[Short Story] Tell her I love her. ♥

[Hey1822]

how can he tell the story when hes dead?!?!?

[awsomemest52]

omgomg super well made very touchy make another one i am soo subsriving

[GirlsRule430]

The face expressions change way too slow :P Other wise I LOVE IT <3

[Known2BUnknown]

@ChocolateCookie325 if you don't like this why did u watch it? Stop bitching we don't want to hear it.

[ChocolateCookie325]

yd he hav to crash when it was so awsome u shouldve put him as the winner but the poster was all a lie the money they gave him would explode when he went next 2 some1 n told them (which would be lauren)then it would explode and they would die together =P happy ending =D

[ChocolateCookie325]

omg in the beggining they were SOOOO ugly u seriously liked her HAIR???IM CONFUSED MAN also when he asked will you be my gf u shouldve put her 2 say "o hell no fk u man"

[ChocolateCookie325]

omg in the beggining they were SOOOO ugly u seriously liked her HAIR???IM CONFUSED MAN

[0102lonely]

i don't understand

[Ryaka96XD]

waiiiiiiiiiiiiiit so jay is in heaven???? heaven is clouds if you sk me not another earth...

[Starrkinnel]

i diidn like it cuse she should have made the storyy!

[Ryaka96XD]

people do me a favor:stop making these things cause ima die crying like hell T-T

[surfergirlze]

isnt it supposed to be he left her and not she left him?

[DaJoshDude]

hotwheels inc xD other than that so sad T^T

[surfergirlze]

WHYD YOU FUCKIN MAKE THIS VIDEO!!??IT MADE ME CRY MY ASS OFF!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( but very touching

[mapIekishu]

Its a stupid reason to say that u dont have enough cash. remember kids.. dont ever say that o.o

[jackiesparrow33]

I haven't got problem to understand it without the reading the description. It was easy but really nice story... and actually so sad...

[liacandy24]

i love it. :)

[lance1236451]

nigger and asian or white dont fit

[LaurenAndVictoria1]

PEOPLE STOP SAYING YOUR CONFUSED AND READ THE DANG DESCRIPTION! IT SAYS, "NOTEE :: He was telling the story TILL the present day, where it says. 10 years later. or sumthing like that." SO STOP SAYING YOUR CONFUSED AND REEEEAADD THHEEE DANNNGG DESSSCCRIPTIOONN!!!

[ILuvCandiii]

LOL Hotwheels . 8D

BTW . If I were the boy . I would've told Lauren that I want to marry her . But that I have no money to buy the ring . I'm pretty sure she would understand . Then maybe he could've gotten a job and she could've supported him .

[lengjacinto]

i like it.. but... uhh so he died and he was the one telling the story? o.o HUH?! >=o so confused D: and ur description confused me also sorry..

[xJMLMxParachute]

How did he tell the story if he died?

[shelene1996]

What are the songs playing?

[GimMieCaNdY32]

THIS IS HORRIBLE AND RETARTED DOESN'T MAKE SENCE WASTE OF MY TIME

[628man]

wtf if he died how did he tell the story of him die? did he just stand up and tell us the story and then died?!

[princessmarrissa]

And we say he survives and they get married and she gets herself a fake plastic ring thats cut etc. etc. AND THEY LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER

The end. =3

[FaLLinD0wn]

But jay is telling the story so that means that he's still alive o-o

[vampireluvskisses]

I saw death race before and it was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!But I rented it oh and hollywood video is going out of bisness noooooooo!!!!!!

ps.I love the video ^^

[wendy19chen]

So sad.. watched it a million times...!! XD (exagerating) Still i luff it!!

[RanDommelody21]

that is sooo sad, she probally spent their anniversary in deppression, i wonder if she met a different guy after a while, well anywayz that was just sad. WHY DO MOST MAPLESTORIES, HAVE TO MAKE U CRY!!

[MsCutiepie200]

i cry the whole story

[kittycatwalksomefat1]

you cried the whole story even when it started? lol

[MsCutiepie200]

@kittycatwalksomefat1 yea that was long

what website is that any way

[SoulOfLightz]

sad

[x3XinHui]

what is the ending song?

[Shimmycocopuffsluv3r]

River Flows in You-Yiruma(:

[x3XinHui]

TY!

[Shimmycocopuffsluv3r]

anytime(:

[xEmilyannx3]

This is so touching

he even died on the anniversary :[

[xiaovivien18]

Maybe he told his story as an angel or he didnt die?

[Javorizen]

wow! this is a good story =D

But... it kinda contradicts... lyk what some say cuz Jay probably died but he still can tell his story... weird =P. I still luv it though

[SlushRamen]

wtf dating for 10 years?

