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  • this is the bet video if all time. its so true. anybody that smells bad shouldn't be allowed a job

  • so nice that you blare out what she is saying with that shitty music.

  • Tinker v. Des Moines Independent Community School District, 393 U.S. 503 (1969)

  • hahaha we just watched this in social studies last week!!

  • Maybe if the immature students would have actually paid attention in the class, they wouldn't have so may grammatical errors in this video.

  • This is funny but REALLLLYYYYY mean!!! but i laughed my but off!!!!!!

  • You guys are fucking morons. You may not have a great teacher, but posting an embarrassing video of her makes you look like...complete and total fucking assholes. Good job, toolbags.

  • i love you

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  • rofl!! my EDUC 1301 instructor showed us this video in class!! fuck!! lol!

  • i had her as a teacher and i can't say she was a great teacher. it was amazing how little control she had over the class, maybe it was her passive personality. i don't really feel bad for her because all the teachers had to deal with jerks like these kids, for some reason she just couldn't cut it. good ol' secure government jobs. anyhoo she smells sooooo bad.

  • dude she was the worst teacher well.. one of the worst teachers i have ever had... and she smelled like 12 different dirty butts locked in a muggy warm hamper....mixed with 4 cups of gooch sweat. and that is going easy on her

  • sad but funny

  • I actually read about this video and the law suit in law ed today :] i thought i would look it up and see what all the fuss was about.

  • haha everyone cries so much. this isnt even a big deal and i dont see how you could get a 40 day suspension for this. so what if you made a video making fun of your teacher. everyone makes fun of their teachers. it wouldnt have even been very public unless fox tv decided to tell everyone about it. all you sensitive fucks are the problem with this world. you fearmongers the reason why more and more laws keep getting passed for no reason.

  • i thinks its kinda funny this video is still on the internet considering how the kid got a 40-day suspension from school and took this case to court and lost lmao

  • obviously you didnt get it, otherwise you wouldnt have made that comment "the name the mong isnt even in the slightest clever and also sucks". obviously you never did get it, someone else had to explain it to you. and one more thing, youre probably the type of person who will say that pretty much anything sucks, but what you dont realize is that no one gives a shit about your opinion, but you still think that yours is the most important. in short, dont comment back until you graduate preschool

  • 1) The name of the video sucks.

    2) The video sucks worse.

    3) The name "the Mong" isn't even in the slightest clever and also sucks.

    Conclusion: You fail at life.

  • the teachers name is mrs mong dumbass

  • Yeah, I got that. It's not that hard to figure out... well, maybe for you.

    Still, its cliche and sucks.

  • you got tay zonday talking about this. haha nice!

    yeah that biotch was one smellin muddah fuddah. hahaha

    -From the kid who flung a pencil at her and maid thang laugh. hahahah

  • I was in this class. Oh my God. Lmao. I haven't seen this video since last year when the authorities tried putting this on me. I knew all about it!! I didn't make it...they tried getting ME in trouble and framing me...but hell to the no Bobby. I wasn't havin any of it. I got the news involved. Then I was 'courtesy released' backed to class.

  • you know what? forget all these creeps posting that this vid is unneccessary. there are too many assface teachers that think they're all that running the schools. good for you, man!

  • the people who made this were suspended from school for 40 days no joke. i agree this teacher is bad

  • I was a high school teacher for three months, and I have to say that the problem with education in the U.S. is not the teachers. The problem with education in the U.S. today is that parents are raising a generation of assholes who have no respect for the process of learning. Politicians won't say that because they will lose votes.

  • Strongly agreed. This video is miserable.

  • and your saying you never had a bad teacher? its inevitable, everyone has at least one teacher that they hate, theres no way around it

  • They hate the teacher because the teacher makes them work and the student is lazy.

  • @sfldd I completly agree with you. We have the same problem in Norway

  • Too bad the students are so immature they must try to personally attack the teacher who is trying to teach them something. Their own immaturity is very clearly seen.

  • tvap1122- same here. Our school board would fire her in a second with a room like that. Mong?? should be mongO

  • shit i go to this school now...

  • And 'worst', not 'worse'...

