OMG!!! You're such a talented writer!!!! u should write a book or something!!!!! u're REALLY good!!! But you should stop switching from 1st person to 3rd!!! One or the other, not both. Except for that u were hell good!!!
ClaudiaEmilyPerrone 3 years ago
ummm...?
iloveallJONAS 3 years ago
what the name of this songs
lataviajonas 3 years ago
OH SNAP! im waiting for joe to come rescue her. i have a feeling he like her...
soccorg016 3 years ago 2
ohhh! i love this!
ImaginaryRockstarr 3 years ago
this sounds really good! but you need to post quicker!!
JBfan42 3 years ago
i try my best
i do have school and work to.
GotJonasFever 3 years ago
yeah I completly understand, I'm just like dying to read it though, ya know? lol
you should post another right now! It could be like a bonus or something =P
lol kk
ill try :)
moreee :)
nickjonasisminexx 3 years ago
Woah! This is def only for mature audiences! WOW! It's great! Keep making em'! Can't wait to see part 3 :)
megglesatthetube 3 years ago
I LOVE IT.
like, i love how you made it for a mature audience.
LittlePickleFace 3 years ago
amazing, keep them coming lady!
SillySkittle 3 years ago
ooh nice.,.........
KCH1678 3 years ago
nice... good story... interesting
nickjonasfreak216 3 years ago
Wow...
AppreciateJB 3 years ago
More More More! This sounds really good!!
Allygator64 3 years ago
uh oh. HURRY!
JOEJONASisMYLIFE101 3 years ago
OMG!!! You're such a talented writer!!!! u should write a book or something!!!!! u're REALLY good!!! But you should stop switching from 1st person to 3rd!!! One or the other, not both. Except for that u were hell good!!!
ClaudiaEmilyPerrone 3 years ago
ummm...?
iloveallJONAS 3 years ago
what the name of this songs
lataviajonas 3 years ago
OH SNAP! im waiting for joe to come rescue her. i have a feeling he like her...
soccorg016 3 years ago 2
ohhh! i love this!
ImaginaryRockstarr 3 years ago
this sounds really good! but you need to post quicker!!
JBfan42 3 years ago
i try my best
i do have school and work to.
GotJonasFever 3 years ago
yeah I completly understand, I'm just like dying to read it though, ya know? lol
you should post another right now! It could be like a bonus or something =P
JBfan42 3 years ago
lol kk
ill try :)
GotJonasFever 3 years ago
moreee :)
nickjonasisminexx 3 years ago
Woah! This is def only for mature audiences! WOW! It's great! Keep making em'! Can't wait to see part 3 :)
megglesatthetube 3 years ago
I LOVE IT.
like, i love how you made it for a mature audience.
LittlePickleFace 3 years ago
amazing, keep them coming lady!
SillySkittle 3 years ago
ooh nice.,.........
KCH1678 3 years ago
nice... good story... interesting
nickjonasfreak216 3 years ago
Wow...
AppreciateJB 3 years ago
More More More! This sounds really good!!
Allygator64 3 years ago
uh oh. HURRY!
JOEJONASisMYLIFE101 3 years ago