Co-Write w/ Kina - Part III (Verse 2)

[commentscommence]

I hope you are blessed enough to be married to whoever makes you feel this way and that they carry the same desire for you. Rejoice in such fruit; it is both delicate and strong.

[anxietyawaynow]

just stopping by

[TheExtremeMarketing]

great videos

[anxietyawaynow]

cool channel...

[anxietyawaynow]

i like your channel. nice videos

[anxietyawaynow]

i like your channel, its cool

[TarketMarket]

i like your channel

[IDAlecious]

KINA! WE NEED CHORDS FOR THIS SONG!

[librano]

You have the most beautiful hair :)

^Creepy comment... but it's true!

[roo0027]

kina you are soo soo awesome!

[5275275275275]

Haven`t watched this video, in like 3 week`s or so, and really just to listen to you talk, makes me smile, your very adorable, such a nice person, and of course, a unique beautiful voice,

[TheForgottenXXVII]

I don't know if it's the fact that it's a co-write or your voice, but something about this song touches me deep within my soul. I was utterly captivated by it.

[Anjex3]

This song is coming along so great

I love the melody of the chorus

and the lyrics are amazing, not cheesy like a lot of songs these days yay!

great job to kate and brent

[RKusakabe]

It was fun writing. Hadn't done anything like that since high school english...KinaGrannis rocks!!!

[lisacherie85]

Wow kina. and everyone who is co-writing. this is turning into an amazing song!

[ameena101]

i totally love you!! ur awesome and so is ur music!

[isangelotanglao]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

i missed the lake forest concert

im goin to the one in anaheim for sure! <33

[SamWongX3]

Happy Birthday Kina, Hope you have a lovely day :)

My ipod is now used more often after adding your songs :') 

[helloo1o1]

I just subbed to brent morgan because his lyrics are beautiful

[seagullacoostix1]

this is an awesome idea. i'm a new subscriber of yours and and i think you're incredibly talented. you've got a way of connecting to your music that i think is going to help you get to where you want to be. i'm glad i stumbed across some of your videos, i'm going to be a fan of yours till the end. you're awesome, i look forward to seeing the turnout of this song and i wish you the best of luck with your future endeavors.

[AmbiixROX]

now sadly we part this sweet embrace Say our goodbyes and go our separate ways And I can’t explain just how wrong this feels leaving you But maybe again we’ll find this love to be true ‘cause…(all this time i was broken etc.) please go to the mod, and vote for my lyrics <3 please please please.

[AmbiixROX]

vote for my lyrics! pleeaseeeee!

[Cacity87]

This is such a cool idea! I am going to give it a shot. be back to post soon. :)

[figuresk8er4lyfebabe]

(8)As the days go on I hear your voice in me, telling me that we were meant to be, oh, And as time starts to pass us by, i lose all self-conbtrol, and i wonder if its worth it anymore... (8) PLEASE GO VOTE FOR MY LYRICS :)

[weneedacase]

( these are my lyrics)->♪♫-I cant believe how much im into you.i've been really really missin you,ohh, and now i have absolutely no clue on what to do,because all that's on my mind is you-♪♫ PLEASE GO VOTE FOR MY LYRICS ON KINA'S PAGE

[MagicTDS5]

Wow the song is coming along Great can't wait to hear the whole thing once it's done =]

[ily11493]

how do u vote!

[weneedacase]

@ily11493 go to her page and scroll down and im pretty sure you'll see it :)

[androwo9]

CAN YOU PLEASE TELL THE WongFuProductions TO DO MORE VIDEOS

PPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAA­AAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE

THUMPS UP IF YOU AGREE

[Otulissa22]

The song's going along really well :)

[weneedacase]

i really hope that people will notice my lyrics i put down :) i really like it :D so please please please vote for mine! :) <3

[livelycanvas]

you are such an amazing person kina!

[gitts212]

The video that has 350 votes is nice but has nothing to do with the song?! I hope you consider that before using it because it'll ruin the song....

