follow the underbeat of the song 1 2 3 4 count the beats!!!!! omg this gets on my nerves soooooo much!!! plus try listening to yourself a bit tht way when you sing the notes you wont go flat or sharp. . . .the ending without music was the best part tho!!!
... You're forcing your voice. It doesn't flow. You're can't nail the notes rights and I don't think your timing is considerably effective. Sorry, but I prefer Kanon's version 100%.
You are flat and sharp (lower and higher than the actual notes) in most places, you tried to sing some parts that were to high for your voice, at 0:44 NONE of the notes were right, the melody is not right, you didn't come in on time at any part, you slowed down to much at "Still you do not answer"
Word of advice to help improve, play the actual version and your own at the same time, if it sounds like the melody is crashing or sounds funny, it ain't right
At some parts the song IS a little high for me, but I try to be as close to the original singer as I can. Even if it IS a little out of my range ^__^; As for being a little off tempo, well I have no excuse for that! When I mixed it sounded right at that time; only when I uploaded it to youtube did I realize it was a bit off ^__^;
Thanks for the advice! I will continue to improve my singing and mixing skills *___*
u made mw cry alittle but it's so good i wonder though if she feel's sorry for the lead vampire or if she really love's him ur great though this is defentley in my favs gj
That waz awsome i never would have those words for the song. That was almost better then the original. Can you try to fandub the 2nd ending. If u can't i will probably try myself.
I hear that, I had to make a clean karaoke of this Tv Size and Full and I also made english lyrics for this song and Suna no Ochiro^^...but I love Still Doll it's so cool and I love your lyrics, it's so cool^^
lol, that depends on how it turns out... X3 i have to find a mic that's not crap, audacity is being weird on me, and i don't have much of a voice... XD
Look, sure she is a bit out of tune and pitch, but its way better than a lot of dubbed versions out there.
slinkype 11 months ago
A: keep to the beat
B: keep the pitch
C: should have learnt the words before puting this on UTube
im just saying
KisshulovesU 1 year ago
Guys, cut her some slack. She's good
MyNameIsApril11 1 year ago
i dont care if ur going a little to fast THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME!
lizbeth990 1 year ago
YOUR VOICE IS AWESOME O_O but some of the eh, technical (?) things are off :D
Windy2468 1 year ago
nice it is kinda ruined by the weird little noise lie you clicked something that wont close
wrath4444 1 year ago
Well I mean ima big fan of vampire knight LOL
caramel1414 1 year ago
Ur voice is amazing! I wudnt be surprised if u become a famous singer! Sing more! Btw ima be fan of vampire knight
caramel1414 1 year ago
i love iht.!! <3
bleachlova123 1 year ago
I must say you have a lovely voice, but if you can stay on track with pitch and beat - you'll be absolutely flawless!
Haruhian 1 year ago
really good singing. ^^
KatakanaKong 1 year ago
Great job! I loved it! :D
ktrose9229 1 year ago
o.o wtf!!! i liked the ending better than the rest
1crazykiller 1 year ago
don't worry about others, for a fan-dub it is very good. I happen to love it.
animewarrior723 1 year ago
good but too fast, can i use the lyrics?
animefanaticgirl1 1 year ago
i loved the ending
AliceHastuenHearts 1 year ago
yourre going waaaay to fast with the song!!!
follow the underbeat of the song 1 2 3 4 count the beats!!!!! omg this gets on my nerves soooooo much!!! plus try listening to yourself a bit tht way when you sing the notes you wont go flat or sharp. . . .the ending without music was the best part tho!!!
randomnpoptarts 1 year ago
@randomnpoptarts Yikes hahaha it's just a fandub, not official or anything so I know it has it's flaws haha thanks for the critique :)
Ristuku 1 year ago
did a better job at sing then most i've heared good job^^
kagome55127 1 year ago
i just like the ending...O.o
GabyyBabyyy 1 year ago
Best english version i have heard so far Good job...Ignore all the bad reviews!
kagome14to15 1 year ago
I agree with Yunakku. This song doesn't fit to your voice. And your off tempo. Nice try though. : )
MechanicalCar 1 year ago
... You're forcing your voice. It doesn't flow. You're can't nail the notes rights and I don't think your timing is considerably effective. Sorry, but I prefer Kanon's version 100%.