  • That room looks like shit. That wouldnt fly with the schoolboard that I have. She would have been fired

  • This is a documentary about a student's life from their own point of view. It does not merit a 40 day suspension. It addresses real shortcomings in classroom instruction. The personal attacks on the instructor are cruel. They are not warranted. But since when were public high schools above cruel satire? It is morally problematic but I err on the side of the student's rights.

  • Well, who does not have its problems and defects? Huauau!

    --------

    Now, the pupil or pupils who had made the video had been cowards.

  • I guess "Mongtage" hasn't spent much time actually learning English over the years. It's "you're" not "your".[2]

    Ps: I'm Brazilian and even I can write better than you.

  • hey, thats funny, i live out in the boondocks, greg is my friend && i was talking about this to ppl here and we googled him and watched the video in class today and laughed, 40 days? thats a bullshit suspension. way to go guys; to everyone else who doesnt like this video; get over. its a video a joke get over it!

  • That is pretty mean

  • The booty part was hilarious.

  • screw her feelings she smells

  • lol she my english teacher.....go kentridge

  • She is not a bad teacher. Students are getting worse these days and I can't believe how inconsiderate people are getting to their teachers as well. We all had our days where substitute teachers would be given a little fun poking, but this is just bad.  Ms. Mong was a great teacher. There were moments, but she never did anything bad to deserve this.

  • It's obvious that your parents have not taught you to respect people. Your parents should have had you remove this from YouTube, as well as formally apologize to Mrs. Mong, her family, your fellow students, your school, etc. It's not too late to do that. Try saving yourself and your future. Be sincere, make apologies, pull this video off the web. If you don't make any attempts to make ammends for this, then you deserve any kind of punishment you get!

  • get over it. its not their parents fault. trust me. my parents are christian, majorly and im now where near an angel.

  • screw that teacher they can do whatever they want even though their film was the worst film i ever saw

  • be MAN guy

  • that video sucked

  • respect your teacher idiot. learn the HONOR of a truth MAN

  • oh man. i had this ms. mong about 2 years ago. it's worse than people can even see on this video!

  • kids

  • I guess "Mongtage" hasn't spent much time actually learning English over the years. It's "you're" not "your".

  • I bet the cameraman just loves this granny and, when she rejected him, he got all angry and made this video. He just don't tell where are all the recordings of their "sweet moments" together...

    HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH

  • For the many of you who posted here, and left comments such as "they didn't do anything, but hurt her feelings," and "Free speech!" I want to ask you to send me pictures, videos, and stories of all your faults. STDs are best. I'll put a little montage together of some of your bigger problems, then I will post it all over the internet, so all may see, then we all may have a good laugh at your expense. "Hahaha. Your hemroid problem is hilarious!!" It will be great fun. Now get to sending.

  • it's not funny. It's terrible to think about the way you treat your teacher. You're not right.

  • "mrs Mong" what a stupid name. hahahahahahahahahaha. hahahahahahahah. ok im done. hahahahahahahaha mrs mong... jesus christ im dying from laughter now. mrs mong. to the guys who made the video, sweet job. oh god stupid name. mong. you should call her mrs fatnugly. suits better

  • Okay, this is hilarious, but also a little wrong.. but it was in no way deserving of a 40 day suspension. That's just crazy.

  • OK, this is NOT FUNNY...I don't blame you for this though, I blame your parents who obviously did not raise you correctly. It is ok to joke around, but this is just plain messed up. You should really learn not to make fun of people because what goes around will definitly come around!!!

  • you just feel bad cause your mommy wants you home when the street lights turn on bitch stfu and suck a dick

  • mpuchala, before you reply so wrongly, maybe you should find out who you are replying to....I am an elementary school (28 years old) female teacher...and I sympathized. Some of the children I teach in the Bronx are more respectful then you.

  • Mpuchala is probably another one of these self-absorbed youth who are self-absorbed and have entitlement issues that I've seen on college campuses and read about in the press.

  • ragskusa24, i love the video so much because of all the hype it has caused. it isn't even that bad, but when people act so angry about it they are forgetting one thing. They are just high school kids. We have all done something stupid when we were that age. We didn't know any better. People are too sensative. They got there punishment. If I were in their place I would be enjoying all the hate mail, they wanted a reaction.

  • So what are you trying to about children in the Bronx? No wonder children have such little their teachers.

