Monologue from "All My Sons" by Arthur Miller

[rafael709]

I got home and it was incredible." i think you need to put that line in another place. Just vocally it sounds very similar to what the previous passage was about. It's good. and you're believable, but the piece needs more highs and lows. more peaks and valleys.

Just my humble opinion, and thanks for the work. you have a powerful voice. resonant, and able to express complex emotions. great job.