YunakkuProductions 1 year ago
I love the end when your voice echos
ashley160100 1 year ago
Very Nice job. You have a great voice. I really like the ending that was cool.
HibikiMagic1 1 year ago
Very Nice job. You have a great voice. I really like the very end it was cool.
HibikiMagic1 1 year ago
you can sing it good REDO AND DO IT ON TIME PLEASE
iLoVe136 1 year ago
O_O
UchihaYuki666 1 year ago
... I"m gonna play it strait...
You are flat and sharp (lower and higher than the actual notes) in most places, you tried to sing some parts that were to high for your voice, at 0:44 NONE of the notes were right, the melody is not right, you didn't come in on time at any part, you slowed down to much at "Still you do not answer"
Word of advice to help improve, play the actual version and your own at the same time, if it sounds like the melody is crashing or sounds funny, it ain't right
SeraphsStolenVoice 1 year ago 8
At some parts the song IS a little high for me, but I try to be as close to the original singer as I can. Even if it IS a little out of my range ^__^; As for being a little off tempo, well I have no excuse for that! When I mixed it sounded right at that time; only when I uploaded it to youtube did I realize it was a bit off ^__^;
Thanks for the advice! I will continue to improve my singing and mixing skills *___*
Despite it's flaws, I hope you enjoyed it ^__^
Ristuku 1 year ago
@SeraphsStolenVoice *Straight.
Jazziphile 1 year ago
ur awesome!!
BlackBloodyVampire1 1 year ago
the ending was a lil' on the creepy side but thats wat made it kick butt! Plus you have the coolest voice ever!
PunkAngel789 1 year ago
the end is really creepy with the echo...nice job with the lyrics and singing!
LuckyOrangeTabby08 1 year ago
Your voice is amazing! 1000/5!!!
01Vocaloid01 1 year ago
Her voice is beautiful^^ *__*
sharma2200 1 year ago
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you suck!
ichigo11225 2 years ago
i agree
animetyper101 1 year ago
thank you, someone knows the truth, i don't think any of these people have heard the real version
SeraphsStolenVoice 1 year ago
you are awesome at singing!!!!
AmotoTaboshi 2 years ago
YOu know thats not the words right?
tifalockheart823 2 years ago
Wow, epic ending! 5/5
ImperialVideo 2 years ago
I liked it I liked it!! -huggles everything-
ItachiFan971200 2 years ago
Asome
Vampireknight765 2 years ago
oooooooooo... creepy..... I like :D
CullenClarinet0128 2 years ago
I think the END IS really CREEPY!!!! haha iluv it!!
chickal8ter 2 years ago
*___*
lina4222 2 years ago
I LOVE YOUR VOICE
yuukibites333 2 years ago
HOLY COW Pie! O3O So frigggin goooooood. (yes i know "wtf? cow pie? " )
keriannelove 2 years ago
Wow holy crap thats good!
NightDaize 2 years ago
you voice is really good
kibalover028 2 years ago
wow, dude how old r u
Sasukequeen3 2 years ago
AWESOME!!! your right heart sounded funny xD
But your AMAZING!
Jootjepicootje4444 2 years ago
Cool.
Blo00000000 2 years ago
Uber CUTE + Uber AWSOME + Uber COOL Lyrics
I liked the part You will break..like me + u sound so cute when u say Still Do Not Anwer.I am ur biggest fan.And u will be awsome intill u die
oh yea i loved ur ending
RedMoon3434 2 years ago
That's a mighty fine effort I must say.