[7Flyleafrks7]

I'm not saying the lyrics are bad, but I think the words love and heart are a bit overused! Yeah, it's a love song, but still!

[h2soccergod]

you're so adorable. meet me for coffee :)

[Gumby518]

aargh! the mobile site doesn't have a subscribe button! (mytouch3g)

[choITSELF]

KINA! i saw you yesterday! :) ILY! It was sooo awesome meeting you! driving 6 hrs was completely worth it!!! :D

[DestinyQx]

aw man, i have like 30 thumbs down, guys, im obviously not a singer, just imagine kina singing them :o)

[Dustypilgrim1]

@DestinyQx

I wouldn't be too disheartened . There are also people using strategic voting. The guys who are fans of posters with big subscription lists are voting down other posters , as they think it will influence other voters and secure outcomes forr their favs. Don't worry about it , keep writing .

[rnb8220]

@GreenRiceInc I kind of agree with you. For me, the lyrics that are currently in first don't make much sense w/ the rest of the song but @KendallTitiml lyrics fit the rest of the song for me.

That's my 2 cents I guess. The song should be great regardless of what happens with the votes.

wonder if @kinagrannis will do any slight fine tuning of any phrasing in the winning lyrics to suit the way she prefers to say things while singing?

[ThatBoyRyan1]

how do you get the notes used so i can play it on my guitar ! <3 x

[jestert6]

As i lay here in the bed my heart now bleeds

It's nearly morning, time is the enemy

It would only take a moment, spare a minute of your time

Take your fingers lock them in with mine....

check the moderator to see my video performing my idea!

(to get there search any of the above lyrics)

[Dustypilgrim1]

to anyone who has been unable to upload on the moderator.

Have another go.

I couldn't upload a straight post of lyrics , BUT , It would upload a video clip thing I had been playing with. I tried that as an experiment and was surprised when that worked.

Odd...

Something seems to have partly deglitched in the mod'.

Maybe you will manage this time and finally be in with a chance.

Best of luck to you.

[freakydancegirl]

this is sooo awesome...

greetings :-)

[rukarla11]

awwww. she's just so adorable! she's so cute!

[blingydee72]

just don't start the song with "as"

[1mazn]

Thanks for signing my Taylor!! :)

[powerranger0111]

it's unfortunate because the only users who get recognized in your moderator sections are the ones who post a video of them singing. i'm not a singer, but i'm a great songwriter - unfortunately people don't have imagination. they need to see it in front of them. shitttty.

[choITSELF]

I just got back from your concert! AMAZING<3

[Daisy67126]

I like those lyrics together.  I think they turned out really nice.

[layeredmusic13]

why does it say put in nickname when I already did? please helppp i really wanna enter :/

[jlim200]

the taylor koa getting some love! yay

[SaraSail]

You're doing some pretty amazing work..

[DestinyQx]

i just submitted my lyrics :o) and a video, ah so nerve wracking

so if not today then when should we begin

to live our lives, feel fine inside our skin

i know it's hard for you to trust anyone after all u've been through

well, it's just as hard for me to fall for you

[pinaycx]

hey aren't you the girl who guest stars on wong fu productions..?

[layeredmusic13]

@pinaycx yeppppppp she is

[JenRoxGuitar]

I wish their were a way to disconnect the thumbs down button :( I respect the opinion of the people, but it's so discouraging. I am assuming everyone has put in time and effort to come up with words/videos that only get thumbs down... If they don't agree with someones lyrics, then all they do is not give it a thumbs up. I hope someone agrees with me, or this could be a very awkward comment. haha.

[Uhlisahh]

@JenRoxGuitar So true!Why the negativity everyone? It really doesn't help at all.

[mossy44sammoss]

@JenRoxGuitar Definitely!!! you're so right! I spent ages working on my lyrics, i got like.... 3likes and about 20 thumbs down, gutted!

