Nice chilled out atmosphere of the song. The pictures go really well with it too. Like the kinda menacing vibe... reminds me of Godspeed a bit (although I'm not an expert in this type of music). Nice use of effects. The first ~3 minutes are the strongest, after that it's ok, but not as good I think. Anyway, overall that's pretty good, something a bit different.
I dig the feeling of this song, it definitely has potential to be a full fledged song, or intense instrumental. i think you should definitely add a few more parts to it, many some minimalistic drums or something. good job!
Returning the crit from UG here (creeping.death!). I liked the effects, but I think the tone would be better if it was a bit cleaner, I'd turn down the gain a bit. The background synth adds a very cool feel, and makes the song feel more textured. 2:56 was a nice change, but I feel it really didn't fit the feeling you had before. My biggest problem with this is that it doesn't feel like it goes anywhere to be honest, and because of that it gets kind of boring eventually.
Hey from UG, this was pretty cool. i can definitely see where other instruments can take this song to the next level. I feel like this could really just be the beginning of a song
This was really cool man. I felt it started a little slowly but once that chord change at like 1:17 happens it really took on a great vibe. You work into the call and response part at 3:14 very nicely, and speeding up that warbling effect right at the end for some reason just seemed right. I really like your use of effects, I honestly don't think I would do much different other than the part at 0:35 as it doesn't fit the vibe you set early on, it's almost punky feeling.. Hope this helps man!
@JadenHellmann Hey Jaden, thanks for the comment. I will take your tip into consideration. Really appreciated the review you did. Very glad that you liked it!
Hey man. (...) from UG. I am digging the beginning. I think the part the bridges the intro and 1:15 is the weakest. Really like what comes after 1:15 though! Nice, man. I enjoy spacey stuff, and this fits the bill. The name suits it well. haha. I think 3:00 is a great part, and 3:30 is the coolest. haha. Nice work.
Thanks for the crit dude! Yeah, this is pretty spacey sounding stuff - reminds me a lot of when I got into recording (I would just jam with stuff solo and see what I got xD). The volume is a bit loud at some points but nothing too bad (tad too much drive I think).
I really dig 1:15 onwards, cool effects and progression.
Great job really! Enjoyed it from the beginning till the end!!!
vendettav15 2 months ago
@vendettav15 woah thanks man for the nice compliments! A big hug to you :D
MrArarat 2 months ago
Great video!
Manhattan3Band 5 months ago in playlist Manhattan3Band's Favorited Videos
you gave me CnC on UG. this sounds great, man. love the vibe. try adding some spacey samples in the background to make it sound more artsy?
drkenun 6 months ago
@drkenun Thanks mate!
MrArarat 6 months ago
Hey MrArarat! Definitely like the vibe of this song. Laidback and relaxing :D
BJCJJN 6 months ago
@BJCJJN Thanks man! =)
MrArarat 6 months ago
Your guitar sounds a tiny bit out of tune...hmm. The tone is really nice!
ChrisReedlfd 6 months ago 2
@ChrisReedlfd Really? Hmmm Probably it is, because it was a Jam, and I was jamming for about 3 hours when that strucked...
Its in one take, no editing whatsoever...
Thanks for the message!
MrArarat 6 months ago
Loving this man! Great vibe!
Was thinking of buying a DD-7, and this clip is definitely swaying me to get one!
Nice work!
InnerPeaceRecordings 6 months ago 2
@InnerPeaceRecordings Hehe, thanks mate! The DD-7 REALLY is a really great pedal. I love it.
You could do some nice tunes with it, for sure.
MrArarat 6 months ago
@02342498 That's what Emito said
MrArarat 6 months ago
Very nice man! It kinda reminds me of Brina May cuz theres a lot of delay going on haha
RogerHwang 6 months ago
@RogerHwang Thanks man! Hugs!
MrArarat 6 months ago
Hey, returning crit from UG.