  • it's nice to hear that you blame their parents, you must have had a family growing up. guess what, that doesn't mean shit. i am a marine corps vet, only 25, but thats what raised me. not some idealistic fantacy world that you speak of. SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST. you probably don't get that, just step aside. AND YES I SPELLED SOME SHIT WRONG, BUT I JUST DONT GIVE A FUCK!

  • You sir, didn't get enough butt whoopins from your folks growing up. Who raised you? A pack of monkeys? You'll look back one day and realize what you thought you were doing, was all in fun and hopefully you'll be ashamed.

  • i heard about this video on cnn so i had to find it and im kinda glad i did parts of this a very funny

  • you rock! i heard about this on free fm! awesome!  i feel for you and that fat cunt

  • Okay first off, none of that is funny. I agree with you, it was hideous of you doing something like that. That's VERY immature. I was watching FOX NEWS, and I really hope she sues/wins. You're a what? A Junior? Please... you dont even act as a 5th grader. So sad. Hope you feel really ashamed. I hope u get punished in the most horrible ways. Good Luck Ms. Mong!

  • I wonder if the video maker realises he's a fascist.

  • You guys rule!

  • Someone needs to post these little bastards contact information (ie names, addresses, phone numbers).

  • I hope someone looks into Eavesdropping laws in this state. Recording someone without their knowledge and consent is a felony in most states.

  • she could sue for sexual harrasment. Thats what FOX NEWS said! you arent funny.

  • Seems like someone putting up with a bunch of crappy students.

  • GEAT JOB GUYS!! there is no law against having a sense of humor! You should get a full scholarship for college. I'm glad it pissed so many people off! It's funny to see how sensitive people are and can't take a joke! Keep up the good work!!

  • Rhamilton, there is a law against having a sense of humour if it's not funny.

  • Colddirector: What law is that? I am a pre-law student myself, you must enlighten me. Maybe you just need a shoulder to cry on.

  • ummm... this wasn't really that funny... I would say a waste of time.

  • I hope she sues the idiot who posted this.

  • lol she tried.

  • You are pathetic, get an education.

  • Talk about trying to divert attention from your own insecurities. Those who made this are merely ashamed of their own shortfallings and drawing attention to those of another so they can feel better about themselves. I guess we just live in a post-modern era where the only thing that matters is that I am happy, regardless of how anyone else is hurt. Grow up children--I used to know it all too. If you want to be treated like adults and not kindergartners, then start acting like adults!

  • No, no. Maybe they are right. She's an English teacher, right? Just look at all the errors in the grammar and spelling in the opening statement in the video alone. Obviously she's not doing her job very well :p

  • you need to lower the sound because it's harder than hell to hear anything she says.

  • thanks fox news for letting the whole world know about this...

  • is there a rule or law against videotaping someone without their knowing it?

  • Yes there is. It's called "voyeurism"

    "a prying observer who is usually seeking the sordid or the scandalous"-Merriam-Webster

    For those of you who dont know what "sordid" means, here: "marked by baseness or grossness : VILE <sordid motives>"-Merriam-Webster

    So I guess you could say they broke the law.

  • rox4jox | May 24, 2007

    She may be a bad teacher and/or have some poor habits, but that doesn't give you the right to humiliate her in a public forum. You show an amazing lack of maturity and judgement. I'm glad that this was well-publicized so that colleges and employers will see what kind of person they will be getting if they select you. Of course the sub-3.0 GPA won't help much either.

  • LoL , if your going to talk the talk and act like tough guys. Then walk the walk and take your punishment , like tough guys. Suck it up and stop whining , from what i saw you could really dish out your abuse to the poor teacher , Mrs Mong. Now be prepared to take it.

  • Queer bag, I think you are hot for her. Think about how much time you spend looking at her image....freaky. You want an "Ass Taco" from her and you seem like the type of Felcher that would loooove her stank, bottle it and sniff it when missing her. You will be the type of fat homo that will say, "20 years ago I was on Youtube"! Eventually you will be felching for quarters to pay for your room at the YMCA. Have a queer day...but you probably are already...felcher.

  • This isn't a violation of anything. This is just some dumb fat, ugly ass kid being a dip shit in class. What kind of moron posts this on youtube, then cry when he get in trouble? No wonder your having so much fun in high school, because an idiot like you will never got to college!