[katie4596ily]

@JenRoxGuitar no i totally agree with you! that makes a lot of sense. I think that people should just leave the lyrics and only vote for the ones they like. the purpose of this isn't to put people down, just to make a good song. and it is turning into a good song... for everyone who reads this, please just vote for the good ones, and try not to vote down anyone! :)

[kwengkynator]

@JenRoxGuitar yeah that is right.. Kina feels the same too.. that is why on her previous co-write video she said that she "Dont even bother on hatin on other people" *forgot the other exact words* cause she wont count the thumbs down :)

[HyperSugarKid]

@JenRoxGuitar I dont agree at all

[rwdyer1981]

@JenRoxGuitar Totally agree with you. More people should take the advice of Thumper's father, if you can't say nothin nice, don't say nothin at all, or something like that. ;)

[Astrobasego91]

You should have one verse in the real song just be na's. :D

[akaTheFatTuba]

omg im like so close but no way to the park ughhhhh lol songs comin along great! :)

[5275275275275]

your talking, is just as *amazing as your singing* i don`t think it`s just me, who think`s that, your voice, the way you explain stuff, most of the time, i don`t even like to listen to people TALK!!!! i know!!! im a little wired

[lazyhusband]

i like free.  ha.

[safetydancer87]

Not sure why you bothered to put the time for the song start. no one would ever skip listening to you talk!

[bmwz20]

its so refreshing to see an artist who truly cares about their music and has such a personal connection with their fans. I wish you the best

[rdbkam]

i love it!!!

[koolkoynz]

YAAAY!!! Even though I can't make it to your concert, I still can have the joy of knowing that you are singing for a live crowd on my birthday!!!! So cool...thanks for the birthday gift (even though you didn't know it:)

[c3ntaurius]

You're lovely. Excellent voice, you could start sharing more cheerful tunes from time to time no? :)

[marilouu92]

Kina ! You make this so beautiful ..

i can't wait for some more of these music geniuses to write the rest of this song !!

Is there somewhere you have the tab/tutorial for how to play this ?

[jestert6]

search the lyrics "my heart now bleeds" to see my video in the moderator section! thanks guys! : )

[loquillosabio]

Always great listen your beatiful voice lady =), grettings from México

[MadilynBailey]

Thank you sooooooooooooooo much Kina!!!! I really cannot believe that you made a shout out to me!!!! I am so flattered!!!! You really are a sweet person!!!! I had a TON of fun with Part 2 and it means so much to me that you would do this for me!!!! WAY TO GO Brent!!!!! He has a stunning voice!!!! And good luck to the people who enter Part 3!!!! I hope you have as much fun as I did!!!!! THanks again Kina!!!! Maddy :)

[HikariDS]

Would like to come from Japan to LA but I can't (=_=)

[KendallTitiml]

Hey everyone, please check out my entry on the moderator and "Like" it if you do, im second most popular but still down by almost a hundred votes. :( lol.... k. thanks

One Love,

Kendall

[BURNSTAHANA]

Your pretty and you have a nice voice=D I like how your on fun employed

[choITSELF]

KINA! ILY! ur sooo cute and talented! I want to see you on sunday, because i heading down there! i love you in funemployed! ur my favorite!

i'm new to youtube and i was hoping you could subscribe and check out my videos please! just a simple click will help us out a lot. think of it as your deed of the day! thanks for your time~:) We are donating pillows to the homeless if we get enough subs!

[oyarrito]

Whne are you going to be back up in the Pacific Northwest?

[Uhlisahh]

@Uhlisahh I truly learned today It's hurts to be alone,

Your here, but the doors halfway closed,

Im torn it's true,so what are we to do oh,

whats my heart going to do,my heart without you?

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This is what I wanted to enter in but everytime I try it tells me to enter nickname even if I already have,Im logged into my google,& im using IE but it's still not working!!Please Help.Also what do you think?Should I enter it in?

[lonelysoly95]

you're trully amazing :O

[wutanghax0r]

I have a suggestions that's probably coming too late... :-] lyrics should be accepted for the first week and then voting should happen the second week. Videos that come in on the second week, or even late the first week, are already way behind in votes right when they are posted... It's just a thought. I love that you are doing this and it's awesome no matter what. :)

[solepsis]

Ha. "So, you log into Youtube. Like this..." 1:53

[drewby1xo]

what are the chords ?