12skippy21 2 years ago
Is that an anime show.u know the one where it shows the doll with red eyes?Pleeeaaase tell me.
luis343194 2 years ago
the one with the red eyes isnt a doll. she is a girl name Yuki Cross. she is one of the main characters in the anime Vampire Knight.
Icekat1047 2 years ago
it was from Vampire Knight a Manga i think.
KenziiProductions 2 years ago
Can I please use your lyrics? I love them so much! And what did you use to record it and the effects?
ShouseiKenkou 2 years ago
Sure you can! Just credit me ;D
And I used SESSION recording for my effects. You probably never heard of it hahaha no one has xD
Ristuku 2 years ago
these aren't the real lyrics, sorry to tell you.
PeinAngel 2 years ago
wonderful!
splashdream14 2 years ago
great job!! may i use these lyrics?
minamotolima 2 years ago
Yes you may! :)
Ristuku 2 years ago
Whats this anime about??
azula333 2 years ago
Vampire Knight. Very good anime!
swimmerwinner13 2 years ago
OMG i loved your singing it was like so GOOD at the end it gave me the creeps but you where ssoooo good i wish i could sing like you!!!
fortune11edm 2 years ago
nice job! I loved it so!
kimikimz 2 years ago
wow your really good!!
babyhinataforever 2 years ago 3
Foarte frumos!
Your voice is very adorable, and your singing gave me the chills at some parts... You're good!
ShadoeRogue 2 years ago 3
woow wonderful!
AsumiShiroNiwa 2 years ago 3
Nice voice.. :3
YamiRisa 2 years ago 3
why don't you do a full version D:?! I love the the ending said 2 times effect.
Kyaksa 2 years ago 3
brava!!!!I sang aling to this :D Ur really good!!!!
Catgal886 2 years ago 2
you have an amazing voice and you put this up on the same day we got out of school for christmas
yuna2000 2 years ago 3
Compared to others I've heard, this is the best fandub still doll vid. Good work! ^^
jinxangel1o1 2 years ago 2
okay seriously i love your voice but the key changes are annoying, still doll has no key changes
AnimeIsAwsome14 2 years ago 12
u made mw cry alittle but it's so good i wonder though if she feel's sorry for the lead vampire or if she really love's him ur great though this is defentley in my favs gj
jerricalovegirl 2 years ago
your good
briniebree 2 years ago
this is amazing! im inspired to do my own
splashdream14 2 years ago
Oh my gosh, I literally almost cried...
I'm being honest, my eyes are burning...
It was amazing, bu the timing was kinda lopsided...
Anyway, it was amazing! Definitly going into my favourites!
AkanetheCatXxKyouxX 2 years ago
Yeah I know....I didn't realize the timing was off until after I uploaded it.....whoops xD
Still, I'm glad you liked it!! :D
Ristuku 2 years ago
U still did an awesome job, though!!!!
jinx1441 2 years ago 2
AWSOME :p TOTALY COOL =]
NoJelly4You 2 years ago
Es gefällt mir, es war awsome!!!!!!!!
paradox2593 2 years ago
i like your voice
i am jealous
RAzersedGE24 2 years ago
Aw don't be jealous!! I'm sure your voice is much better then my froggy one :D
Ristuku 2 years ago
KIRE!!!!!! Esta muy bueno! Tenes una voz muy tierna
Mashin6961 2 years ago
I LIKE IT.How about you try sing the real song.?It will be a HIT!!!!!!!!
Nellith90210 3 years ago
very nice! a bit out of sinc tho
very great!
khfandubbers 3 years ago
Ha! Awsomeness!
xXxIgnorancexXx 3 years ago
Thats very beautiful!!!
Kairi377 3 years ago
Hehe thank you :D
Ristuku 3 years ago
Where did you get the karaoke to sing this?
FandubsRus 3 years ago
Someone made it xD
Ristuku 3 years ago
It started of really good, but it kinda went awful from "Still but, can you see... "
:S
SazzieChan 3 years ago
Haha don't I know it xD
Well, er, I hope you liked it. I can't tell if you did haha xD
Ristuku 3 years ago
It was great, don't worry. :D
SazzieChan 3 years ago
GOOD SINGER YAY X3 U DID AWESOME
RosezNSkurazRule 3 years ago
This a really good fandub! Your a good singer!