  • oh hai ontd_t bbs

  • OK...I saw this on Fox News and I was kinda hoping this teacher deserved it. But from what I saw, the way you guys behaved completely eliminated any high ground you might've had. Did you ever give a second to what your antics mean to the kids that might've actually wanted to learn something? No, probably not. My advice to you: pull this thing down before you learn about the legal system up close and personal, because I bet she can sue.

  • I love it! Had this lady my Junior year and she was some kind of DRAMA...

  • As fat as you are now, by the time your Mrs. Mong's age, your going to out weigh her.  Maybe one of your classmates could make a video of you in gym class. Now that would be funny.

  • This is typical of a little high school loser. Why don't you grab your big funny ears and firmly pull your head out of you ass? Congrats on getting kicked out of school!

  • Poor Mrs. Mong. It looks like she needs the How Clean is Your House ladies to help her get that class in order! But...show some respect, she is probably underpaid and has to buy her own tissues!

  • You disrespectful little shit, it's Demon seeds like you that need your ass beat on camera for all of us to see because THAT would be funny.

  • Hey, I just saw a story about this on Fox News!

  • i too just say this on fox

    the one lady said

    "even if he does get suspended... he will still get to go to sundance film festival"!!

  • ha ha!!!!! you deserved getting the boot. i'm sure your not perfect!

  • These little bastards should be executed publicly by being hung by their peckers (naked) until they starve or bleed to death. While being hung, feces and urine should be poured and rubbed on their bodies.

  • I also saw this on Fox News. I think the video is funny! I also think that the suspension is crap! It is a TOTAL violation of your rights! What kind of country is this? BTW-Mrs. Mong looks annoying.

  • Haha KR on the news for the Mongzilla i saw it on Fox lol

  • How did this make it on Fox News. That was dumb.

  • I just saw it on FOX too! Behold the power of the internet!Even the people on FOX thought it was good.

  • consider your reference

  • Ok, first of all whatever happens to you I firmly believe that you deserve it. Maybe if you all werent such assholes than maybe school would be better for you. I feel really bad for that teacher, and I hope that maybe somewhere you can learn how it makes others feel. I pray for that teacher having to put up with you for an entire year....

  • lol just saw this on fox news and went looking for it

  • LOL same here

  • fox news!!

  • Man...This is on Fox News. You really were booted? Yeah, that IS a violation of freedom of speech! Get your right's back!

  • I thought when I saw a clip on Fox News about this video that I was going to be agreeing with you about poor teachers because there are a ton of them in this country. But This is just busting the chops of what seems to be an ok teacher. Document a really poor or bad teacher and I would agree with you. This isn't really right tho

  • I blame the corruption of today's youth on the cartoons today. Remember He-Man, Thundercats, and G.I. Joe? They always had some type of moral message. Nowadays, the kids have... Sponge Bob?

  • dude your crazy that sucks for you now with you being in trouble

  • Hey you could have shown some class and thanked her for putting up with you kids for 180 days. I'm sure your werent all little angels. If she is leaving then you had a chance to be a better person. too bad you missed it and now you are in trouble.

  • Horrible video! 1/5 Don't make fun of your teacher! Wow this made it on Fox News!

  • Hey dude i feel sorry for you most be smart guy but at this time you look like asshole hahahahahaha sorry dude bcoz look who laughing now mmmmmmmmmm ok keep that job and you'll be the super idiot in school now..

  • ....Another person that needs to pay more attention in English class. Can you feel the irony?

  • Your schools looks very poor and the students dress ugly (ever heard of a dress code?). Oh and that teacher is a HOTTIE! I'd hit it...

  • Ya, seriously, this video is just a joke. I agree with accash about the students/teachers, but seriously, it's just a joke. People need to lighten the crap up. He didn't hurt anyone by making that video, just offended someone. It's not against the law to offend people!

  • For what it is worth I think it is against the law to have a video camera in class and I think the humping thing can be consitered sexual harassment. I wouldn't nessarly say so but the government would

  • learn how to spell

  • suck a dick

  • You people amaze me. Sure this is immature. Sure it is insensitive. Sure it is childish.  But it is HARMLESS! Think about it this way. There are kids that are unmotivated and have no drive what so ever in their lives.

