Separate Worlds: Chapter Two

[moongirl1318]

dustin is such a pimp i hope hes not like this in real life

[misstweetybird24]

patrick is so rude but gud story tho

[misstweetybird24]

yea patrick is so mean 2 her

[flygirls64]

patrick is so mean

[kekeprettygurl1]

dustin iz wow lol patrick iz a a**hole but i luv he lol

[dhoney456]

lolz bryan iz RETARDED

[loveandee]

love it

[msbryanb405]

bryan- a lil freak nastyy

kelly- so sweeet

carnell- the same as kelly

patrick- a lil too cocky

dustin- a wanna be pimp

LOL keep up the good work

[B5mahawtiez]

dat was sooooooo good!! keep up da good work

[OneToughCookiee]

Thankss =]

[B5mahawtiez]

NP  =P

[luv734]

patrick neeD hiz azz whooped BAD!!!! dustin need 2 b slapped!

[essence1660]

loved it

wow dustin is a player and patrick is a jerk

[KayKaystylZ]

DàNg PàtriCk gOt Tht bàd àttituDe =s Hez à ReàL ''BàdbOy''... (Well he Used tO =P)

Ndd I COmpleteLy UnderstàNd ChànteLz ReàCtiOn =P

Newàys LOved ittt!!

[MiXedBicHYADIGG]

A plunger Bryan!?

Bryan dOnt needa Fix Himself

He SExCC AS Hellz...hehe

i Can imagina Bryan Doin that..

[[Poppin his butt]] hahahaha! Well him

dancin arOund the MirrOr..cause B5 Sumtimes

Pop they but ..well they used tO! =[

I Wanna see thOse Bootays ..ROFL ..

HahahA Chantel! Dustin is a Player FREAK!

[mszbreeding]

daaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmnnn­nnnnnn dustin is a playa playa!!!lol and wat the hell is patrick suppose to be .....he needs a reality check

[lacrossebabe6]

"uh" this is really good lol. Bryan

[OneToughCookiee]

lol thanks :]

[kimmys89]

WOW GREAT!!

[kaslab1]

wow i luv it its so good aww man patrick is mean

[smartprincess101]

wow that sade girl is stuck up

[MiXedBicHYADIGG]

*gasp* well THANNXXX.  =P

[B5loved]

keep em goin pat is an ass hole 4 real and bryan is sooo funny and dustin just knows how to make someone stop wat they doin and pay him attention lol aww carnell and noah

[blackcherrypie3]

that was real good keep goin and pat iz an ass

[smileitskayla]

wow patrick seems like a huqqee jerk.

dustin seems like a conceited person fa realzz. lmfao. bryan is hilarious, carnell is so sweet, and kelly just wants to see a lil sumffin sumffin lol.

i lubb yyur stories keep 'em comin:)

[OneToughCookiee]

Thank you :D

[MissKellyBreeding196]

omg I love it Dustin and Chantel uh-oh something's going down lol

[allwaysDizzyBear]

u have gt to make te next one caus i want to kno what i did after that an i dont care if its short or not

[OneToughCookiee]

i feel bad for saying this but its not you whos in the story. its another girl who has the same name as you. I think her user name is like xoxolilmissunshinexoxo or something.

sorry

[allwaysDizzyBear]

really umm sorry now i realy really stupid and embarssed

[OneToughCookiee]

Noo don't feel badd its alrightt !

[allwaysDizzyBear]

but really thought i was in it i reallt wanted to be in at least be in one of ur stories cuzs ur really gud at them but i feel so stupid

[OneToughCookiee]

its okayy . There's always next time :]

[MaKia845]

uh o!! dizzy n chantel!! i kno y dey call dustin dizzy now itz bcuz u get dizzy wen u c dat body!!OMFG!!lol!! i luv it knt wait 4 da nxt 1!!hve u already wrote it?

[OneToughCookiee]

lol thanks :D

I have written it yett . But I will soon .

[Nellz1luva]

wow bryan that was funny....aww carnell and noah....patrick is big headed 4 real....kelly sat there haha....dustin conceited does my sexiness make u nervous....keep it goin

[breedingwifey123]

that was good..oh snaps dustin and chantel uh-oh!

[xo0sweetcakexo0]

very good i love it !

your such a good writer

get the word out that im posting my story and i anyone wants to be in it to msg me

:] very good nat

you should get these published

lmao

[OneToughCookiee]

Lmao aww look at you caitlin suckingg up to mee .

We all know how mean you are in real life ! muahaha . Wait actually I justt do lmao

but thankss dear