[hewittdj1]

I wish I could come, but I live all the way in Nova Scotia Canada. I wish I could fly out.

[moogle72]

my gosh she is so pretty <3

[alesbica]

Everything sounds great except for that blatant error in the first line of the song! It should NOT be "lay"; it should be "lie". You only use "lay" if you're laying something or someone down besides yourself or if you use it in the past tense to refer to yourself. Otherwise, the word should be "lie down".

[Abigailfaith05]

madilyn bailey <3 ! should have deffinately won it <3 :)

[CalistarzZ]

damn girl im in love with you seriously.. :))

[libbytheflippy]

you look gorgeous!

[minismartie08]

it seems that most people are only voting for people upload a video with their lyrics

[rockboy95bahjat]

Hey Kina .

i have to say this is the most incredible thing a singer have ever done

i thought of it b4 u post it but i dont have any fans . ur lucky

im trying to get fans posting videos . and i wanna enter this contest

it could help to bring me some fans and Co-write with one of my best singers of all time . :) . can i enter or its just females??

[Nickbuskirk]

The problem with a lot of the lyrics being submitted is people abuse "oh" as a filler for the beat. Some of them have "oh" in every single line, and a few more than once per line.

[flyaznguy85]

Hey Kina,

Love how this song is coming along! The lyrics to Verse 1, the Pre-Chorus & Chorus are all amazing (Big props to Kate McGill and Brent Morgan)- and they transition nicely too; not to mention that your voice adds a whole new element of awesome to the song :P. I'm sure you get this a lot, but, you and your voice are absolutely beautiful. It's hard to describe. Your voice is melanchony, yet, at the same time, uplifting. Hope to see you live if and when you're in the Northeast again.

[techdribble]

@alphacat mentioned you in a video. The man has great taste. Bought your album just amazing.

[jireh214]

Hi, Kina! I'm tryin to submit a lyrics suggestion for your co writing contest but it says there "You must provide a nickname" but I already did, it just keeps on saying that... Please go check out the video I made on my channel but I just can't submit it... :( :(

[Astrobasego91]

Soo... um, this is turning out to be like, amazing, and yeah, so.. uh yeah,

can't wait to hear the whole thing, but it's already really really good loll =]

Thank you for singing and being creative and stuffff =]

[englanddg]

Wow, congrats to winner.  Fantastic lyrics!

[pennylanedaria]

funny)) you're talking judt like Imogen Heap on her vlog;)) u must be a huge fan of her))

[creasybear3]

i could watch and listen to your humming all day!

[nickcmusic]

The moderator keeps asking for a nickname, but I already made one and it still won't work. My google account is linked to my Youtube account and I tried the IE browser, and I'm still having problems. Is there any other way I can participate in the co-write???

[Truelove777]

High Fiver!

[marilyndarlingshow]

what time in the park 

[GreenRiceInc]

I hope whoever's lyrics get voted actually make sense with what this song has come to be about. A lot of people are posting good lyrics, but they don't make sense with the chorus. There's no continuity.

I just feel like this song shouldn't be so complicated and it feels like it should just be a simple, heartfelt story telling. Nothing too complicated. But people are looking for too much and overthinking.

Idk. Maybe I'm just weird, but that's how I feel.

[KendallTitiml]

@GreenRiceInc VOTE FOR ME!!!! lol...

[masterhide]

@GreenRiceInc Seriously. & the voting system is weird, I feel like it makes it easy to cheat, because the one that's the most popular right now doesn't even make sense. I thought this was a happy song. But her verse gets all dark & depressing out of no where.. Am I wrong?

[GreenRiceInc]

@masterhide well, just listening to verse 1alone, it could be taken both ways. And yeah, I agree with you on the voting system. But it seems it can't be helped. Oh well, there will be more opportunities like this for everyone and maybe some with a lot of the kinks worked out, hopefully.

