the butthead.
Lena: *looks at him and sticks her tongue out*
Nick: *rolls his eyes*
lol!!
DemiSelandJB 2 years ago
aww... joe is embarrassed...xD
EcilaCrown 2 years ago
HOLLY COW! lmao!
RoDiaz96 2 years ago
taetae7811 3 years ago 4
Joe: Instead of looking at the things you don't like, look at the things you do.
Demi: Well...I kinda like my legs...
Joe: Yeah, and...?
Demi: I like my arms...
Joe: Keep going...
Demi: I like my face! And my hair! My waist is lookin' pretty smokin' too.
taetae7811 3 years ago
Joe: Now do you see it? Instead of focusing on what you don't like, focus on the whole of you, and especially what you like.
Demi: *looks back in the mirror and sees a gorgeous, slim yet curvy brunette* Who's that? *points to the mirror*
Joe: Demi. That's you.
taetae7811 3 years ago
Demi: *looks back and smiles. She never realized how slim, yet curvy she was. She had long, lean, tan legs. Her arms were lean and tan. She had a very tiny waist. She had velvety smooth, clear skin. Her hair was shiny and flowy. Her chest looked pretty good too, not that she was looking or anything...hehe...* Wow. *she starts to cry happily*
Joe: I hope those are happy tears.
Demi: They are. I finally realized just how beautiful I really am.
taetae7811 3 years ago
dunb youtube should have let me put it as 1 whole!
taetae7811 3 years ago
haha, denise is gonna do like a major huggy attack...my mom does that alll the freaking time...so annoying, i can see y joe is backing up, haha i can relate
AL3XAb3xaroxsurworld 3 years ago
Demi: *turns around and hugs him* You have changed my life so much Joe Jonas.
Joe: As long as it is in a good way, then I'm glad.
Lena: How cute.
Nick: Ya. Adorable. I only like mushy when it involves me.
Lena: Whoever said you were sensitive was seriously off.
Nick: *scoffs* Now you're the butthead.
Lena: *looks at him and sticks her tongue out*
Nick: *rolls his eyes*
WOW.i started laughing reallly hard about wat selena said!
clubjulie 3 years ago 4
Awesome.
dilalva89 3 years ago
if ur a huge jemi fan come check out my series!
purplefishesandtoads 3 years ago
damn, demi cries a lot.
zanyb 3 years ago
gahh, i agree wit the crying too much .
kind of annoying, but its all good .
i love thissss (:
hi159 3 years ago
lol Frankie was like
Ya better watch out Nick I'm gonna steal you're girlfriend lol so funny
coolbluej 3 years ago
Oh.My.God.
That was the most touching thing I have ever read in a fan fiction... I know it sounds dramatic but that was amazing! The way you described her and everything was perfect. And the things that Joe said to her were sweeter than anything out there...
I love your series and you guys are amazing writers(:
emuwho82 3 years ago
That has to be one of THE BEST comments we have ever gotten. We always work really hard. A lot of series rush relationships and don't put in a lot of detail. They are also not really realistic. We try to make ours as real as can be, so it confuses people sometimes! Some think this actually happened. HAHA! Yay! We also make them curse, because they obviously do! I mean, come on! They are teenagers! Of course they curse!! Famous or not.
XOXO,
Selena + Sabrina
ilovekevinjonas192 3 years ago
Haha yeah I like it when it is realistic.. Some of the stories I have read are just like "Demi, I like you. Okay! *they kiss*" and im like what?!? that doesnt happen!?!
hahahaha And im sure they do curse.. lol :D
emuwho82 3 years ago 2
haha i like that little dude Frankie haha hes all like to Nick "oohhh she called me man u better watch out Nick ima still ur g/f" haha
lalalalalala43266 3 years ago
this marathon is the best !! :)
ezigbonne 3 years ago
i cant wait for the next one
babybumxox 3 years ago
cant wait for next one!!
random7x5x2 3 years ago