I thought it created a nice dreamy mood. Some of the lyrics are a bit abstract. But I see your comment that those are the words/images that came to mind when you first created the chords/melody. That's good and I would suggest that as you refine the lyrics, dont let those first thoughts/images get lost. I really enjoyed the choice of artwork. That really worked well with the piece. Good work, my friend.
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your respond. Its so nice to hear people opnions, its hard to judge your own songs. I have already tried to refine the lyrics, so it makes a bit more sense and fits to english grammar. Im danish, so sometimes I make some english grammar mistakes. Thanks again.
Hi. Thank you very much. I know the lyrics might be confussing. I got the idea for the rythm and chords pattern and decided to record it right away. I just made up some lyrics while I recorded it, just to get a feeling of the song. Actaully, thats always how I do when I record a song for the first time. Thank you for taking you time to listen.
hello culpost. i think it works pretty well, not too sure what is meant by the phrase "confessions railroads". the visual are interesting and nice to look at. the guitar part enhances the lyric. continue the craft, chuck.
I thought it created a nice dreamy mood. Some of the lyrics are a bit abstract. But I see your comment that those are the words/images that came to mind when you first created the chords/melody. That's good and I would suggest that as you refine the lyrics, dont let those first thoughts/images get lost. I really enjoyed the choice of artwork. That really worked well with the piece. Good work, my friend.
karlmahlmann 2 years ago
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your respond. Its so nice to hear people opnions, its hard to judge your own songs. I have already tried to refine the lyrics, so it makes a bit more sense and fits to english grammar. Im danish, so sometimes I make some english grammar mistakes. Thanks again.
Culpost 2 years ago
hey sup.. its original and interesting
but i agree with chux "cofessions railroads" confuses me, but good song
tinsaovez 2 years ago
Hi. Thank you very much. I know the lyrics might be confussing. I got the idea for the rythm and chords pattern and decided to record it right away. I just made up some lyrics while I recorded it, just to get a feeling of the song. Actaully, thats always how I do when I record a song for the first time. Thank you for taking you time to listen.
Culpost 2 years ago
hello culpost. i think it works pretty well, not too sure what is meant by the phrase "confessions railroads". the visual are interesting and nice to look at. the guitar part enhances the lyric. continue the craft, chuck.
chuxtrux 2 years ago