I'm not feeling this at all. No offense, I get handed a lot of demo cd's at the clubs and I don't feel them either. When somethings really good, it takes off, but this song isn't it. I think you should go back to the studio and try again. A better beat, different lyrics it might be good. To be honest it sounds like hip hop from back in the early 90s
Okay, enough jokes. I listened to the whole song. My review: The versus are written pretty well, but the chorus is too repetitive. The female part was a good addition, with exception to the part at 3:33. I don't think you're rapping abilities are very good, which is the main problem. With some adjustments and the right producer, it might be pretty good. Overall: 5/10. I commend you for putting this up and chasing a dream. I just like giving you a hard time. Best of luck.
I'm not feeling this at all. No offense, I get handed a lot of demo cd's at the clubs and I don't feel them either. When somethings really good, it takes off, but this song isn't it. I think you should go back to the studio and try again. A better beat, different lyrics it might be good. To be honest it sounds like hip hop from back in the early 90s
CryMoreToEazy 6 months ago
Luke, your a genius man im proud of everyhting you have accomplished bro!!!!
JrOc0312 8 months ago
such a nerd awesome lol
OfficialDub 8 months ago
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lukehumphreymusic 10 months ago
Okay, enough jokes. I listened to the whole song. My review: The versus are written pretty well, but the chorus is too repetitive. The female part was a good addition, with exception to the part at 3:33. I don't think you're rapping abilities are very good, which is the main problem. With some adjustments and the right producer, it might be pretty good. Overall: 5/10. I commend you for putting this up and chasing a dream. I just like giving you a hard time. Best of luck.
jsnhbe1 10 months ago
What's next a duet with Rebecca Black?
jsnhbe1 10 months ago
pretty awesome, i must say
OhGeeXcore 10 months ago
who could dislike this? this is so good!
reCentLovErs 10 months ago
do u have ears? i think this is vanilla ice's son
jsnhbe1 10 months ago
Thanks for listening bra hahahahahaha
lukehumphreymusic 10 months ago
bra? dont even get me started on that one.
jsnhbe1 10 months ago
this is amazing
hottandsexy15 10 months ago
You know! haha
lukehumphreymusic 10 months ago
I love this haha
lukehumphreymusic 10 months ago
@lukehumphreymusic we are the bomb :)
goneback2u2 10 months ago