Solid song. Thought it was very well written lyrically. The chorus at the end was kinda out of place. Try keeping it in the original key. I found myself waiting for it, wanting it and then it was transposed and fell kinda flat for me. The chorus is too catchy to worry about being redundant with it. You just need to hit it home with a little extra emotion. Great job guys!
I use to write songs and some people even said they were good. I haven't written songs in 2 years. I've been working on story writing and I've been approving better since November, when I joined a web site for writing. It's helped me work on plot-making and stuff.
I'm thinking of attempting to make new songs. I want to try and see if I can actually make the words connect and stuff. When I wrote songs before, I didn't think it worked well. K,bye!
olivia i know i already commented on this song buuut i'm writing again to tell you that you honestly need to go do a studio recording of this and submit it to a record label. its that amazing.
You are really really good, I hope someday you are discovered because I think there is a place in the market for someone as talented as you. You have a really beautiful voice!
dudet.. 2 words.. JORDAN PRUITT!! lol u sound just like her.. great original btw. Awsome song, melody, lyrics and the cherry on top made all come 2gether =)
Record this!!!!
xxxakibmaxxx 9 months ago
Solid song. Thought it was very well written lyrically. The chorus at the end was kinda out of place. Try keeping it in the original key. I found myself waiting for it, wanting it and then it was transposed and fell kinda flat for me. The chorus is too catchy to worry about being redundant with it. You just need to hit it home with a little extra emotion. Great job guys!
patriotpizzaman 2 years ago
i love u ur amazing not only can u sing u actually write your own stuff which now a days is huge.. ur amazing and i hope u get some sort of deal soon
rgcubanita 2 years ago
I LOVE this song! I listen to it like 10 times a day!
softballgirl0024 2 years ago
wow ;) cool
RebelCryMusic 2 years ago
wow! another great song!!! you are so awesome! How old r u again?
RebelCryMusic 2 years ago
thanks so much and i'm 16
gbgrizzle913 2 years ago
I LOVE IT! I was even TRYING to sing along. Lol.
I use to write songs and some people even said they were good. I haven't written songs in 2 years. I've been working on story writing and I've been approving better since November, when I joined a web site for writing. It's helped me work on plot-making and stuff.
I'm thinking of attempting to make new songs. I want to try and see if I can actually make the words connect and stuff. When I wrote songs before, I didn't think it worked well. K,bye!
dolphinhero9000 2 years ago
your like uber talented.
i wish i could write songs. :/
Lollingtonmuffins 2 years ago
these lyrics are great they remind me of the way i used to feel (=
Jonasluver12345678 2 years ago
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TheGandJShow 2 years ago
i love this song
can you redo it?
Jumpmybones 2 years ago
hi, can you remake this video, cause i love it but its quality is rather bad.
SweetSunshine13 2 years ago
aww this is awesome!
amazing even.
u totally rock!
<3
stargirl130 2 years ago
this is such an awesome song!
& you have an amazing voicee =]
NBROD97 2 years ago
you are too good to have such a poorly lit and muddy-sounding treatment of this song. Take the time to get some lamps set up or open a window.
wickedmessenger1 2 years ago
olivia i know i already commented on this song buuut i'm writing again to tell you that you honestly need to go do a studio recording of this and submit it to a record label. its that amazing.
take care.
:)elena
elenaaaxx 3 years ago 5
i love this song i too hope u become discovered
riellarose 3 years ago
when aree you gonna come out with a new song? i WANT MORE!
NCMSCrossCountry2008 3 years ago
You are really really good, I hope someday you are discovered because I think there is a place in the market for someone as talented as you. You have a really beautiful voice!
EMAUK1990 3 years ago
wow
how long have u been singing for???
NicciHarveyMusic 3 years ago
i liked it, have you tried any contests? there are online contests like yobi sing.
tuberificvideo 3 years ago
i LOVE this song so much.
i thought it couldn't get better than "baby, you don't know"
but i was wrong<3
hippylove787 3 years ago
really good!
singingxxforxxlife 3 years ago
i like everything about it, only wish it was published.
rmdrmd4 3 years ago
Very very nice. Lovely lyrics.
Like your voice.^^
Valeriee16 3 years ago
gosh i love all ur songs!!
NinjasAreCool24 3 years ago
oh woww. this is really good!
heyyyourecutee 3 years ago
OLIVIA I LOVE THIS SONG!
I think it's your best yet and i would totally buy it.
:)
elenaaaxx 3 years ago
you have such an amazing voice! beautiful writing! keep it up!
ForgetMeNot1012 3 years ago
AWSOME!!
j0612 3 years ago
you're awesome
your voice reminds me of vanessa carlton
keep it up!
ohmgeeitsmaggie 3 years ago 2
you soooo deserve a record deal!
mandykay92 3 years ago
A very nice song and performance
tps607 3 years ago
dudet.. 2 words.. JORDAN PRUITT!! lol u sound just like her.. great original btw. Awsome song, melody, lyrics and the cherry on top made all come 2gether =)
yazzy
Metalikyazz 3 years ago
I love it. I'm Demanding a mp3 :)
sailormoon1013 3 years ago
u have an amazingly beautiful vocie. every video gets better and better!
forever and always
SJ
51moonbeam 3 years ago
Aw sweetie this rocks. So cute. Awesome chorus, great song, fun guitar.. Awesome job & tell your brother or whoever the guy was that he did great ;)
kayakaya5 3 years ago
hi olivia!
love this new one
the lyrics are amazing as always..
you always remind me of a young taylor swift lol
one of MY IDOLs
love her!
xxx
great song
Lollie
starrzNme 3 years ago
i love the lyrics in this song :)
NBROD97 3 years ago
amaaaazzinnngg, as always!
but the microphone is giving too much feedback.
mssunshine559 3 years ago
is your name marie or olivia? now im lost!!!!! hah,
orangecrush710 3 years ago
olivia. marie is my middle name haha
gbgrizzle913 3 years ago
ohhh ookayy haha thanks
orangecrush710 3 years ago
finally i was missing your videos
beautiful as always you never disappoint
musicismydna 3 years ago
oooo i love this !
:)
xxx
jadehelliwell 3 years ago
Sounds beautiful *-*
xBattleGnomeGirlx 3 years ago
awesome!!
jessicapotter56 3 years ago
it was really hard to hear :/
but what I heard sounded AWESOME!!
Heffner159 3 years ago
mayeb turn up your volume? idk i could hear it perfectly.. and yeahh it was amazing! hah.
orangecrush710 3 years ago
idk my volume was up but it was echoe-ish?
hah
Heffner159 3 years ago
yeah
M148L 3 years ago
One of your best songs in my opinion. Keep it up.
zeeboy1333 3 years ago
Awesome!! Love it!
CountrySinger130 3 years ago
could not see you and their was a bad echo hard to hear the song
ThereforeStand 3 years ago
lovee it!
evelynsEn3 3 years ago