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  • the only thing i can fault with this is the water still being there after half a month. lol o well its class!

  • Hey Guys, My channel is called FilmingProjectIsHere, we make short films and other videos, if you could visit my channel and watch my videos it would be massively appreciated. Part 2 of my new film "the last chance is out tommorow so come and watch the trailer and part 1. Remember to Comment, Rate and Subscribe and I'll sub you back. Thanks :P

  • Okay another thing. near the end the girl should just run. not shut the door like a good girl -_-

  • Some changes. okay 1. Use different actors. Stop using the same people. 2. Better scripts not like SHUT UP. It should be like cussing or some crap. 3. Get a better girl not all drugged up not scared. But other then that its okay :/

  • freakin brilliant!!!

  • i LOVED the intro, uber creepy :)

  • it is crap

  • Awesome intro! Impressive!

  • Good job, hey you should try doing like a jigsaw murder. Sorda like trapping somebody and asking do you know what your here for and mix it up make something unexpected make it creative.

  • I would have just taki the drill and be like "YOU WANNA PLAY!!??

  • I wou

  • The script is the corniest I have ever heard. "Goody Goody" "Oh Boy" ???? Who talks like that? The hideous acting just makes it much more embarrasing. Especially someone as old as she is...

  • I love ur videos :) :) :P I totally Subbed

  • i had that same jacket on when she had it on i promise

  • hiii im a reallly big fan this is soo good and i really want to no what music do u use for this movie!!!!!

  • No.

  • You make me jealous!!! This is SO good, and as I think I said before, reminds me very greatly of Alfred Hitchcock. I understand, I have a little sibling playing in all my films as well, but you're lucky---your's will at least cooperate! Tell me...where do you get that music, its really effective. I get mine from SoundBible, but I need more...background suspense-builder stuff, if you will. Thanks for posting, you have loads of talent!

  • @1awfrench Video copilots pro scores has some good music but it costs $100, and my sister never coperates half my movies are shortened or not my original vision I usually have to bribe her or something lol

  • OMG u are so awesome at making films u have to let a director know and maybe u can make it big in the future... I LUV U!!! and it creeps me out lol... ;-l

  • and that is why we don't talk to stangers lol

  • In the future, have an older stalker, you cant have a 12 year old with all that weightlifting equipment, and make sure the girl seems less happy. However, altogether a great short film! :)

  • @CatnipEntertainment thanks I know I need older actors I was just working with what I had, if I go to film school and get real actors and equipment I'll remake this the way I intended it

  • he doesnt like to change clothes sumtin wierd is going on around here.

  • lol water in a bowl..

  • the girl was a bad actress

  • @rbm6565 She's young. I'd understand if she were 14 or something. But give her a break, man.

  • your movies are great! i like this one alot! really great ideas,!

  • awesome this is one of ma favs :)

  • Where do you get the scary background music ( the drilling part) i need it cause I'm making a hottie video.reply please

  • @zatch688 theres lots of places to get background music, just do an internet search and you can get lots for free or just buy a movie soundtrack and use it but if you use the wrong one you could run into copywrite issues

  • i love all of your films

  • 0:48 PUNCHBUG!!! NO PUNCH BACK!!!!

  • it just occurred to me did the girl get any sleep

  • I like it, but its funny how after 9 days, the water is still spilled on the floor. lol

  • that was a really suspenseful one. these should play on tv around halloween.

  • really good you should make most of your movies around this length

  • @saraviviabbynimisvan hehe i was just looking for scary movies then i saw your cooment so weird! oh btw get on gmail

  • i see ur reflection in the door knob at 6:15 and in the lock on the other door at 8:59.

  • Nice plot but sadl you are missing some effects that would have made it a lot better.  For example: Fake blood from all the torture.

    But even better, each time it said 'Days in Captivity' her clothes should have been more ragged/tattered.