[mossy44sammoss]

@GreenRiceInc Yeah and also everybody is just voting everyone elses lyrics down! which is pathetic because it's a matter of people voting honestly against people cheating...

[iamalostchildofGod]

@GreenRiceInc.. ya i think ur weird.lol..na jokin...hey i found out from my mistakes that you are right.continutity is wat most of us missed. write this song as same person wrote the first verse and the chorus and you are the same person writing verse 2.Remember these elements while you are writing-melody of the song, song pattern -words arrangement, (i thot it dint make sense but i was corrected with love), continuity or justify the situation. is thera ny more any one can add?

[GreenRiceInc]

@iamalostchildofGod Nah, I think you've got the basics all down. =]

[iamalostchildofGod]

we ve got enough time until july 1.so guys make fresh entries if ur not satisfied.improve.practice.(i dont like practice.but my views are being changed).practice until you become perfect.be slow and dont be quick to respond.go over your minds to make sound judgement.sometime ur mind tries to create barriers while making judgement .go over these barriers .like my this work is gud i wont accept a new style. open your heart to new ideas.be patient.

wen u learn to master sumthing u devlop patience

[iamalostchildofGod]

@iamalostchildofGod ..yikes we got enuf time until august 3.sorry : P.

with love from an unfinished chair

[ciciy2006]

the moderator thingie won't work for me ):

[3MiLy777]

wish the concert was sunday. :(

[MrAbdulmaster]

YOU ARE SO CUTE!

[kengojames]

So i've had stairwells for a long time now and I havent been listening to it like alot alot i have alot but yeah i started running in the morning rather than what most people do listen to like hiphop or upbeat "pumping up" music i listen to kina! I LOVE YOU KINA!!!

[kengojames]

You know that we are meant for one another/ But you fool yourself even further/ And I can't escape this feeling I get/ what it is I have no clue/ But if I could love just one it would be you

please vote for mine on kina's channel it would REALLY appreciate it :D

[kaylahopper]

i love how this is coming together. so beautiful.

[HIGSOFX]

Amazing song so far.

It's beautiful. :')

I enjoyed your humming, too!? :L

[Jimboslim3]

This is going to be a great song. :-)

[ABUIK]

i know you off of fun employment

YOUR SO GOOOOOOD

KEEP WORKING HARD

IM A FAN FOR LIFE

[jballa756]

OmG You Are So Beautiful.

[patch0482]

I enjoy just the humming at the end.

[chaotickandes]

oh my goodness, you talked to ingrid michaelson! *jealous*

[alisonmadisson]

Stairwells arrived today! I can't stop listening to it ... (:

I'm learning your songs on guitar too, even though I'm just a beginner, haha.

You're my inspiration, please never stop being you.

<3

[XJackAlmostTooMuchX]

I don't have a google account, so here is my suggestion:

Misconceptions take a while to lay to rest

Can’t believe I couldn’t tell you were the best, yeah

And it seems unreal I didn’t notice every time I left your side,

My heart felt torn apart deep down inside

[TheJosephRue]

i love it.

[rnmlover]

Emily Haines???? Did you meet her? Shes so amazing!!

[rnb8220]

If I come to the Vancouver, Canada show of the Fall tour, could I draw a quick portrait of you after the show during the meet & greet?

Oh, and introduce you to the magical, culture crossing hot dog stand + eatery + Vancouver original Japadog?

[BFCson]

you should come to maui, Hawaii =)

[DJHDOG]

Its still a little rough but it's coming along

[jeffdogs1]

kina grannis is the cutest girl alive i hope my future wife is anything like her

[jhernandez16]

good luck coming up with a title. haha

[Silvia112290]

what time will you be at lake forest on sunday?

[TOKIOXTC]

Awwwww. July 25th's my brithday! I wish I lived close to I could come to the show! Meeting you would be such an awsome birthday gift!

You're such an inspiration to me!

