Just some constructive criticism. I liked it, but it didn't seem like you connected with it emotionally. You do have a grasp of where the character is coming from, but you're not there with him. The monologue you chose is extremely emotional and every time you do it, you have to 'go there' emotionally.
@PoetryIsMe I greatly appreciate the comment! I can tell you know what you're talking about. Perfecting my craft won't end and neither will these videos:) Please continue to watch and give feedback.
Just some constructive criticism. I liked it, but it didn't seem like you connected with it emotionally. You do have a grasp of where the character is coming from, but you're not there with him. The monologue you chose is extremely emotional and every time you do it, you have to 'go there' emotionally.
PoetryIsMe 5 months ago
@PoetryIsMe I greatly appreciate the comment! I can tell you know what you're talking about. Perfecting my craft won't end and neither will these videos:) Please continue to watch and give feedback.
J.R.
JRYussuf 5 months ago