appreciate the fact that ur stayin true to the art form.
keep spittin. work on the flow just a little.
"Lines is ill like a nigga having a thing for dikes
No one hit wonder" yo you couldve had nice wordplay right there if you woulda said "like a nigga havin a thing for dikes, NO ONE HIT wonder" cuz dudes cant fuck dikes cuz dikes dont like dudes. so NO ONE HITS it hahaha
@itzFundamental Thanks alot for the feedback man it's heavil appreciate it. And yeah I'm tryna keep it to the lyrical roots.
Haha I like the way you put those lines together, Imma definitely start putting in more time in tweaking my verses, If I delivered it like that it that would had been mad hot. Good lookin' on the feedback again man, keep in touch
yo i was feelin it man.
appreciate the fact that ur stayin true to the art form.
keep spittin. work on the flow just a little.
"Lines is ill like a nigga having a thing for dikes
No one hit wonder" yo you couldve had nice wordplay right there if you woulda said "like a nigga havin a thing for dikes, NO ONE HIT wonder" cuz dudes cant fuck dikes cuz dikes dont like dudes. so NO ONE HITS it hahaha
itzFundamental 1 year ago
@itzFundamental Thanks alot for the feedback man it's heavil appreciate it. And yeah I'm tryna keep it to the lyrical roots.
Haha I like the way you put those lines together, Imma definitely start putting in more time in tweaking my verses, If I delivered it like that it that would had been mad hot. Good lookin' on the feedback again man, keep in touch
Certifed74 1 year ago