Oh my, Lina, how ever did I MISS this poem before? Was it not public for a while? No matter, I have found it and I think I may be in love with you. :) P.S. Brian and I have sat here watching it multiple times, and he wanted me to tell you he loves it because it was so subtle and poignantly understated. Five stars from us! (I do miss the stars...)
Digging a little deeper into my friend's channels today. Nice way to spend a rainy afternoon while the laundry is in. Might I be silly enough to say that I love your kitchen? And the kitty cat.
All of this is said because YouTube itself is being a stubborn git today, and will not let me see past the 28 second mark of this video! Sigh... I like the poem as written, but hopefully, the tube will unstick itself and I can hear your reading next time I come back and visit. Thank you, Lina! :)
Such a lovely voice!!! I could listen to you all day!! - often the overshadowed are the most tragic and most forgotten, but you have the eye and most of all integrity to bring this to the world's attention 5*****
I saw Aeronwy Thomas once at an open mike night at the Poetry Cafe in Covent Garden.
I never asked her whether she liked my poor poetry but Im sure your beautiful tribute poem would have made her smile. Im still thinking about, she mourns; sideways on.
Carrying and caring for the legacy of a famous parent must, in many instances, be quite a burden. This, I think, especially true when so much distortion and lies are perpetuated. For me this really came through in your poem. But also something of the tenderness and regard in which you held her. I can believe that this is a memory you really cherish.
darn!!!! iread the poem first before hearing the pre-amble and thought,bless lina...she's written a poem where she's imagined meeting me!.....scream!!!!!....in all seriousness lina...it's a great poem.
What a wonderful idea for a poem--loved hearing this memory of yours via such a lovely conduit. These lines, " It was like meeting the Queen/And Bob Dylan all at once,/Uncanny where loyalties lie" are just great. And the ending "she mourns; sideways on" is perfect.
Oh my, Lina, how ever did I MISS this poem before? Was it not public for a while? No matter, I have found it and I think I may be in love with you. :) P.S. Brian and I have sat here watching it multiple times, and he wanted me to tell you he loves it because it was so subtle and poignantly understated. Five stars from us! (I do miss the stars...)
sonofwalt 8 months ago
@sonofwalt Just one response (two responses) like this make it all worthwhile. It is so rare and infinitely valuable to be so understood. Thank you!
PoetLina 8 months ago
Digging a little deeper into my friend's channels today. Nice way to spend a rainy afternoon while the laundry is in. Might I be silly enough to say that I love your kitchen? And the kitty cat.
All of this is said because YouTube itself is being a stubborn git today, and will not let me see past the 28 second mark of this video! Sigh... I like the poem as written, but hopefully, the tube will unstick itself and I can hear your reading next time I come back and visit. Thank you, Lina! :)
sonofwalt 1 year ago
Did I not comment on this poem? What is going on with me?
Such a very crisp and subtle poem. I love the lines:
"it was like meeting the Queen
And Bob Dylan all at once,
Uncanny where loyalties lie"
Love that simile and that it ends with "lie."
tinySpectacle 2 years ago
Thank you and thank you for having a good eye for a lie. :-)
PoetLina 2 years ago
this is my third time here for this lovely piece. it gets better with each listening.
Paul
PaulBradford13 2 years ago
Such a lovely voice!!! I could listen to you all day!! - often the overshadowed are the most tragic and most forgotten, but you have the eye and most of all integrity to bring this to the world's attention 5*****
haliastales 2 years ago
Thank you. Humbly I treasure your comment.
PoetLina 2 years ago
I saw Aeronwy Thomas once at an open mike night at the Poetry Cafe in Covent Garden.
I never asked her whether she liked my poor poetry but Im sure your beautiful tribute poem would have made her smile. Im still thinking about, she mourns; sideways on.
Regards, Peter
nordicsky 2 years ago
Must, must make my way to the Poetry Cafe one day. Perhaps we'll meet up there. Yours, in profile... H.
PoetLina 2 years ago
What a lovely poem, I love the way you read aswell. Beautiful. :-)
fellowtuber123 2 years ago
Thank you for such a kind comment. : )
PoetLina 2 years ago
A very personal tribute, beautifully chosen words. Poetry can be a great way to paint a portrait, 5* for this one.
dashpoet 2 years ago
From one painter to another, I thank you.
PoetLina 2 years ago
A most kindly and moving tribute & poem. I liked 'green memories bitter as the acid of unearned royalties.'
brychar66 2 years ago
Thank you, Charles. Yes, "green" as in DT's most oft quoted lines, but also 'singing'; see my latest favourite. : )
PoetLina 2 years ago
nice poem
mft1234 2 years ago
Thank you kindly.
PoetLina 2 years ago
Very beautiful *****stars; )
Kabuki0009 2 years ago
Hi Kabuki, thank you!
PoetLina 2 years ago
Carrying and caring for the legacy of a famous parent must, in many instances, be quite a burden. This, I think, especially true when so much distortion and lies are perpetuated. For me this really came through in your poem. But also something of the tenderness and regard in which you held her. I can believe that this is a memory you really cherish.
andrewnorris1 2 years ago
Thank you, it was a cherished moment; so clear in memory, so difficult to recount. : )
PoetLina 2 years ago
Very nice.
5*
keanghiero 2 years ago
Many thanks!
PoetLina 2 years ago
Beautifully done, wonderful tribute:)
DoorsChick1967 2 years ago
Thanks so much for visiting. ; )
PoetLina 2 years ago
This was beautiful Lina.
"It was like meeting the Queen
And Bob Dylan all at once"
wonderful.
are we to believe she was cheated out of royalties as well? is that what that line suggests? so sad.
5 *****
Paul
BradfordandLasso 2 years ago
Thank you for your thoughtful comment, guys. : ) : )
PoetLina 2 years ago
Exquisit. Just beautiful 5*s.
Nigelcf 2 years ago
Oh, thank you for your kindness!
PoetLina 2 years ago
marvelous*****
exesquire 2 years ago
Thanks for viewing and generous comment.
PoetLina 2 years ago
darn!!!! iread the poem first before hearing the pre-amble and thought,bless lina...she's written a poem where she's imagined meeting me!.....scream!!!!!....in all seriousness lina...it's a great poem.
marycigarettes 2 years ago
I didn't know you then, but I do now, watch this space...
and thanks. : )
PoetLina 2 years ago
What a wonderful idea for a poem--loved hearing this memory of yours via such a lovely conduit. These lines, " It was like meeting the Queen/And Bob Dylan all at once,/Uncanny where loyalties lie" are just great. And the ending "she mourns; sideways on" is perfect.
tinySpectacle 2 years ago
I really value your insight, thank you. : )
PoetLina 2 years ago
Beautiful - 5* /faved ;)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Many, many thanks, DRC : )
PoetLina 2 years ago