  • They get annoyed by a teacher...or harrased by one (yes teachers can also be the bad guy) and how do they respond...with violence..or vandalism. This kid put his aggression into something creative, where noone was hurt (apart from some feelings...they mend.) You should be happy that he decided to use his negativity in a creative way and not destructive. Sometimes you have to look at the bigger picture...teenagers are angry....end of story. Better they make a video than a bomb.

  • Hey I saw a piece of this on FOX News Channel, about getting in trouble for this. Fight this case all the way. Teachers are protected way to much by the law, it's time the students get some rights back. Besides it's not like this video is yellow journalism anyway.

    FIGHT THE SYSTEM!!!!!

  • You might want to understand the system before you fight it. I once had a professor from China. he said in a revolution everyone loses. You want anarchy and these idiots roaming the streets with rifles? Fight the System!!!! How about you build a new system and vote for real people in office? how about that, player?

  • *laughin my panths off* ... Montage thats a really cool video you perfectly understand how we teenage students feel about those teachers... they gorss us out and those overweighted teachers have no idea of what self control and self estime is. Freaking COOL VIDEO!!! GO MONGTAGE!!!

  • Unfortunately, this person needs to realize that he or she might need to pay more attention in English class.

  • At least it's well edited. This kid has a future in the entertainment industry.

  • wow... THIS made it on Fox News? I'll never get the last 10 minutes of my life back...

  • eeww he's in love with her!!! he likes her!!! why else would he video tape her...so he can check out her booty all he wants!!!!

  • hey congratas u made fox news thanks for fighting for our right to free speech i support u all the way

  • Getting suspended for this is just insane. The problem I see is that this teacher doesn't seem to discipline or demand any kind of respect from her students.

  • no it is not insane. if kids take covert images at school and post them on the net, then the only thing that will happen ALL DAY at the school is that kids will discuss the images, ad infinitum, ad nauseum, and then you got no school you got a madhouse. that is why this guy crossed the line.

  • awsome video bro, you made fox news live too holla!

  • Hahahahha I just saw this on the news waaaaay too funny.. I hate teachers like this!!!

  • you were just on foxnews

  • would you bone her for an A?

  • I have to disagree with the previous posts! 180 days with that teacher would make me want to drop out. Transfer please!!!

  • this video is crap, your school houmor sucks, get a life

  • And to all those who say this kid doesn't deserve what he's getting, just remember the teacher did not deserve this either. Think of both sides of the issue. I know sometimes it is hard to think that way as a teenager, but is a very important skill to learn for life. If you are going to take a stand against possible wrong being done towards this guy, then also take a stand against wrong done towards the teacher. We are all human after all, whether we are young or old.

  • Kids in America are spoiled. If these kids would only come to a poorer country they'd see many kids can't even get an education because they can't afford it. High school education is seldom heard of in many places. Perhaps if the students could learn to respect the value of education, they could respect their teachers. If they respect their teachers then their teachers would not have to spend all their time dealing with rowdy kids, and would actually be able to teach much more efficiently.

  • lol sucked in the kid got a 40 day suspension for this

  • I was mildly amused. I once had a teacher named "Mrs. Tworig". Imagine how much worse it was based on the name alone, and you're not even close. I wish there had been video phones 15 years ago...

  • You guys are all being judgementalists, anyone here that swears on their life that they never have done anything mean, then say I, but if not, don't comment on this video.

  • If having standards and criticizing disrespectful conduct is being judgmental, than being judgemental from time to time is not a bad thing.

  • I have yet to see someone say that they, themselves, have been perfect angels, but not many people make a video obviously intended to hurt, and make fun of someone, and then post it on the internet for everyone to see. I went to that school, and I can speak from experience that it's filled with little punks like those trying to act "cool," and funny.

  • You do know, it wasnt the person who filmed it or made it that went to court...right?

  • do you see that kid throw a book down on the table in front of her face? i find that quite aggressive. they've probably done it a hundred times. these kids are so soft, they can't deal with a class they don't like. what if someone did that to you at your workplace? you'd KIL EM

  • This is suberbia...and that teacher was horrible. =\

  • I think this is nothing - I mean, I was entertained to watch it, but I think the legal implications completely petty. The kids were bored, maybe they needed to whipped around a bit, given some discipline - OR - been left to their creative forms of passing the time. Anyway, I think it's totally immature that there's a serious issue brewing over this. WHATEVER. It's just a video. Fine, take it off youtube, whatever. Go find something meaningful to squabble over.

