This is good, really good. You look like you're having fun, and that's what it's all about. And people saying "Same beat/chords throughout", you don't seem to care when pro-bands do it.
wtf? your video is straight lame dude. but your music isnt bad. but some tips. change the guitar riff. i spent the whole time wondering if i heard the same part. and add a lead part in there, not to rythm parts. and around 2 40 the voice is crappy, change the pitch or your notes so your singer can sing it better. with some practice you will have some potential though.
it u recorded this and then make the video... u would tink that you would be able to play ur song in time... the lip sync was WAY out lol.. nice song tho :)
haha i like it! i found this video because you said your main influence was blink 182. but yea, sounds like older blink!
only suggestion would be that the drums have got to be more crazy. he's play SIMPLE as hell beats. no fills except for snare rolls? not enough bass drum either. guitar is pretty good. vocals are good. try to be more agressive with singing.
The drums need to be more crazy?!?!? The guitar was crazzzzy lazy. It was the same chords over and over and over with a little riff way in the background where it was barely audible. The song was kinda catchy though, but it got boring...
nice job. dont let everyone bash your singing. its hard to sing you do pretty good man. if tom delonge showed us anything its that you dont have to sing good to make it big!!
i Dont wanna be the one being all critical about this, i think it awesome that you guys are having so much fun and being really proud of what you've created.. Go check out our music video, "Failing Forward-Hunting Beasties".
um....well... one... wheres the bass?? I can here it but I cant see it... and two... its just not catchy.. it has POTENTIAL... but... idk... the instrumentals alright but the vocals just arent very good
those 2 guitar chords got really annoying after a while... other then that it wasnt that bad i guess, but yea your guitarist needs to get a little more creative lol
Bad singer sorry.
Kenny2k08 1 year ago
Cool but next time write your own song but wicked band man
macdonaldsisthebest 2 years ago
@macdonaldsisthebest this is our own song...
ArmyManAttack 2 years ago
This is good, really good. You look like you're having fun, and that's what it's all about. And people saying "Same beat/chords throughout", you don't seem to care when pro-bands do it.
itnt445 2 years ago
@itnt445 thanks
ArmyManAttack 2 years ago
Why dont you get your singer to play the bass also? it would sound a lot better
MrNegrodamos 2 years ago
at about 50 you should chang the guitar, because that beat battern was geting realy old
cooljoe895 2 years ago
wtf with the vid? lol but killer music try changin the rif like lostieposbuenos said and the round 2 40 too and its kickass
Montebell27 2 years ago
wtf? your video is straight lame dude. but your music isnt bad. but some tips. change the guitar riff. i spent the whole time wondering if i heard the same part. and add a lead part in there, not to rythm parts. and around 2 40 the voice is crappy, change the pitch or your notes so your singer can sing it better. with some practice you will have some potential though.
lostiemposbuenos 2 years ago
it u recorded this and then make the video... u would tink that you would be able to play ur song in time... the lip sync was WAY out lol.. nice song tho :)
lukiie102 2 years ago
haha i like it! i found this video because you said your main influence was blink 182. but yea, sounds like older blink!
only suggestion would be that the drums have got to be more crazy. he's play SIMPLE as hell beats. no fills except for snare rolls? not enough bass drum either. guitar is pretty good. vocals are good. try to be more agressive with singing.
overall,nice job :)
AmirLikeCrazy 2 years ago
The drums need to be more crazy?!?!? The guitar was crazzzzy lazy. It was the same chords over and over and over with a little riff way in the background where it was barely audible. The song was kinda catchy though, but it got boring...
TVMAN1112 2 years ago 2
Haha, yea.. I agree.