[fredlyn1212]

wait a minute... he survieved to tell us his story?? Im confused

[aznrichgirl]

Lawl! Hotwheels xDD

[ix3life]

Hotwheels Inc. lol

[WaddlerKisser]

Sooo... What Happened To Lauren?

[candynlamb]

is it really necessary for the title to be 55seconds long lol

[Liny0814]

aww...sad... T-T

[pokemonpeanut100]

u remidend me of my crush lauren at 3rd grade

[blackXtulip]

me too!!! if i say my bff's name she will get mad! lol i asked her once and she said no... rofl

[kidmoney241]

sad

[neji168]

so the guy didn't die??

[KATxKATx3]

it made me cry :(..

[lorogel2007]

isnt the guy telling the story dead alreadY? o.o

[COCOLATE135]

Whyt do people always make sad short storys? BUT I LOVE EM'

[lllworldmusiclll]

What Programs did you use?

BTw, made me cry T~T

[alanzo234]

for maple series you use sony vegas and banned story

[SDOHI]

Nuhh, why do short love storys always have to end with someone dying D= it's so sad ='(

[johnyo33]

*sniff* very pro *sniff*

[judaiyoh]

kinda nice but i dun get the story line

[sharooniexd]

depressing ,

awesome & the music ,

fits the story so muchh <3 (:

[VpLegendary]

i thought that he was telling the story but hes dead?

[xitsSophie]

so sad<3but..pro..

[xlilmissdramaqueenx]

how is he gonna tellthe story if hes dead?#_#

[xDestinia]

he's in heaven :D

[xlilmissdramaqueenx]

1 cover your mouth with your hand

2 make a wish into it

3 close your hand {make it into a fist}

4 hold your fist to your heart for 5 sec.

5 send dis to 3 more videos

6 tmorrow will be your best day ever

[WeOldSchool]

This is a nice nice story.... but its really really sad cause of all the things happening...

[lucky12943]

this is sad. but nice story

[acemonkieexp]

A car race like that CANNOT be legal. o_o;

[mapleplay3rz]

lol not that emotional so i didnt cry but overall good

[xxdenise55]

aww so sad f4 wats gona happen to lauren? aww I thought it was great! :)

[BlueAngel0417]

omg that was soo sad D: he died and he didn't even get the money for the ring to propose!! F5 OMG!!!! What's going to happen to Lauren now?? F4

[secertgirlXxZz]

well i don't understand at all!What happen to Lauren and the boy's name Jay right?And jay is telling us the story???Was he died in the car cashed?I thought he's died in the race...i don't understand..Who mind telling me??

[xXShaYnXx]

read the description..

[secertgirlXxZz]

o ok thanks:)

[shoortyliisa]

omg soo sad :[ i cryed like hell :<

[dkkd0]

lol uhm why is he telling da story after hes dead??

[zebratanocho]

not bad.............

almost cried...

[xnicoliee]

So sad o:

[Stoneage64]

sad video, can't believe he died so sad

[Brok3nHearted]

HotWheels inc ? LOLL Wtf F3 little toy cars?

[xiH3artYou]

aww,so sad

[Diana1004]

aw nice vid meh cuz thnks its stupid but i dun thnk so awsumness vid again lol

[xBreakMe2Pieces]

whats the font with the flower?

[angeltey]

if de boii araedy cnt make it...

hw he make dis story??

[wise8879]

its a nice video abit confusing but i was crying and enjoying the video (:

[BingozTheWatermelon]

Why does the boy 10 years later told the story since he already died? But it's aweesome!

[SakuraSyaoranKun]

isnt tis the story behind a song call, tell laura i love her??

[xXShaYnXx]

FINALLY.

someone has noticed. :P

[wise8879]

lol

[SakuraSyaoranKun]

LOL!!! nice video anyway.. XD

[soccertennispro]

huh? i dun get it

[Brok3nHearted]

it was kinda confusing cuz he was talking in the begining and then he told what happend before. and then now he dies?, it still was good:D

[xXShaYnXx]

try reading the description. o-o.

[RetartedShow]

Sad story i almost cryed:(

[Christina2713]

i tought the girl died but the boy died and still can tell the story lols so funny^^

[JackzterTeh2nd]

2:24

[xanimexmangaxloverx]

o: cuuute :) but it was sad D:

[babiiviet]

i dont get the story but GREAT Job!

[sinofchaos10]

haha he died LMAO click the thumbs-down button >

[x3VanillaCookies]

:'( that is so sad :'(

[aprilXbaby]

the ending so sad....T.T **cry**

[BabehGhurl]

i thot he was dead? o.o how come he was shown at the begginning? Anyways, hotwheels. LOL

[xXShaYnXx]

He was telling the story TILL the present day, where it says. 10 years later. or sumthing like that.

