Also, Thats a large jump cut of about 10 seconds which loses some continuity. Buy an tripod also because the camera is shaking and I don't think you are doing that on purpose. Great use of soundtrack to set the mood. Good translation too but I think in the beginning when the girlfriend says "soon-ah" it more literally translates to "Fine then" not "Forget it."
Not bad! Try to vary your cinematography a bit it has way more closeups and medium shots than establishing shots. For example, a shot of the outside of the house with the protagonist standing in the middle along with a closeup of the protagonist's reaction would help show the difference in size of Hong Kong homes and American homes. Also some continuity editing would help. It was weird to be outside the house entering then all of a sudden both of them are standing in the kitchen.
morris yam!!!
eyeballball3 1 month ago in playlist A Picture's Worth
Hey, Great short series. I was wondering what is the name of that song in the beginning.
2fat2slow123 2 years ago
lol u would just ask that brandon
monkeypoopoo000 2 years ago
Rainbow-Jay Chou :P
Andewwww 2 years ago
i love all the episodes
mimilee693 3 years ago
i dont get it why dont he call her back? >:( !!! xD pretty good
Yaminaki 3 years ago
Steven looks like my boyfriend... and my cousin... MADNESS
TentacleSex 3 years ago
Good start.
k4ze35 3 years ago
You guys will love episode 4 :P
Andewwww 3 years ago
Thank you for all the comments and feedback everyone! Glad you enjoyed it :) Be on the lookout for episode 2...coming in 10 days!!
lamboot 3 years ago
This episode is HECKA BOMB! Good job!
fredc86 3 years ago
cooooool :)
togepilover12 3 years ago
pretty good! =) looking forward to episode 2!
oOHeavenlyStarOo 3 years ago
Tony Lomo?
chucknoinorris 3 years ago
Also, Thats a large jump cut of about 10 seconds which loses some continuity. Buy an tripod also because the camera is shaking and I don't think you are doing that on purpose. Great use of soundtrack to set the mood. Good translation too but I think in the beginning when the girlfriend says "soon-ah" it more literally translates to "Fine then" not "Forget it."
xstanz 3 years ago
Not bad! Try to vary your cinematography a bit it has way more closeups and medium shots than establishing shots. For example, a shot of the outside of the house with the protagonist standing in the middle along with a closeup of the protagonist's reaction would help show the difference in size of Hong Kong homes and American homes. Also some continuity editing would help. It was weird to be outside the house entering then all of a sudden both of them are standing in the kitchen.
xstanz 3 years ago
Episode 2!!
NokeSquall 3 years ago
Can't wait till episode 2! :]
ROFLdarling 3 years ago