This is pretty good and some parts of it are great however maybe you shouldn't use as many chords in your next composition as sometimes they drown other parts of the song. However apart from that it's a good uplifting song. Especially the part after the intro. 0:22-0:28 very memorable. However maybe just make it a little less chordal in it's structure if you do another version or another composition.
this is awesome ^^
WillyEver4 1 year ago
please tell your friends about my channel
WillyWinterman 1 year ago
you really good .. :) i can tell you , you will get future with songs .. (;
12717adi 1 year ago
@12717adi haha thnx ^^ and like i said waorking on a new song right now ^^
WillyWinterman 1 year ago
@WillyWinterman hoo , haha very nice..(:
i send you friendly invition , i will see you new song when you upload him..(:
by the way..its - working* haha :D
12717adi 1 year ago
@12717adi haha its almost finished ill upload when my sister will give me her camera XD and i wrote working lol
WillyWinterman 1 year ago
@WillyWinterman haha i know that feel...my sister do it to me also ..XD
haha no no you wrote "waorking" just look..XP
12717adi 1 year ago
This is pretty good and some parts of it are great however maybe you shouldn't use as many chords in your next composition as sometimes they drown other parts of the song. However apart from that it's a good uplifting song. Especially the part after the intro. 0:22-0:28 very memorable. However maybe just make it a little less chordal in it's structure if you do another version or another composition.
superstrumer 1 year ago
@superstrumer thank you very much for your tips and i am working on a new song right now ^^
WillyWinterman 1 year ago
ווילי אתה טובבב :D
לייקי
matanbendak 1 year ago
thnx ^^ you mind joining my page on facebook i need more fans and ill write more songs and covers hmm write will winterman
WillyWinterman 1 year ago