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  • Record this!!!!

  • Solid song. Thought it was very well written lyrically. The chorus at the end was kinda out of place. Try keeping it in the original key. I found myself waiting for it, wanting it and then it was transposed and fell kinda flat for me. The chorus is too catchy to worry about being redundant with it. You just need to hit it home with a little extra emotion. Great job guys!

  • i love u ur amazing not only can u sing u actually write your own stuff which now a days is huge.. ur amazing and i hope u get some sort of deal soon

  • I LOVE this song! I listen to it like 10 times a day!

  • wow ;) cool

  • wow! another great song!!! you are so awesome! How old r u again?

  • thanks so much and i'm 16

  • I LOVE IT! I was even TRYING to sing along. Lol.

    I use to write songs and some people even said they were good. I haven't written songs in 2 years. I've been working on story writing and I've been approving better since November, when I joined a web site for writing. It's helped me work on plot-making and stuff.

    I'm thinking of attempting to make new songs. I want to try and see if I can actually make the words connect and stuff. When I wrote songs before, I didn't think it worked well. K,bye!

  • your like uber talented.

    i wish i could write songs. :/

  • these lyrics are great they remind me of the way i used to feel (=

  • ................

  • i love this song

    can you redo it?

  • hi, can you remake this video, cause i love it but its quality is rather bad.

  • aww this is awesome!

    amazing even.

    u totally rock!

    <3

  • this is such an awesome song!

    & you have an amazing voicee =]

  • you are too good to have such a poorly lit and muddy-sounding treatment of this song. Take the time to get some lamps set up or open a window.

  • olivia i know i already commented on this song buuut i'm writing again to tell you that you honestly need to go do a studio recording of this and submit it to a record label. its that amazing.

    take care.

    :)elena

  • i love this song i too hope u become discovered

  • when aree you gonna come out with a new song? i WANT MORE!

  • You are really really good, I hope someday you are discovered because I think there is a place in the market for someone as talented as you. You have a really beautiful voice!

  • wow

    how long have u been singing for???

  • i liked it, have you tried any contests? there are online contests like yobi sing.

  • i LOVE this song so much.

    i thought it couldn't get better than "baby, you don't know"

    but i was wrong<3

  • really good!

  • i like everything about it, only wish it was published.

  • Very very nice. Lovely lyrics.

    Like your voice.^^

  • gosh i love all ur songs!!

  • oh woww. this is really good!

  • OLIVIA I LOVE THIS SONG!

    I think it's your best yet and i would totally buy it.

    :)

  • you have such an amazing voice! beautiful writing! keep it up!

  • AWSOME!!

  • you're awesome

    your voice reminds me of vanessa carlton

    keep it up!

  • you soooo deserve a record deal!

  • A very nice song and performance

  • dudet.. 2 words.. JORDAN PRUITT!! lol u sound just like her.. great original btw. Awsome song, melody, lyrics and the cherry on top made all come 2gether =)

    yazzy

  • I love it. I'm Demanding a mp3 :)

  • u have an amazingly beautiful vocie. every video gets better and better!

    forever and always

    SJ

  • Aw sweetie this rocks. So cute. Awesome chorus, great song, fun guitar.. Awesome job & tell your brother or whoever the guy was that he did great ;)

  • hi olivia!

    love this new one

    the lyrics are amazing as always..

    you always remind me of a young taylor swift lol

    one of MY IDOLs

    love her!

    xxx

    great song

    Lollie

  • i love the lyrics in this song :)

  • amaaaazzinnngg, as always!

    but the microphone is giving too much feedback.

  • is your name marie or olivia? now im lost!!!!! hah,

  • olivia. marie is my middle name haha

  • ohhh ookayy haha thanks

  • finally i was missing your videos

    beautiful as always you never disappoint

  • oooo i love this !

    :)

    xxx

  • Sounds beautiful *-*

  • awesome!!

  • it was really hard to hear :/

    but what I heard sounded AWESOME!!

  • mayeb turn up your volume? idk i could hear it perfectly.. and yeahh it was amazing! hah.

  • idk my volume was up but it was echoe-ish?

    hah

  • yeah

  • One of your best songs in my opinion. Keep it up.

  • Awesome!! Love it!

  • could not see you and their was a bad echo hard to hear the song

  • lovee it!

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