Why does this only have 4k views? You guys deserve waayyy more, this was excellent. Make a mini series, Fallout needs more than just Nuka Break and you guys seem on par with them or nearly there.
Nice location, replicas and uniform but... Raiders is too clean for postapocaliptic world, I thought that I hear driving cars in the 7:35 and in the 9:55 we can see "dead riders" walking from place where they die. I don't mean it this film is bad because I can imagine how much work it cost. Just few things to do better in the future :)
you should definitly invest in a more directional microphone, you pick up too much of the clinking of all the things they're moving around, where you should be trying to pick up their voices more. Also, your color correction could use a little work, if I understand correctly its supposed to be post apocalyptic, but the color scheme doesn't sell it for me. also, the wind gusts are very obviously just added on. Recording ambient sound from the actual place would have been more natural.
@TheBoomTube Yeah money is pretty tight but a new microphone and recorder are on my list along with a ton of other equipment. And the wind gusts are from Fallout, as are all the sound effects, I wanted to put them in there for that purpose.
Clinton Jones and Freddie Wong brought me here... You guys are good, the filming and editing are great! Epic scenerey! I agree though with other commentors that the bad guys just don't act tough enough, they can't hold a candle to the main actor... They just aren't believable. You've got all the equipment and editing, just work on the storyline some more. I'm just the opposite, have great ideas but no HD cam or Adobe. keep up the great work... You've just made another subscriber!
Only one thing missing. You had the Mysterious Magnum guitar riff sound effect when the Courier un-holstered the weapon; it would have been incredibly epic if you'd added the other guitar riff when he re-holstered the gun after killing that last raider.
Was the guy at the end Nick Laurant/ rosenchuck1??
Great video, loved the camera work but some of the effects could have been improved such as the bullet hit's where way to bright, I would give it a 8.5/10
Great short man, really loved the camera work and the acting wasn't too shabby either. Besides what the others are saying about the explosions which I'm sure you know needed a tad of brushing up anyway, the only real thing that took away from the video was the knife/sword choreography. The actors' fear of hurting each other came off the screen pretty badly, just a head's up. You can try rehearsing the exact moves for a few weeks before shooting, or using rubber knives, but great film!
Awesome stuff, Andrew! Great costumes, props and location. I also really loved the editing and the cinematography. You're getting better and better all the time!
great direction, not bad acting, average vfx. If you know you can't create a ralistic looking explosion maybe it would be best to avoid explosions all together. I know i shoulden't critisize without offering a decent alternative. Have you tried reaction shots? where you only show someones reaction with the sound of the explosion? keep up the awesome videos! :)
@TheGreatKadik It is not bad, it leaves room for a next part of the film: "The Guy walkes away and there are legion-guys who heard the noise from far away and wanted to see what happens"
what you telling me you would not make that trade @GalaxyProductionz
powerarmordivision 2 weeks ago
the other one was better
pimped11 2 weeks ago
Good grenade plant lol
BranscomeINC 3 weeks ago
Why does this only have 4k views? You guys deserve waayyy more, this was excellent. Make a mini series, Fallout needs more than just Nuka Break and you guys seem on par with them or nearly there.
TavodishChinchar 1 month ago 2
Holy crap those props are amazingly well done
Sovietking24 1 month ago 3
nice
CaliforniaAirsoft818 2 months ago
nice oversized ppsh
USMilitaryEnthusiast 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
@USMilitaryEnthusiast That would be the combat shotgun, modeled after the one in the video game, Fallout 3, that this video is a fan film of.
TheGreatKadik 2 months ago in playlist Uploaded videos 2
@TheGreatKadik oh thx
USMilitaryEnthusiast 2 months ago
Nice job! The action needs some choreography, though :P
einarssone 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
a grenade for a shotgun?? lol what a n00b NPC
GalaxyProductionz 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS! 5
like if movie quest sent you here
GalaxyProductionz 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
Lol, you can see people walking in the backround at the end there, dunno if they were supposed to be there.
ThisModestBiscuit 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
movie quest sent me here... awesome short.
gunsorbutter 2 months ago
Are you Armenian?
xDarkVoidProductionx 2 months ago
Nice location, replicas and uniform but... Raiders is too clean for postapocaliptic world, I thought that I hear driving cars in the 7:35 and in the 9:55 we can see "dead riders" walking from place where they die. I don't mean it this film is bad because I can imagine how much work it cost. Just few things to do better in the future :)
Thamaell 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
Not bad need to see more blood in the knife fight.
wolfmannoon 2 months ago
I was sent here by Indymogul
29JLyon 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
Just some constructive criticism :) good movie though!
TheBoomTube 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
you should definitly invest in a more directional microphone, you pick up too much of the clinking of all the things they're moving around, where you should be trying to pick up their voices more. Also, your color correction could use a little work, if I understand correctly its supposed to be post apocalyptic, but the color scheme doesn't sell it for me. also, the wind gusts are very obviously just added on. Recording ambient sound from the actual place would have been more natural.
TheBoomTube 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
@TheBoomTube Yeah money is pretty tight but a new microphone and recorder are on my list along with a ton of other equipment. And the wind gusts are from Fallout, as are all the sound effects, I wanted to put them in there for that purpose.
TheGreatKadik 2 months ago
Gotta love when idioms survive the apocalypse. And the shotgun looks like it might blow away in the wind. Other than that this video was awesome!
