GCSE Dance Piece

[ChloeTheDramaQueen]

did you have a stimulass? ;/

[EllaXR]

19sarahburgroyne93, your allowed lyrics in your songs i.e a lyrical composition

[DancingPixie1]

you're a really good dancer :) but i wouldn't consider this a GCSE piece. Also to all those people who say you can't have lyrics, you can, but they have to relate to your stimulus if you dont want to be marked down. x

[tschmit2008]

you're very talented.... but the difference between being  some off the street talented dancer and someone great is the ability of putting their movements into a story. This dance had no story, this was you trying to show off as much as you could, and that's alright, but a great dancer isn't going to do that.

A great dance could use half the moves you used and put it into beautiful and poetic choreography, something you can definitely fix so go for it!

[dancercandy1]

dont strut, actually use something to travel across the floor, turns or whatever, just dont march like your some model!

[x3CocaRose]

I loved the flexibility but you had no floor work, varying dynamics, and didn't develop your motifs you just did the same thing a lot, there wasn't any travelling pathways and I'm sorry but what was with the strutting?

[ILoveDance7771]

You're blates a gymnast! x

[TheCarrotIsHere]

I fear that mine looks like this.

[NatalieMerrygold96]

everyone stop being haters, shes an amazing dancer!

[abzkebabz1]

im sorry but your shorts look like knickers.

[frecklesarefit]

n well sed siaaaaan212 id die for tht figure cos im bigga but i dance so much like dancins my passion so hu eva sed shes tu big fuk u cos ur killin peoples dreems

[frecklesarefit]

im in yer 9 doin the corse now n ye its hard work but it is truly amazing x

[mccreedyhm09]

AMAZING!!! im in y9 and thinking of doing gcse dance next year.... is the corse good? :)

[ttorria]

@mccreedyhm09 NO!!don't do it!! unless you really like contemporary dance don't pick it as it is all contemporary i chose it and now regret it but it's up to you :)

[LiverpoolBabe100x]

No offence, but I think your to large to be a dancer and the choreography is awfull, not to mention the song choice. What are you wearing by the way? You should have worn a leotard at least with dance pants. The dance looks like you made it up whilst you were on the spot. What grade did you get?

[Siaaaaan212]

ermmm how the hell is she to large to be a dancer?????? dancers dont have a weight limit, its for anyone!

[HannahElhan]

@LiverpoolBabe100x too large to be a dancer? WOW!

[GuitarGUYinSHORTS]

But some clothes on next time

[rolfers1]

Choreography is awful... song is bad and umm... put ya arse away love!!

[hessocaring]

wat grade did u get

[DancingGee]

i used words in my GCSE dance and i got full marks for the dance side of it.

[KateAnn94]

youu cant do yourrr gcse dancee to lyrics LOL

[therewasanelephant]

its probally a leotard !!!

[partonator09]

i think you forgot to put on your trousers that morning, didn't you love!

[delancae]

Hahaha I agree. I do GCSE dance and if any of the girls in my class had turned up like that we would be given a U purely for inapropriateness.

[harleylovespaige]

you used the space well thats about it. the dynamics where the same youneed to vary your movements add levels and repetition with adaptations. i didnt see what the stimulus was??? for ur extended note programme you need to practically give a reason for each movement and i dont no wat ur going to write for the stand up split :S need to use more space on the split leaps and consider chnging the music. GOOD LUCK :(

[samandriley]

wat grade did u get

[xlilmoocowx]

You need to add more dance into your piece instead of showing off your gymastic skills. Remember to use things such as levels and dynamics. Also i thought words were not allowed in a gcse dance piece.

[xxcutecxx]

they are but olny if they relate with the stimulas which in this dance it doesnt look like they do depending on the stimulas she choose

[xlolly2468x]

Your Aloweed To Use Lyrics You Just Get Marked Down For It

[aalice2k7]

my dance teacher at school would have a fit if i wore that to a lesson haha.

+ your a lovely dancer btw, your split leaps were fab :)

[amylouiseeeeeee]

snaap.

[annamartin09]

your a beautiful dancer but this piece has no meaning what is it about.

[DiscoXFreestyleXAmy]

I think your dancing is really good, and i know how hard it is to do dancing like this..So weldone, and keep up the good work!

[roobzie19]

your good but theres not enough movement , it wernt great.