- kira xo

[jhernandez16]

@TOKIOXTC my birthday too. :)

[5275275275275]

there`s ALWAY`s something in a girls face, thats not quite right, a little something, that is just a little off, just a *tiny itly bitly little something* thats not quite perfect,~ can`t find it hear~~~

[Bumling]

NO WAY!!! There is no such thing as Love at first youtube. not fair. never been so vulnerable in my whole life. Seriously if you ever need the greater half of my liver or I don't know, my heart. There yours.

[AliOnz]

ur beautiful, u have a nice smile, ur seem nice, and u sing good xD.

ur like one of those "perfect girls" a guy would want xD

[MarySai3]

beautiful voice!

[MusicIsALifeTime]

only 4 people missed the like button

[aznleeo7o6]

Kina you're BEA-U-TI-FUL!! and talented! I LOVE YOU!!! <3

[tylerbrutus]

The technical solution to the moderator issue is - try going there using Internet Explorer instead of using Firefox if that was the browser you were running when trying to get to the moderator. I could not get there with Firefox but could with Internet Explorer! James Love aka Tylerbrutus

[FireStopperTech]

Kina, Today I discovered ALTHOUGH i COULDN'T GET TO MODERATOR WITH MY FIREFOX BROWSER WHEN I SWITCHED TO internet explorer everything WORKED FINE! The solution is to use IE browser not Firefox.

Sincerely,

James Love

[FireStopperTech]

kina!I I solved the moderator problem? As during last week,

signed into my google account and youtube. Went to yur channel page via the ink, and there was no moderator found.BUT then I opened my IE browser instead of FIREFOX and behold, when I clicked on your link, there was the MODERATOR. My conclousion is users of Firefox browsers may not be able to get to the moderator howeve if they use INTERNET EXPLORER they should have no problem. I hopes this helps people. Sincerely, James Love

[rockboy95bahjat]

@FireStopperTech hello , i used both firefox and internetexplorer . but it says u must provide a nickname and i put the nickname but it still says that :( i need to join it plzzz reply

[hokie28]

wow, u'r really cute

[Houdiniwhizz721]

I don't know if you'll read this, but I was thinking that all of the people that help write this should do it in a collaboration together when it's all written, they sing the part they wrote with you..

Dunno if that makes sense, but I think it'd be really cool, because they have great voices!

[whosGeoff]

well, i am a rapper but don't worry not too harsh :) and i would love to rap on "Message From Your Heart" , i'll have a video to show you soon :) might play it on the ukulele if i can figure out the chords haha

[whosGeoff]

i don't know what's more beautiful, your smile or your music :) either way, i'm a fan of both!

[wozzers2]

kina the next song u cover has to be goo goo dolls iris a beautiful song and itihkn youd do it justice could always do teenage dirtbag wheatus lmao and kina u gotta come europe chick i keep telling you this but you gotta come we in england really wanna see youlike ive said numerous times i reall y don't care where in england

[ychan1]

you have SUCH an amazing voice whether you're singing or just talking! basically - ahhhhhh!! ♥ ^_^

[Shoxknight]

i Love it. i am so into watching all the new videos. keep them coming plz :)  oh whats the name of the song in the background i know i have heard it before just can't remember the name. and btw your voice is magical

[kinagrannis]

@Shoxknight it's called "people"-- from my album Sincerely, Me. it's on itunes!

[Shoxknight]

@kinagrannis thank you. i will go buy that on itunes right now if i don't have it already :)

[kwengkynator]

"People" yay!! one of my faves :D

[henryc1978]

WHEN ARE YOU COMING TO FLORIDA?

[TransparentFairy]

Kina, I loved your CG! interview ..you are such an amazing person ..love, Klara.

[Emilyrockzxo12]

ur a real good singer:)

[lovelol3]

i lost myself in your voice

[lovelol3]

you can see that she gows up in her music

[TheBeefybri]

Awe, you are sweet, Kina. Keep up with your dream.

[SAMS0C00L94]

this song will end up very beautiful.

[Y3KBeats]

your hottt

[HardcoreSoccerChick]

wow when this song is finished, PLEASE make a place so we can download it. I want it