Oh, one more thing, why did you focus on the teddy bear for so long and then not do anything with it?
500YenDevin 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
shotgun was made of styrophoam
RainingBuffalo 2 months ago in playlist Movie Quest! Episode 24 : FAN FILMS!
@RainingBuffalo It was hollow and made out of paper.
TheGreatKadik 2 months ago
@TheGreatKadik oh
RainingBuffalo 2 months ago
What a terriable Shotgun
Tommytunnelsnake 3 months ago 2
at tha end, you can see 2 people walking in the background.. fail? of zombieraiders?
chocobiebabeloeba 4 months ago
Clinton Jones and Freddie Wong brought me here... You guys are good, the filming and editing are great! Epic scenerey! I agree though with other commentors that the bad guys just don't act tough enough, they can't hold a candle to the main actor... They just aren't believable. You've got all the equipment and editing, just work on the storyline some more. I'm just the opposite, have great ideas but no HD cam or Adobe. keep up the great work... You've just made another subscriber!
Starbuckin 4 months ago
Only one thing missing. You had the Mysterious Magnum guitar riff sound effect when the Courier un-holstered the weapon; it would have been incredibly epic if you'd added the other guitar riff when he re-holstered the gun after killing that last raider.
robertmoneymaker999 4 months ago
Hmm courier walking the wasteland to deliver a package.Where have we seen this?
sledge421 4 months ago
Damn good work.
MusicFreak1337 4 months ago
the raiders were terrible actors :p
riptide312 4 months ago 19
are the snow mask part of the game? they look wierd to me
jimjamec 4 months ago
Very good man, I really liked the sword fight was pretty cool I have to say..
RustComposingStudio 4 months ago
the acting of the 3 raiders was terrible, and you needed to get rid of the sound of the traffic in the back ground.
solidsnake1443 4 months ago
i prefered this one to the other version
Vergast 4 months ago
You ever heard of the crimson tide? Lolololllolololol
EnragedSephiroth 4 months ago
I like all the people walking around in the background at the end. :P
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rkonmango 4 months ago
this was soo good!
Paunatime 4 months ago
Was the guy at the end Nick Laurant/ rosenchuck1??
Great video, loved the camera work but some of the effects could have been improved such as the bullet hit's where way to bright, I would give it a 8.5/10
T.M.P
TrueMOBSTER 4 months ago 8
@TrueMOBSTER No, Nick was the Raider that got blown up.
TheRogueDivision 4 months ago
that refinery is like two seconds from my film school. :)
pjsatori 4 months ago
AWESOME!
supernalyd3 4 months ago
I remember way back in the day when this was just an idea. It was well worth the wait. Great job dude, keep it up.
quickfix92 4 months ago
Dope!
Crymer 4 months ago
6:52 there's a bunch of cars driving...
DivadWaldoss 4 months ago
camera is gr8 but effects sucked
OficialHangar 4 months ago
9:57-10:03 there's people walking in the background
aznpride389 4 months ago
Good to see light box productions doing another sci fi film!
Manned0Missiles 4 months ago
Great short man, really loved the camera work and the acting wasn't too shabby either. Besides what the others are saying about the explosions which I'm sure you know needed a tad of brushing up anyway, the only real thing that took away from the video was the knife/sword choreography. The actors' fear of hurting each other came off the screen pretty badly, just a head's up. You can try rehearsing the exact moves for a few weeks before shooting, or using rubber knives, but great film!
MosaicKingdomArts 4 months ago
the explosion was really bad but otherwise good job
MicrowavableMeal 4 months ago
That shotgun always did jam...
godofimagination 4 months ago
Awesome stuff, Andrew! Great costumes, props and location. I also really loved the editing and the cinematography. You're getting better and better all the time!
Keep up the good work!
murifilmpictures 4 months ago
brillant work guys! its awesome make more!
Zenco2k10 4 months ago
Pretty cool..explosion was a little small but it was good
234snipper 4 months ago
LA Area yes or no??? I think i have seen that air raid siren tower before!!!
AceOfTricks007 4 months ago
@AceOfTricks007 The radio tower is in LA yes but the abandones oil refinery location is in Ventura.
TheGreatKadik 4 months ago
great direction, not bad acting, average vfx. If you know you can't create a ralistic looking explosion maybe it would be best to avoid explosions all together. I know i shoulden't critisize without offering a decent alternative. Have you tried reaction shots? where you only show someones reaction with the sound of the explosion? keep up the awesome videos! :)
ThePostRockProject 4 months ago
Recognized the walking people in the backround after shooting the last enemy? :)
sintoxdesign 4 months ago
@sintoxdesign Yes lol. Which is why I blurred it out, doesn't help that much apparently though.
TheGreatKadik 4 months ago
@TheGreatKadik It is not bad, it leaves room for a next part of the film: "The Guy walkes away and there are legion-guys who heard the noise from far away and wanted to see what happens"
sintoxdesign 4 months ago
@sintoxdesign Hahahaha, SEQUEL! lol
TheGreatKadik 4 months ago
Now THAT was good. So glad i stumbled upon you guys through Nick. Good work dudes! Subbed and Faved.
TempestFX 4 months ago
*love*
creykeprod 4 months ago
Woooooo
rosenchuck1 4 months ago
Very nice.
TheEgoWorks 4 months ago