Crush... {4}

[ily143xDD]

oh gosh D: t better not be the sherriff!

[lovedrunkx33]

I love this Nishi, spit it out selena! :o who just entered the apartment?

[Fionaaxox]

Love you nishi!

[morgiejonas]

I like the picture in the video!! and Oh Nick is in trouble!!

[teris12]

Oh wat the heck...........love it

[dreamerxnelena]

I hate it when people interrupt, lol :D

[lovejonas90]

oh my gawsh

nick and his ways :D

-dead-

haha oh shit looks like room mates are home

[MiaStoryMusic]

Ahh....WOW! :D  ♥

[xAshuleexLuvzxNickyx]

woah thats intense! :D YES! haha

[fallenJONAS]

Nick is freaking hot!

[GuitarGirlMairead93]

Awesome :)

[oxPriincessPurfectxo]

hey whats the name of that font

[JasmineTilman]

Hope she says her name is Selena. But what if it's Miley? jk! My guess is that she's most probably the sheriff's daughter?

[xxfirefliesxxx]

i agree with 132ruj123 .. you're stories are AWESOME!!

[123ruj123]

wow you should be a writer your stories are wonderful!

[ladiicrazii234]

:O

it HAD to end there?

[pandinha66]

S-E-L-E-N-A SELENA

[hustlepuffers]

:D yippi yi yay! lol WOO go NELENA

[amylauraineofficial]

hey nishi i love ur story and i just posted one of mine on my profile so maybe u could check it out or tell people to check it out if you like it =) but u would have to have read a book called night world book 1 to really understand what the story is talking about

[joennie86]

ohhhhhhh

LOVEE

[WeirdOrangeOctopus]

At first I wasn't mad on it but now I LOVE IT!

[jonasdemimusic]

AMAZING!!

OMG I know it is going to be the sheriff that is also selena's dad!!

Loving this series so much!!!

[jojonasrox01]

love it

[Missynewb]

soo nice!!!!! =]

[gisastuff]

I-N-C-R-E-D-I-B-L-E This is such an amazing series <3 you're amazing ^^

[TheMiZzJoNaS123]

omg!!hurry up and make the next one!!

[shinebright1218]

I l-o-v-e it!!!!

[amythisrs]

OMG!!!!

[KaraokesAndSingalong]

Love it :)

[OfficialMinnieAdams]

more :)

[ForevaJess96]

MORE!!!

[micbobo666]

good storie can't wait for the next episode!

[lindamas1]

i so love the whole western style. Thanks for writing this

[MizzCatii]

ahh.... can't wait for the nex one!

this is totally amazing♥!!

[twilightjonasfan101]

I LOVE it, one of my new fav series!!! cant wait for the next one.

[conversegirl0408]

oh my god!!!!! hurry up with the next one!! this is awesome and nick is sooooo hot!!

[jenjenni2008]

next

[xoxlolpeace]

omg! shes going to run :(

[missmorphin11]

always an interupption! LOVE IT!

[MyCrookedSmile]

xD I meant please. xD

I got too excited.

[MyCrookedSmile]

EHHH!

MORE PLEAE. :DDD

[YourBestFriendME]

i would be so scared if i was selena!!!!!! Anyways it was super good okay this is now becoming my favorite series!!!!!!!!!!!!

[GenieJonas1]

WOW!

[hustlepuffers]

ah!hhh LOVE IT!

[GintareAuglyteMusic]

lol thats awesome :)

[swirlygirly411]

omgggg!

[DisneyFanz101]

oh wow :']

[Brie651]

Wow!!!!!!!! Amazing

[OfficialKaylaHiggins]

theres always gotta b a disrupting part haha

[kayyxbabie7]

i absolutely loved itt

[britter1331]

OMGG POST THE NEXT ONE SOON PLZZ :D

[12345mo1]

god i whant nick bad

[JoBroLover97]

omg moremore more xD

this is so amazing ik u'll win for sure!