[IVIapleleaf]

wait a seconed!hes alive in the begining to tell his story right?if he dies in his story,how does he tell his story if hes dead!but i overall liked it!5 starz!just a little confused!

[xXShaYnXx]

He was telling the story TILL the present day, where it says. 10 years later. or sumthing like that.

[XxJuicyBabehxX]

HOTWHEELS INC??? o.o

[kittycutelove]

so saddd

[C4ndiiLuv3r]

i heard the same story on a song [=

[Bbyfreshx9]

if he died

how come he told the story?

btw it was totally awesome and cute~!~!

[xXShaYnXx]

He said part of the story until 10 years later.

[Bbyfreshx9]

ohhh

[xXxAjGirlxXx]

lol i thought he was in heaven or something

nice story it was cute =D

[MermaidAqua]

OMG D: how sad T_T -cries- and very nice story! D:

[monkey001x]

prooo :D -subscribes-

whats the font in the beginning with the flowery thing o-o.

[xXShaYnXx]

Joyful juliana.

`& TY.<3

[Yunaira]

Aww thats so sweet. I really liked it .. but it was sad in the end ;x. </3

5/5 ~

[BabieexLizz]

lolz the second time i watched it i cried. weird. first time i watched i didn`t.. maybe it`s cuz i was watching a real funny episode of drake and josh the first time i was watching it ? well lmao xP btw i luv ure vids :]

[Animalsrluz]

lol hotwheels

[Sara476476]

i luved ur vid. Its actually very sad!! T.T

[thlovenote]

Hey, can i know what font you used for this video, really very interested. :D

[iRannax3]

DDD:

omgg

how sadd

[Bellogangstahs]

Oh Shave, you are quite the sensitive one. LOLOL, Made me get teary eyed but nobody has to know that D:

[xXShaYnXx]

You just had to call me Shave. x3.

LMAO. Alright, I won't tell people..other then bellocan. -cough-

[Bellogangstahs]

hooker. Fine, I'll just tell them you were hello kitty panties to bed. I win.

[xXShaYnXx]

HOWD YOU KNOW?!?!? D:

You win.. T-T

[Bellogangstahs]

LOL, Oh Shave, learn this now. I always win. :B

[xXShaYnXx]

Lmfao, Danngggg. D:

[Bellogangstahs]

rofl, fine you can win once, but not this time. Ok? ok ty. 8)

[xXShaYnXx]

Wewt! xD

-plots revenge-

[Bellogangstahs]

Hey no fair, no before hand plotting. ):<

[xXShaYnXx]

mmkay, i promise not to plot before hand..

-crosses fingers, & plots revenge-

[Bellogangstahs]

Loser. w/e. I'll still win. LOL

[xXShaYnXx]

F3. We'll see ;D ♥

[limitless01]

=O Awesome story~ *Secretly grabs a tissue to wipe his tears*

[xXShaYnXx]

Ahaha. Ty ;3

[xPeAcEfOeVa]

OMG.. SOBS D:

[lilazngrlx3]

D:

omg

cries :[

[shado931]

shane i think it diffrent and diffrnt is good keep up the good WORK stay diffrent XD

[oO0AngelXx]

I need a tissue..

[xXShaYnXx]

-gives rainiee a tissue- ♥

[cathyerzs]

lol omg so cutee!

long ass beginning & like how he pull her up by the head.

& LOL jays a scrubb. no money ayy? :]

sad ending; but loved it <3

[xXShaYnXx]

Loool. Ikr, I always make the beginning long tho ;3

Ty ♥

[XxXKaZz714XxX]

lmao you pull her up by grabbing her head =3

lol nice job btw! ^^!

[xXShaYnXx]

By grabbing the nose. f3.

[XxJulietxXxxx]

TT~TT TT~TT TT~TT TT~TT

[apeekerboo]

aww you made me cry D: it was so sad D:!!!

but i love it like all your videos :)

PROOOOOOO!!!!!!

[xxsweetcandy1]

its so...soo beautiful

*cries* D=

[xXShaYnXx]

;3 Tyy ♥

[Bbym0nkeyx3]

So sad :[

[sugarbexiii]

OMGGG SO SAD D:

-Cries-

Cute story x3

[xXShaYnXx]

D: Dun cryy D:

Ty ;3 ♥

[xAZN5464]

So sad D: But it was awesomee~ =]

[xXShaYnXx]

;3

Ty :D

[adorkablesz]

Lawls ! Cute(:

[iCandiiex3]

Loved it. :] <3

Btw, what was the font you keep using? o_____o

[xXShaYnXx]

Joyful Juliana ;3

Ty ;D ♥♥

[iCandiiex3]

Ty. :P

And play ms now. :0

I`m playing right now.

[xXShaYnXx]

LOL! You come on when I leave.. F3! Anyways, I'll come on ^^

[iCandiiex3]

Lmao. x3