    I suggest a REMAKE! :D

  • @Tebok73509 I was thinking about a sequel, where she is at home and then runs into him somehow and its very suspensful

  • @Jtp101z how is that suspeseful and i remember suggesting a sequel in a comment too with ideas so me and tebock and possibly you (jtp) are on the same page i think you should make a video where fans of yours get too vote if they want a sequel

  • @roguekid431221 I would but I don't know how many people would actually vote I'll probably do a sequel some time next year, after halloween madness I have other plans for new movies before I start doing sequels

  • omg heart pounding at 8:50 thru 9:20 and i thot she had a broken leg!!!!

  • this is awesome but i thought he was gonna kill her at 7:44? and when did she break her leg? and lol i know u made this in one day (obviously) but also because the water didn't drie after 9 days and wouldn't he have locked the door at 8:20?

  • OMG u need to send all of ur films to a film director or whatever cuz ur so FREAKING AWESOME. I LUV U. soo scary btw.

  • @saraviviabbynimiSVAN thanks! I wish I could but I dont know any directors emails lol

  • the girl smilies through the whole film lol..

    u could do with some fake blood tbh (Y)

  • @TwilightPrison me too!!!

  • Why havent more people seen this, its great!

  • is the person with long hair a boy or a girl?

  • @MasterMaxJfilms a girl moron

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  • what was she eating at 4:13?

  • @pokecrazy16 sunflower seeds

  • well then how bout he sees her and tries to kill her because hes worried that she might of told someone

  • @roguekid431221 yah maybe I'll make a sequel someday I'd rather wait till this video gets more views. Maybe in a year or a couple months

  • you should make a 2nd one because it would leave off to the ending of this 1 where she finds her house and on the 2nd day she got back home she sees him again while shes looking out of the window and the guy looks at her she closes the curtains and then he starts running twoards the door and he opens it and she hides then he finds her and the captivity starts all over again

  • @roguekid431221 thanks for the idea i like the part where you said she was at her house and he is looking for her outside but i think her being in captivity again would only be the same thing she would have to escape all over again

  • This is really amazing! The quality of your camera is just awesome. The music and sound effects are also really good.

  • omg fucking scary!

  • The only thing i had a problem was, that at alot of points you could barely hear what the girl was saying (also the murderer) for dialouge shots just make sure you go much closer so the camera picks up the voices better. Other than that, good job, keep it up.

  • whoah what a mysterious garage its like theres no way out- EXCEPT THE GARAGE DOORS!

  • oh you know theres just a posssible rapist behind me so i better just ignore him and keep- what? Candy? i geuss ill just follow you into your home/mysterious white van. :P

  • @TheHorrorCompany lol yah i should have thought the plot through more carefully

  • Guys this is great! I Love horror,you guys did great! This looks like Final Cut editing?

  • yep, im not a proffesional editor but this is the final cut

  • can people check out my video please?

  • lol i shit my slef on the hmmmer part

  • this really great!! keep up the good work =)

  • I really like the movie. And I think I watched it about five times. What makes this movie is the elements you used. The camera work was great! It shot on a still tri pod when it was right and it was handheld on the action moments. Giving it a real down gritty effect. Also your acting was great. I mean you made me believe that you really wanted to hurt her. Your direction was great, script was wonderful. And I really like the part where you take the hammer to her head in first 2 minutes

  • this is the first video i saw, by you, and i cant stress the fact that you made the movie so scary, it was great! i actually learned from you :) good job! keep it up :)

  • thanks, do you make movies?

  • yes i do, but i dont pu them online, its more like a family thing

  • @Jtp101z luv ur movies culd u make one like a zombie ish movie i mean all zombie movies are great

  • @reatardez i already did, go to my videos and look for halloween madness 7 the undead, or just type in "episode 7 the undead" in the seach bar

  • yo jee that was wiked 5 stars great video man best one yet!

  • wach my new vid

  • thanks i tried to make it longer because people said there wasn't enough story line

  • This is actually really good! :)

  • thanks

  • That was the best video EVA! So suspensful I'm your number one fan!

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