Nice chilled out atmosphere of the song. The pictures go really well with it too. Like the kinda menacing vibe... reminds me of Godspeed a bit (although I'm not an expert in this type of music). Nice use of effects. The first ~3 minutes are the strongest, after that it's ok, but not as good I think. Anyway, overall that's pretty good, something a bit different.
WeAreLeeds85 6 months ago
@WeAreLeeds85 Thanks man! I see what you say. Never heard Godspeed, I should have to....
MrArarat 6 months ago
I dig the feeling of this song, it definitely has potential to be a full fledged song, or intense instrumental. i think you should definitely add a few more parts to it, many some minimalistic drums or something. good job!
sidvashi 6 months ago
@sidvashi Thanks man, I loved what you did too. Really nice tunes you got.
MrArarat 6 months ago
Trippy as hell!
MageMayu 6 months ago
@MageMayu lol, thanks! =)
MrArarat 6 months ago
Returning the crit from UG here (creeping.death!). I liked the effects, but I think the tone would be better if it was a bit cleaner, I'd turn down the gain a bit. The background synth adds a very cool feel, and makes the song feel more textured. 2:56 was a nice change, but I feel it really didn't fit the feeling you had before. My biggest problem with this is that it doesn't feel like it goes anywhere to be honest, and because of that it gets kind of boring eventually.
KineticStability 6 months ago
@KineticStability Well thanks man for reviewing! I'll look into the things that you mention.
Thanks!
MrArarat 6 months ago
Hey from UG, this was pretty cool. i can definitely see where other instruments can take this song to the next level. I feel like this could really just be the beginning of a song
link55588 6 months ago
@link55588 Hey man, thanks!
It's just a little jam, so I don't see it getting more instruments at the time... but thanks for watching!
MrArarat 6 months ago
This was really cool man. I felt it started a little slowly but once that chord change at like 1:17 happens it really took on a great vibe. You work into the call and response part at 3:14 very nicely, and speeding up that warbling effect right at the end for some reason just seemed right. I really like your use of effects, I honestly don't think I would do much different other than the part at 0:35 as it doesn't fit the vibe you set early on, it's almost punky feeling.. Hope this helps man!
JadenHellmann 6 months ago
@JadenHellmann Hey Jaden, thanks for the comment. I will take your tip into consideration. Really appreciated the review you did. Very glad that you liked it!
MrArarat 6 months ago
Sounds like something Eric Johnson would make. :D
austinbondify 6 months ago
@austinbondify Thanks man! Never listened to him, but I will do soon now.
MrArarat 6 months ago
I like your style. Very experimental ;-)
Kinda reminds me of Buckethead's big sur moon !
cheers,
wicker1985 6 months ago
@wicker1985 Ha, great! Im glad you liked it man. Thanks for the comment!
MrArarat 6 months ago
Cool sound man. Liking the electronics
NatheSinfield 6 months ago
@NatheSinfield Thanks for you time! Glad you enjoyed it.
MrArarat 6 months ago
Hey man. (...) from UG. I am digging the beginning. I think the part the bridges the intro and 1:15 is the weakest. Really like what comes after 1:15 though! Nice, man. I enjoy spacey stuff, and this fits the bill. The name suits it well. haha. I think 3:00 is a great part, and 3:30 is the coolest. haha. Nice work.
CP011 6 months ago
@CP011 Hey man, thanks for the tips. Glad you like most part of it ;P
=)
MrArarat 6 months ago
Thanks for the crit dude! Yeah, this is pretty spacey sounding stuff - reminds me a lot of when I got into recording (I would just jam with stuff solo and see what I got xD). The volume is a bit loud at some points but nothing too bad (tad too much drive I think).
I really dig 1:15 onwards, cool effects and progression.
CabozDubstep 6 months ago
@CabozDubstep Thanks for the comment.
I have to work a lot on EQ settings.
MrArarat 6 months ago
Nice musical job ! And nice video too !
GruithuisenCityMan 6 months ago
@GruithuisenCityMan
Wow thanks man! That means a lot coming from you! =)
MrArarat 6 months ago