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From: L2b1serval
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  • Thanks. Yeah, I wrote this as an experiment and know its pretty hard to follow. There are actually a couple of explanations that would fit but the one I had in mind was witness protection gone wrong. Hope this helps.

  • Hi how are you. I just saw the video and I liked the story that you wrote, I tried to follow as best that I can but if you can clarify what was going on with the guy than that would be great but all in all it was good. I write short stories myself and they are all in first person or for the most part a good majority. maybe I will post one on here and maybe an agent will see it and sigh me to a contract (fingers crossed) anyways I enjoyed it nonetheless and I hope to see more soon. Kudos.

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