[93FloraLaura93]

This doesnt have the elements to be a GCSE piece..

[Sophyloves]

yeah i agree wiv 19sarahburgoyne93 its not a gcse preformance at all, an why the hell are you wearin leopard print hot pants if it is? randommm :S

[19sarahburgoyne93]

that isnt a GCSE performance.

1- your song has words in.

2- thats all gymnastics.

3- you dont strut off like that you have a pacific ending position which you have to hold.

4- there is no story ..

you are a good gymnas/ballerina though :D

[sophieSPAZZTARD]

i cudnt see a theme either ;P

[frecklesarefit]

exactly my point u probably ar ashamed tu giv ur mark cos u got marked down for lyrical song , outfit , dynamics , the fact thers no end position , no story n so many mor things i cud say bit i cba

[Mscookiegirl1x1]

@19sarahburgoyne93 im sorry but barley any of that is gymnastics....yes shes flexible and maybe shes better then u but how do u know there isnt a story id love to see you try it

[MuffinsAreAttacking]

@19sarahburgoyne93 Hey :D My Gcse teacher has said that you can have songs with words in it .. as long as the song isn't in the charts ... my friends being moderated with the song bleeding love by leona lewis and thats okay <3 :)

[liivv]

i'm sorry but this wasn't very good,

where was the climax of the dance?

what were the different sections and what were the motiffes?

whilst doing your dance, you're meant to be able to see them clearly and see a definite climax..

you are great but this wasn't a great piece.

X

[Catheeeeeeeeeeeeeee]

What song is this?

[baybeejesii]

hiya that was really good. i've chosen BTEC Dance for my options nxt year. This years year 11 had GCSE but there changing it. wat would you guys say is better? i heard gcse is ??

[Heyyitsslauren]

wow! your well good and bloody brave!! xx

[daniel25300]

Muy Bien :D... im doing GCSE Dance and i think your dance is amazing compared to any dance piece at my school! haha i gotta love the cat walk ending :D :L

[mariiwarner]

BEAUTIFUL :D:D

dont listen to what anyone else says they probably dont know a thing about dance and since ive been dacing for a heck of a long time, i thought this is a m a z i n g :)

keep dancing!

i with i were this good (:

x

[codenameSTARFISH]

loved the dance and music :)

[emrejonson]

this is a bull shit

just doing gymnastics....

[ultrastimulation]

beautiful! what mark did you get?

[bexYGM]

wat was ya stimulus

u really shuda explained on the description of the dance was very good tho

iv gota do ma choreography to be accessed soon nd we ent allowed lyricsin the music how gay lol

[Suusiee1010]

PHAAA!

[xxsophexx2k7]

Your an amazing dancer, not feeling the choreography though x

[Conversewannabe]

hehe i like how she hoisted her leg into ther air. very eligant

[Quarantinea]

OMG HELEN

I JUST LOOKED AT THIS VIDEO RANDOMLY AND I DID A DOUBLE TAKE AT THE COMMENTS LIKE, "Waiitt..." AND ITS YOU XD

COINCIDENTAL I THINK NOT.

Anyway, hoisting of the leg was interesting xD

[mYcHeMiCaLrOmAnCeGaL]

im sorry but that was really boring with random hand twirls

[katiestalker]

can't believe you're only at GCSE, thats ace!

[xoxscarlettxox]

buy bigger shorts

[max360pumz]

woahh

[dancindiva1992]

ooo. i used to copete in disco. where are you from?

[bindweed]

its by westlife i think its called im already there

[rhi131]

thanks :)

[rhi131]

what's this song called??

[CheridaleMH123]

disco dancer?

wth:L

[rhi131]

hey thats really gd :]

n yeh you cn tel u do disco lol

x x

[xstephiex]

that was wicked.

i can so tell your a disco dancer lol

xxx

[charlie123liam]

wow your a great dancer

[chantellootape]

what was your theme?>

your soog ood at dancing

:)

[addiegol]

i think you did a good job. What was your stimulus? and also how did you do?

[raille]

very elegant and confident, i don't understand the lack of clothing?

[addiegol]

flexibility?... maybe.

[DANCE1993]

Your A beautiful Dancer what Was your Theme ?

[bronni1991]

fab dancing ! do you do freestyle disco ?

[missukfemale]

hi

eww that floor looks filthy to dance barefoot on i hate dancing barefoot on filthy floors