Paper Dreams (Original Song)

[gkjmb]

I love the guitar part and the lyrics! The only thing I could say is that I don't like the melody. Try something that would be easy to sing a long with. For other people who want to sing a long. It's really low your voice right now, try to make it higher.

[nanoniss]

toujours et encore la même chose juste magnifique

[five4three2one0]

he looks like a guy i see that worked at the mcdee drive through

get rid of the collared t-

at least let it be a collared long sleeve ew

[lynchheiman]

so hows the song going anybody picked it up. I would suggest you grab yourself some lessons on strengthening the midrange part of your voice and some vibrato ..gotta make it sound thick.

[miamiwinter]

What are the chords you're playing? I have someone here who wants to sing this as a video response to your post. :-)

[inntheshire2010]

very nice....almost made me cry..sheesh!

[GrannyGreyHair]

Maybe if you got someone with the right voice to sing this. I like the melody, but your voice doesnt go too well. Just being honest here - not trying to be mean.

Its a nice melody. You shold be proud.

[lynchheiman]

I really like this progression, the musicality has a nice melody keep at it buddy.

[Jusongs]

I'm really glad you liked it Lynchheiman. Thanx a lot for your kind words. I was already loving australia. I am loving it a little bit more since your comment :)

[KissingPL]

its not bad he isnt right

[spencerst]

so bad mate !!!! lyrics maybe ok but you cant sing !!

[Jusongs]

You must be right, thanx for the tip spencerst.