murderpoem (a short horror movie)

[cazz77]

also use a a quick transition on the titles if your going to cue them on the bass notes its not as "hard" on the viewer theres more fluidity that way.Just a minor tip...god vidoe though.............

[cazz77]

You notice how the titles pop up every time a bass note is hit on this wonderfull peace by beethoven Moonlight senata?

[fureiousgeorgefilms]

this was really well done.I'm hoping to go to film school, our first real attempt at a short horror was called Awake.Anyone who is interested, its in my videos,I could use any advice

I thought that it was different than most horror movies, the piano created not so much tension but I think it did what you wanted it to.I could feel the desperation and confusion and helplessness of the girl

[10WPA10]

i think it needs a bit more blood but great overall

[celticpunkwhore]

very good!

[streetjustiz]

Niiice.

[ullaandy]

this is more of music video really, the charectors should have dioluge but apart from that its very impressive

[SnipurKillurz]

That was impressive, but you should watch "Haunted Toilet" by ScreamingFistProductions thats the best horror short i've ever seen.

[RainyDayFilms]

For a first time, it's better than most other independent horror films out there. Keep up the good work!

[JCIMAGE]

a job well done

[slapshot1x]

Very cool. Impressive and moving.

[merialie]

Very impressive!