AmirLikeCrazy 2 years ago
definetly not terrible. sounds a little like old school blink.
bullsfan419 2 years ago
is this supposed to be a joke?
you ned a recording studio to be honest
louder drums, louder guitar louder bass!
make things explode
this is really weak...
just some advice
ikimasho 2 years ago
the druming is a little weak
awesomedude41791 2 years ago
make more videos of your band :)
KT356 2 years ago
ill have another one up soon
ArmyManAttack 2 years ago
pretty good! keep it up guys!
theskateryoyo12 2 years ago
At about 50 seconds, the guitar went downhill quick.
69HeartGrenade 2 years ago
nice job. dont let everyone bash your singing. its hard to sing you do pretty good man. if tom delonge showed us anything its that you dont have to sing good to make it big!!
CriMxDelAxCriM 2 years ago
good song. good band! but don't be so cocky with your bio. haha
officialpush 2 years ago
Not a bad song in my opinion, but the video could match up a little more :)
Hlaford347 2 years ago
uhh the singer.........not so good maybe different type of song that fitshis voice better or something
WeNeVeRsToPsCrEMiN89 2 years ago 2
ye have good guitars. Ye should do them justice and write good riffs
SynGZackyV 2 years ago
everythings good except that guy singing he suks u sud kick him out the band !!
joshuahill1995 2 years ago
i liked it
zer0frk 2 years ago 2
everything was perfect except the vocals
tangarineqt1946 2 years ago 2
dude it looks like you vocals are not making a sound
jacko8745 2 years ago
very very good
sloshy101 2 years ago
Good, but vocals could be better.
and you should work on your timing
Haavard993 2 years ago 2
The vocals need a little more emotion, but I personally liked
*Srry for ma little english*
daxyer 2 years ago
It's pretty good you guys have plenty of potential keep on keeping on
agrymonkey 2 years ago
Sounds like a first song, which it is right?
Very basic instrumental tracks, but it looks like you guys are enjoying yourself which is what counts.
breakfastking09 2 years ago
yep first song
ArmyManAttack 2 years ago
this is a little old skool
AndyAngelZ 2 years ago
u guys are gud but umm......
the song SUKS!!
theloser143673 2 years ago
i Dont wanna be the one being all critical about this, i think it awesome that you guys are having so much fun and being really proud of what you've created.. Go check out our music video, "Failing Forward-Hunting Beasties".
HiLLSONGCapeTownLIVE 2 years ago
ah I see the bass now... still only ok tho
hirschman1 2 years ago
um....well... one... wheres the bass?? I can here it but I cant see it... and two... its just not catchy.. it has POTENTIAL... but... idk... the instrumentals alright but the vocals just arent very good
hirschman1 2 years ago
not bad tbh. keep up the good work !
xxAbeerrxx 2 years ago
how old is the bassist????
edgeheadzz 2 years ago
he is... a sophmore in highschool in this video but he looks like hes 4
ArmyManAttack 2 years ago
i kinda liked it
edgeheadzz 2 years ago
not bad
Giablo1 2 years ago
those 2 guitar chords got really annoying after a while... other then that it wasnt that bad i guess, but yea your guitarist needs to get a little more creative lol
metalboob22 2 years ago
yea this was our first song... lol
ArmyManAttack 2 years ago
FAVORITED! man this is awesome
Thecoolguy43 2 years ago
thanks ill post more later, we have like 9 songs but just have to make more music videos
ArmyManAttack 2 years ago
NICE!!!! keep it up
fusionvenom3 2 years ago
Not bad amigo. Nothing sticks out like a sore thumb, I guess just tighten up the vox a little, but they aren't that bad.
NosotrosEterno 2 years ago 2
wow im only 11 but i want to be in a band as im an electric guitarist when im older u guys are pretty good! 5/5
therockcommando 2 years ago
Wow you guys sound awesome.
sweet
mrTooKanSam 2 years ago
nice song
ericoarroyo 2 years ago
nice
dufrain29 2 years ago
cool song. I need to organize my band some more.
RampagedWillis 2 years ago
awesome
caleb121693 2 years ago
i'm first view YAYAYAYZLLESS its good
mrmjfan101 2 years ago