Ichigomay1991 3 years ago
wow.
This is amazing.
I didn't know this was a fandub.
good Job. ^-^
miikati 3 years ago
☆wow i totally love ur voice☆
rockberrygore 3 years ago
Really? Thank you!! ^_^
Ristuku 3 years ago
hmm you were a little flat when going up,maybe make the transitions more smooth and flowing like liquid.Very pretty voice,sounds just like original
blueyedblonde482 3 years ago
That waz awsome i never would have those words for the song. That was almost better then the original. Can you try to fandub the 2nd ending. If u can't i will probably try myself.
sailorsagitarius101 3 years ago
I'm actually looking for the karaoke for the second ending!! ^-^
Ristuku 3 years ago
is it me but i here dings ! btw i luv it
moonanimegirl 3 years ago 2
This is so coooooool!!!!!!!!!!!
can you pleeeez fandub the 1st op?
GaarasGirlfriend25 3 years ago
Well..I will make a few comments...
You have a wonderful voice
But ( yes a but)
1. It's I miss Alice... ( but it's ok)
2. I think you went off key at one point...
But other then that, Very good ^^
vampireninja85fire 3 years ago
no its not "I miss Alice"
Its Hi Miss Alice.
Even in the actual sub it says Hi Miss Alice and also with the english translation of the song. >>
BlueXMoonXProduction 3 years ago
1. Really? Everywhere I looked it said Hi Miss Alice! I'm so sorry!! :O
2. Oh I KNOW I was! I'm no singer, but who else will sing the lyrics EXACTLY how I want them? ^__~
Ristuku 3 years ago
woah! what a nice voice!!
FriendshipGoddess 3 years ago
Hehe I'm glad you think so ^///^
Ristuku 3 years ago
vary nice girl
yuna2000 3 years ago
Thank you ^__^
Ristuku 3 years ago
i really like it.
amazinggggggggg
(:
cazzana14 3 years ago
I'm glad ^-^
Ristuku 3 years ago
Woah... I think these "wailing"-type songs are very hard to sing well but apparently you did a rather good job on it. =) 5 stars!
caprifoliacae 3 years ago
Thank you so much!! ^-^ It was hard to sing, but I did my best x3
Ristuku 3 years ago
i didn't know studio deen did vampire knight i thought they only did higurashi...
but anyway YOUR AN AWESOME SINGER!!!!!
this song is too low for me...i think. you should dubb rika for higurashi instead of who they got.
animedrawerexpert 3 years ago
Thank you very much!! :3
You know it's funny you bring that up because I've been wanting to do a Rika dub for a long time now x3
Ristuku 3 years ago
omyyogd WHAT A CUTE VOICE
JulianYamato 3 years ago
Thank you very much ^////^
Ristuku 3 years ago
Kyah, so scary XD I LUV IT! 5/5
mistysheek 3 years ago
I hear that, I had to make a clean karaoke of this Tv Size and Full and I also made english lyrics for this song and Suna no Ochiro^^...but I love Still Doll it's so cool and I love your lyrics, it's so cool^^
sakuratsukino29 3 years ago
Thank you very much! ^__^
Ristuku 3 years ago
wheepee, awesome!!!!! :D :D :D i love how u did that echo-thingy at the end... <3
i wrote my own english lyrics for this song, but i could never find the karaoke version! now, i found it! XD thank you for uploading!!!
cookiesXequalXluv 3 years ago
Yeah that's my favorite part as well! :3
You're welcome!! Now go; run off and sing your dub!! :D I'd love to hear it ^-^
Ristuku 3 years ago
lol, that depends on how it turns out... X3 i have to find a mic that's not crap, audacity is being weird on me, and i don't have much of a voice... XD
cookiesXequalXluv 3 years ago