  • you can't give them any discipline. they took the paddle out of the school. you can't touch them. you can't talk mean to them. the home has a disconnected number or a parent that says, "you're out to get little Monty you singled him out. do not call me again." other teachers do not want these kids in teir classrooms

  • If you don't like the quality of the school or class, then go to a private school. That would require some initiative and some money right? Private schools don't suspend you. They counsel you to behave, then pull your file and you are no longer a student. They can not jeopardize the other students or their staff.

  • There is a culture of these mastermind kids. They're going nowhere. They know very little. These are the kids who do no schoolwork for five years, eat the bad free food, and then start complaining. USA is really awash these days. A lot of youth start taking it out on service workers. Same thing is happening in Britain. A lot of teacher attacks there.

  • Folks, today in the USA there are plenty of disturbed students using their teachers as scapegoats and outlets for their confusion and anger. They strike out at what is near. I know one teacher switching jobs. The students just sit there and harrass him all day, and then after harrassing him in his workplace, which is also their classroom, they started lying complaints. He said this is unhealthy to work this way.

  • I agree with your sentiments. I'm a teacher of over 8 years. The sad thing is that 95% of the students are wonderful, caring citizens. The same also applies to teachers.

  • The malicious students who made this video belong in jail. In France they have a higher standard of living than in the USA. They also have laws against photographers making use of people. I'm surpirsed this is still on youtube.

  • What does France have to do with it? Are you French or something? At any rate, France has its own problems, not that that has anything to do with this. Besides, didn't Princess Diana die in France after being chased by a photographer?

  • I feel like I just endured an over-long lesson in Spoiled Prick 101. Glad you lost your court case, losers! Now let's turn the cameras on your mean-spirited and disrespectful asses and see how "perfect" you are...

  • don't worry, i think it's fucking hilarious and i applaud such a video. u did nothing wrong so don't worry. peace.

  • Mrs Mong may be a good or bad teacher, I wouldn't know. The only thing this video shows is that those who made the video are bad filmmakers and bad storytellers.

    The end result is pure hate speech.

  • Sad. On several levels. I don't know what would cause someone to want to be so mean and spiteful to someone else. Teachers are on the front lines of ignorance. Yes. There are bad ones. And maybe she's one. But there are also bad lawyers, bad doctors, and bad politicians...and yes...bad students.

    Too bad. I'm sure you'll have some time as you won't be have to worry about writing a graduation speech or anything. 40 hours per week at 6.50 will probably be karma enough for this one.

  • Amen!

  • You put this on on Youtube.......

    Why?

  • You are a horrible 'child'. One day, probably not for a very long time, you will mature, grow up, be able to think of someone other than yourself... When that day comes, you will hopefully feel like a complete ass. I hope your days are filled with guilt over the utter humilation you must have caused to this woman who did NOTHING except try to help your to better your poor pathetic little life. Your parents must be so proud.

  • I had her last year, and i know the person who is getting in trouble for making this video. I really think it is dumb that he is getting in trouble. I am a very good student (3.7 GPA). having her as an english teacher may have screwed me for life. the video does not show her teaching problems. she was probably the nicest lady i have ever met, she really cared about her students, but she flat out could not teach. i learned nothing from that class, and i was not a screw off at all.

  • This shows two things: A. The teacher's desk is messy (the only legitimate criticism in the video) and B. the kids who made this video are pricks.

  • You spelled 'you're' wrong. Twice (if not more, I didn't want to finish the video).

    This video is one of the most immature pieces of crap I've seen in quite a while. And for anyone saying 'rargh freedome of speech robble robble', he has the freedom to publish what he wants, as long as it is not personal information about others. In that case, the other people need to give consent.

  • On a simialr note, it intrigued me to read all of the comments on this video and I just have one thing to say, to all the tree hugging hippies who says the ladies feelings were hurt "WALK IT OFF!!!"

  • All right, first, you need to fix your spelling and grammar.

    Secondly, if you are going to highlight "stupid" comments she makes, either subtitle them or tone down your music a little.

    Thirdly, you can't stage a dialogue. The attempt with the tissues is clearly contrived, and you should attempt to catch natural moments. Also, if that kid who tries to steal them is the director, you are kind of a prick.

    Heed my advice and maybe you could actually make something interesting...