I agree with Robotman - your phrasing is non-existent but obviously you have the notes under your fingers so you can fix that. This piece is ethereal and breathes in its phrasing. Keep up the good work and it will become beautiful!
1. Too mechanical. I noticed a bit of rubato, but I think you've got to use a bit more. Scriabin's early works are reflective of Chopin's style, and many of his works use even more rubato.
2. The inside voices are too loud
3. Dynamics would be good.
One other thing - maybe I'm wrong about all three of the above, and your camera is to blame for playing tricks on me. Try putting some distance between the piano and the camera.
Well, it would be impossible not to like your performance. But you know what I REALLY liked about your videos? The lighting. Oh my goodness, it's like a halo around your head, shifting every so often. ^_^!
I agree with Robotman - your phrasing is non-existent but obviously you have the notes under your fingers so you can fix that. This piece is ethereal and breathes in its phrasing. Keep up the good work and it will become beautiful!
hollybeeme 1 year ago
Three general comments:
1. Too mechanical. I noticed a bit of rubato, but I think you've got to use a bit more. Scriabin's early works are reflective of Chopin's style, and many of his works use even more rubato.
2. The inside voices are too loud
3. Dynamics would be good.
One other thing - maybe I'm wrong about all three of the above, and your camera is to blame for playing tricks on me. Try putting some distance between the piano and the camera.
Robotman42 3 years ago
Rubato...I believe my adjudicator wrote something about that too...
haha I think you're right! The sounds practically all get picked up at the same volume...small room, bad camera...blahh =[
Starry9Angel 3 years ago
This is such a beautiful song...=D You did a great job playing it:)
praisemusicforever 3 years ago
I agree ^^
And thank you =)
Starry9Angel 3 years ago
Absolutely beautiful.
honulii 3 years ago
Thank you ^^
Starry9Angel 3 years ago
Im just curious...How long did it take to learn this piece? btw Gr8 performance! =)
TheStick14639 3 years ago
Hmm...I think somewhere around half a year...but I was doing it along with a bunch of other songs and this wasn't exactly my priority, so...
And thanks! ^^
Starry9Angel 3 years ago
He wrote this when he was 14?!
Scriabin had a lot of talent in his genes, his on wrote similar music when he was about 11, but he died in a drowning accident...
Have you heard the orchestral arrangement of this song by Stokowski?
revoltz7 4 years ago
Haha yes Scriabin certainly was a prodigy =D I didn't know he drowned though...=S
Hmm...no, I don't believe I have. I'm going to search it up right now XD
Starry9Angel 4 years ago
oops, I made a typing error. I meant his son drowned! Look up Julian Scriabin.
Keep up the good work!
revoltz7 4 years ago
haha XD
Thanks! ^^
Starry9Angel 4 years ago
Dear Starry9Angel, Did you know that Scriabin was 14 years old when he composed this piece?
Hard to believe! Keep it up.
LVB1770 4 years ago
O__O I sure didn't!
Thanks! ^^
Starry9Angel 4 years ago
Well, it would be impossible not to like your performance. But you know what I REALLY liked about your videos? The lighting. Oh my goodness, it's like a halo around your head, shifting every so often. ^_^!
Aurora72md 4 years ago
hahahaa never knew that lighting would be that impactful lol XD
Starry9Angel 4 years ago
Did you do this song for your 9 exam?
lioness1993 4 years ago
nope. I'm doing it for 10
Starry9Angel 4 years ago
Oops. Wrong song xD
I'm doing it or 10 too....lolz
lioness1993 4 years ago
you're doing the same song???
Starry9Angel 4 years ago
=D
=D
xD
lioness1993 4 years ago
I'm also doing the Sonate Pathetique, among others........can i hear a WOOTWOOT!!!
lioness1993 4 years ago
i really liked this one. =P sounds really beautiful. you play so good. T___T
airrowlus 4 years ago
It's a great sad song isn't it?
haha thanks XD
Starry9Angel 4 years ago
a great sad song.... XD
lioness1993 4 years ago