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  • What was the first song? Please answer!!

  • oh Lyss!! Ya know.. i kinda lost a little love for Jemi but... i read this and danggg you're good... I'd never thought I'd fall in love more for Jemi!

  • oh. no no no..hide!

  • you seriously are an amazing writer. (:

    whats the song at 3:41 ?

  • (:

    You make the most amazing stories.

    I'm starting to be a Nacy fann now thoughh..,

    x]

  • awwww...jeminess in the car :D

    poor demi!!

  • :O Love it. You are an amazing writer!

  • :O good episode!

  • ohhh shittt :o

    dun dun dun...

  • OO NO! HIDE!!!!

  • @xbabixg0txbacnex <-- U kno whut would have been even better? If dat "other woman.. was her own sister" dat would have been great ;)

  • Sorry it took so long for me to comment I got busy anyway I absolutly love your writing this episode was amazing and brilliant and well I just love your stories :)

  • i loved it(: im in love whiff this series(:

  • seriously amazing <3

    you have so much talent.

  • i love this!

    can someone tell me what the songs are called please?

  • Omg i love this story<3 my favorite on youtube right now ! its amazing and it just shows how creative and how good of a writter you are. I love your work alyssa ; D

  • u always have something new and exciting in your stories.. and your stories amaze me!!! LOVED THIS EPISODE!!!!!!

  • UHOHHHH ! :O

  • Amazing. :) You always amaze me with your writing, I swear. Your stories are my new addiction :P I can't wait till the next one. :D

  • This is AWESOME!!!!!!!! Love it

  • Loved it next one

  • Can't wait for more

  • i love this series! ur an amazing writer! u can really understand what theyre feeling:)

  • OMG <33

    what he's gonna do

    and plz joe don't push demi away she suffered enough

    hope they fall in love

    i love your story's keep it up

  • I think Joe should like try to hide himself

  • OMG! I wonder how they're gonna get through that....love this one :)

  • omd, poor demi, what a douchbag, can´t wait for th next one and find out how joe´s gonna go through this

  • wonder what are they going to do?

  • oh shizz! wat da hell gonna happen nw i cant wait 4 da nxt! post it as soon as possible

  • you'd have to be an idiot to cheat on demi

    love this!

  • heyyyy joe and demi are on my tv right now! hehehe :)

  • OH NO! RUN!!!

  • I love this story its really good....i can't wait to see what happens

  • amazing as usual

    poor Demi

  • OMG!!!

    RUN!!!

    I'm glad Demi opened up to someone :)

  • oh noooo!!!!!!!!

    more please!

  • omg whats going to happen next, love it

  • No No No No!

    Please, let them get past safely!

    I love this story, I really do!

  • OMG!!! What will they gonna do?! I can truly imagine Joe's look on this series.. He still looks hot though. ^^

  • OMG AWESOME!

  • wow that was good, can't wait for more.

  • Timte to hide Joe!

  • amazzzzzzzzzzzing!!!

  • nooo joe better no get caught :( xxx

  • Joe needs to hide!

  • oh nooo they better think of something good to hide joe.

    i'm glad that demi opened up :)

    great epi :)

  • ughhhhhhhhhhhhh this is not a good place to stop Alyssa, definately not :( lol kidding it was awesome loved it xD

  • Can't wait for the next.

    (:

  • ho snap!!!..that ending is intense!!..ahh i cant wait for the next episode!

  • Joe needs to hide..stuff him in the trunk..somewhere but dont let him be caught!!! Okay my favorite part is where Joe laughs and say's "We have messed up lifes" Lol :] that was cute..Cant wait for the next one!!

  • oh, shiz. i hope they still manage to get away! love this series!

  • amazing!

  • this is amazingggg!

  • noo!! =S What will happen?? OMG! I can not wait for the next, I really can't!

  • wow troubled much? hahah i mean the check point lol stuff him in a suitcase! xD or something... i love this

  • Oh my gosh. wow. um

    Yeah. Joe. Hide. Demi. floor it.

    xD

  • when are  you going to add write me a song?????

  • I honestly love this series so much. It's so addicting, and yet so amazing. I want Joe and Demi to be together!!

  • Yea like the girl below me said this story is freaking amazinggg dudde!!!! It's really good!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!

  • Oh my gosh!!! I love thiss!! This story is soo amazing!!! Poor Joe & Demi :( :(

    I know you're been having trouble with the story, and if you ever want help with it, let me know and I can totally try to help!! :)

    Keep up with the great work!

  • Amazing as always.:)

  • OHHHH MANNSS I cnt w8t!!!

    Theres qunna be serious chizz qoin down!!! Lmaoo

    I luhved iht!! Cnt wait!!

  • awesome job!!!

  • WOW :D I effing loved it :D xx

  • OMG I FRIGGEN LOVED IT!:D

    keep up the great work!!:)

    i so cannot wait for the next one. x]

  • That's crazy! Poor Joe and Demi :( They can run away together now that would be so much better right? hehe Joe better do something I can't wait to see what you are going to do so they can get out of this.

  • oh no!!!

    gah! i didnt want it to end!!

    you are such an inspiration to me. i love your writing...

  • omg this is sooooo good

  • nice.keep it up. :]

  • I have a feeling ur gonna make the "other woman" miley or taylor or some one and they're gonna be in the story

  • aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw they are starting to get along and pump pump pump what is going to hapen next stay tune to the ep of the next week to find that out lol

    awesome like always :)

  • holyy shiiit!!

  • Dang I'd hate to be on that situation, Poor Joe and Demi I'm just happy that they finally talked i mean it's not a lot of talk but they still did. I think Demi is falling for him :) Sweet

  • Whoa now! Check Point? Joe better hide it's too early for him to get caught :P Jemi is not falling inlove yet hehe I didn't make sense I can't wait for the next one! The songs fits the story by the way

  • awesome loved it

  • loved it|!!!!

  • Love it!!!!!

  • Awesome, i really like this serie =) please post the next one soon!! =)

  • he better hide!!!!!!

  • ooo how are they gonna get out of this one?!!

    loved it

  • Absolutely love it!! Poor Demi!!

  • ohh shit !

    plz post soon:)

  • uh i love this story . . . i am glad demi and Joe talk to each other . . . post next soon please =)

  • Demi and Joe are both so afraid to open up. Demi's story is sad but in the same time if it didn't happen, she would have married the dude and never met Joe

  • ahhh leave me there I want to know what happens next. Girl this was amazing you are one hell of a writer. I loved this so much Im really cant wait for the next one :D

  • Oh shit. Ughhhhh, everything was going so well, Jemi was finally opening up to each other, then at the end I was like, "oooooooooh, noooooooo"

    Loved it, though!

    You better hurry with the next one =P

    //Peace.Love&&Jemi'

    - Addie

  • ah-FREAKING-mazing! :D

    lyss, you're talented.

  • oh my gosh! amazing. I'm glad they talk :D

    check point?! i wonder...

  • Love it. Can't wait for the next one <3

  • Poor Demi and Poor Joe. they are both in a mess but wow i didn't expect the last part! Hide Joe!

  • UHOH! OMG HIDE JOE!

  • Oh No! Joe and Demi do something.

  • You are such an amazing writer, it's unfair :(

    haha not really you deserved that gift

    My mouth dropped at the end They need to

    get away.

  • OMG! The whole episode was Amazing! I can't believe it they are looking for him now that even makes it better. Joe and Demi are finally talking :)

  • Oh No! Busted! They need to think fast, why do you have to leave it to that? haha Just kidding i love it so much! I'm glad Joe and Demi are finally talking and finally opening up next one please? xoxo

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