[icharmed]

ahah someone ruined the moment

[xLilyyyyxx]

Somebody has to ruin their moment right haha

I loved it . I love all your stories because it's very descriptive like a book. It's like your stories are drugs that I'm addicted too. I'm hooked, but I'll NEVER go to rehab to help my addiction haha x)

random question; do you know who Stephen king is? I love his books I'm currently reading "the tommyknockers" good book so far :))

[TheFanFab]

Very descriptive:)

[csnelena]

okay nick is so hot lol i loved it!

[DaisyDoo167]

Well written and descriptive; I like it. (:

[xoxoflipflop12]

that was really good! nick sounds super seducing!

[nickjaybaby]

OKAY, right now it says you have 39 comments (: so better be ready to post the next part Nishi<3 this was so thrilling to watch :D

[lindamas1]

totally adored it, thank you

[9ismynumbernickjonas]

more more more fast pleaseee?

[7jackass77]

MORE!!!!!! its selena, i just know it.

[Ayumu50]

"40+ comments please :)"

You knew that i was looking for Crush 40 material, right?

[robomex55555]

who would fall under his spell? loved it! i wonder who came

[Luckybj95Bakupacount]

amazing

[LovelyLiLAmy]

oh.. crapp.. :/ who's home?

its probably cody or david.

[Deniselvr1]

OMFG  that was so awesomee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[freakyyellowgirl]

ooohhh its the sherif!!!

[CasiAngeles193]

loved it

[TinkerBellForever12]

Love it .<3

[oxGomezLovatoCyrusxo]

i love it sssooooo much :P

omg nick u were torturing the girl lol

ohhh i bet those were the guys

[RickyAmy01]

Eppppp can't wait for the next one :)

[sunakit]

blew me away!

[joebrolover4ever1]

i loved it = ) and i betcha it waz either the sherif or some one that else that lives there

[lilybeppa]

omg, lovee it!

all your series are amaazing :)

pleasee post soon, no rush thoughh ;]

[beachgirl1754]

haha i hope its the sheriff that would be sooooo funny....hahaha

[StarStruckStories]

Love it<333

[fanfordisney]

Aww,

someone's gonna ruin Nick's fun xP

POST SOON! :D

[PuertoRicanBratz]

cant wait for the next one!

[cookiemuffinx3]

awsomee:)

cant wait for the next part ;D x

[AdriJerryJonas]

Sucha good chapter :D

[SunnyGomez1]

MOREEEEEEEEEEE

Nick seems so hawt in this part

[random123xoxo11]

please make more!!!

[HeyDudeex]

it's Demi at the door right :)?

ha, i love this x

[XxSelenaDemiFan1xX]

nooo! so close! who's at the door?? cant wait for next one!! seriously, i'm jumping right now ^_^

[DemiHeartJoe]

:o

MORE!!!!

[Mariana062897]

YOU DONT KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY RIGHT NOW!!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!

IM LOVIN IT!! (LOL STOLE THE LINE FROM MCCDONALDS)

Xoxoxox

Mariana #1 Fan

[LankanLil]

This is like one of the fucking bestest series. I swear you're like the number one person here on YT [writer.] You rock. Like f'reals, eh. Your stories are the best and this episode rocked. I lovee it. You have got to become a writer when you become older. F'real. :D

-Lily [ Do you remember me !? ]

[imperfectionxROSE]

this is my NEW FAV SERIE AHHH i was so into the story........OMG LOVE IT <3 UR AWSOME <3......XOX

[ballagirlly123]

oooo yeah ! that was good

[danideangulo]

wow...

Its amazing...

I think maybe the sheriff will come or something and she will be the sherrifs daughter :)

[kitkatkirsty]

amazing! i love nick in this <3

[xNelenaWriterx]

this is amazing! you're like a REAL author! I love how you make everything "flow" together (if that makes sense lol). u make everything tie perfectly together! I promise you, you will DEFINITELY become an author! And i'll be one of the first to buy the books :)

xoxo,

xNelenaWriterx

[UltimateLuvStories]

Nick is so HAWT in this!

[DemiSelenaJonas1598]

Amazing ♥

[jbluvrr98]

Love it :) [first comment yay] sum comes in?! :O

[conversecutie121]

haha, awesome...so is this like...kinda like a nick j bad boy story? lol LOVE IT!