Dood your lyrics are dope for sure... but I would deff recommend a different beat. Your flow doesnt coincide with this one brotha... its still dope none the less but id like to hear it over another beat.
well when i clicked on this i was ready to be disgusted by u ruining lupe's shit but u surprised me well thought out and put together flow was ok. It was good not lupe great but it was really good keep at it :)
your lyrics are crazy man keep up the good work and get some recording gear.. your flow is good too.. just work on the breathing and your half way to the top :P (y)
That was... Actually dope as fuck.
Privateadress3 8 months ago
if you can make get clearer vocals this will be the SHIT. nice lyrics
15xBrandonx15 8 months ago
Dis is damn good nd u kept da same theme as lupe
TheViviid 9 months ago
Dood your lyrics are dope for sure... but I would deff recommend a different beat. Your flow doesnt coincide with this one brotha... its still dope none the less but id like to hear it over another beat.
michaelfeldman91 10 months ago
Fucking dope.
jbunit2007 10 months ago
can you post the instrumental?
DovMaslow 10 months ago
Great job sir. Excellent Lyrics.
tygersoul 11 months ago
This was really good, very well thought lyrics. Thank you for this.
lawkig 11 months ago
good shit mann
ACEntertatinment 1 year ago
"'tween truth and false, I make it hard for your discerning
He may have made it, but I am the one that keeps the world turning"
i respect this. i respect it a lot. lol i searched something completely different but im glad i stumbled on this
LeedleDeedles 1 year ago
Damn... Like lupe with a touch of biggie. Nice!
BigJamz96 1 year ago
damn nigga tht was hot
21HaTeRsLuVmE21 1 year ago
daam i didnt expect that..... that was fire yo
Brownbkid 1 year ago
well when i clicked on this i was ready to be disgusted by u ruining lupe's shit but u surprised me well thought out and put together flow was ok. It was good not lupe great but it was really good keep at it :)
Muhammed310000 1 year ago
@Muhammed310000 lol well I'm glad I ddnt disappoint.....thanks man
Marriedtomylyrics 1 year ago
pretty good pretty good
BlacckChrome 1 year ago
Wow, you did the track justice - I can tell you actually sat down and thought about these lyrics :) Tight as speedos
DrAlchem01 1 year ago
best youtube lyricist ive ever seen
WhersTheFire7 1 year ago
your good man!
Jedimanny661 1 year ago
that was tight as hell good shit man
TheJediprotector 1 year ago
your lyrics are crazy man keep up the good work and get some recording gear.. your flow is good too.. just work on the breathing and your half way to the top :P (y)
aj3z1 1 year ago
lyrics are fukin nice, get legit home recordin sht
maazy94 1 year ago
nice can u send me the instrumental
baronjackson75 1 year ago
@baronjackson75 man i've been trying to find it again i can't find it! if i do come across it ill def. let u know
Marriedtomylyrics 1 year ago
Ughhh!!!!! That was fuckin nasty my dude.
gotsteeze92 1 year ago
@GregYong i agree with you on that point. He does appeal to his own fan base. I guess you just gotta know the people who kno the right people.
cmovarsity13 1 year ago
whoa nice lyrics they seemed well thought out I would listen to you over stupid ass rappers like soulja boy anyday
DEATHWALK24 1 year ago
how can waka flocka and gucci and yung buck be famous and you not? i dont get it.
cmovarsity13 1 year ago
@cmovarsity13 wtf.. young buck may not be as lyrically good
but his lyrics still speaks in its own way
GregYong 1 year ago
good stuff bro, do you think you can send me the instrumental i've been looking everywhere for it
noveltyskateboards 1 year ago
whack
PartsUnknown59 1 year ago