no offence but here are some pointers,0:02 was done well with the blur effects, 0:03 need a lil bit more frames,could try drawing it in 3 seperate layers so u will have more freedom to pan kisame movements.0:10 the kunai scene was gd, just have to speed up a little,0:12 - the eye level running needs to correct the bg perspective,u could use warp perspective transform in photoshop to do that, warp it down to the ankle level &add the sky & trees behind and u will be gd to go,0:13 fairly well done.
@HimuraAnimator Aa but still some of this are not creative critique, there just straight up dick comments. if i wanted to post a negative comment, i would try to point out problems in where he/she might of mess up, not just be like "you suck". those comments don't help just makes you feel bad or less, depending how they take it.
i think you'll get more respect if you animate your own stuff. With fan animations, people really expect it to look like the characters exactly. You'll have a lot more freedom with some random character nobody knows And do some exercises. Practice. I think you'll improve.
Guys guys keep it positive,he did not trace so he did not heavily use references and on the other hand you guys neglect that his use of backgrounds has improved and he hes drawing with a mouse.
im not saying he does not need to improve,im saying that you guys come across as negative and discouraging.
creol you rally need to improve, you've been uploading animation for a long time now and it hasn't improved one bit. You need to work hard and practice before you upload another video
C'mon Creol.... You used to show a lot of promise, and now you're going backwards man! YOU NEED TO TRACE FOR THE MOMENT. Get the character's looks down first so the proportions come out right. On all of your new videos, the characters have giant blocky bodies and they don't look like themselves. (same with the Ben10 video) Trace a panel and work from it. You can't expect to get better this way until you get the basics down.
Amazing man. But there are a couple of proportion problems so you might want to work on that a little more. Line art needs improvement and you need to start using effects, the only effect i spotted here was gaussian blur.
@Pagatcha Crap. Dang youtube. I just typed a comment and it deleted it. I mean he imrpoved like animation wise. But yes i agree with you on the drawing. They are off and you need to trace for just a little bit more. And the colorings off also. And you could use straighter lines like in your sasuke vs raikage vid.
@Pagatcha i am trying to improve i just dont know how im trying like different things but ill try the trcing till i can get better line things if you could tell me somethings to improve on please tell me no one is telling me nothing
@creol4 i`d say for starters, work on basic movement, and better proportioning with you characters. I admire that your doing full body, but its not easy to get the basic down that way, don`t be ashamed to use stick figures. something else i noticed is that the timing at which your guy runs doesn`t convey the sense of speed, his legs move too slow, like wise the spinning of the shuriken, also too slow ( look up some tutorials on animating swords you`ll understand what i mean). - my 2 cents lol
@creol4 tbh i dnt think theres nothing wrong with thiss.. apart from makin progress which every animator has to do anyway...and ure styles unique its not a fanimation where it looks like the cartoon which is just a copy i like it and with out a tablet this is pretty neat .... would u do me a favour and check my coral animation tell me wot u fink and if u want sub coz i cnt get any subs :\ mayb we could collab to anyway dude keep doin ure think and dnt let people hate on u to much :)
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KuroPhantonHive 1 week ago
LOL, i found that funny, kisame needs more hairs though :P
TeamOfReveL 1 month ago
okl
9narutobeast 2 months ago
Wow
This really good
Good job
nomBRUNCHnom 2 months ago
dude this was funny old man roshi actually ran like an old man for once awesome XD!!!
spiritWolf64 3 months ago
So cooool! .....but...NOOOO KISAMEEE<3<3 =D
bowlfullofcherries 3 months ago
yep Pikadav is write try practicing to draw it Naruto style and try removing some little errors like extra lines that are not needed
AceTrainerKayden 5 months ago
aww this is so cute :D
DJSt3v3n 6 months ago
It sucks a fucking lot... that's what I call... GAY
GreekAnimeTroll 8 months ago
this sucks.
TGPGamingHD 8 months ago
no offence but here are some pointers,0:02 was done well with the blur effects, 0:03 need a lil bit more frames,could try drawing it in 3 seperate layers so u will have more freedom to pan kisame movements.0:10 the kunai scene was gd, just have to speed up a little,0:12 - the eye level running needs to correct the bg perspective,u could use warp perspective transform in photoshop to do that, warp it down to the ankle level &add the sky & trees behind and u will be gd to go,0:13 fairly well done.
ShikiXEX 8 months ago
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GamingTranceSeer 9 months ago
Keep it up man don't give a shit about negative comments, just improve your animations thats all =D
-Shinobi Animations
ShinobiAnimations 10 months ago
@ShinobiAnimations
I think he is good enough to know these aren't hate, but critique that he can improve on
HimuraAnimator 10 months ago
@HimuraAnimator Aa but still some of this are not creative critique, there just straight up dick comments. if i wanted to post a negative comment, i would try to point out problems in where he/she might of mess up, not just be like "you suck". those comments don't help just makes you feel bad or less, depending how they take it.
-Shinobi Animations
ShinobiAnimations 10 months ago
You need to improve stop using Paint.Net and move onto Photoshop. If you want, I can send you the link for Photoshop CS3.
XBlader19 11 months ago
i think you'll get more respect if you animate your own stuff. With fan animations, people really expect it to look like the characters exactly. You'll have a lot more freedom with some random character nobody knows And do some exercises. Practice. I think you'll improve.
LongFingered 11 months ago
GOOD HOB CREOL
yugimoto1207 1 year ago
good
brobi338 1 year ago
Guys guys keep it positive,he did not trace so he did not heavily use references and on the other hand you guys neglect that his use of backgrounds has improved and he hes drawing with a mouse.
im not saying he does not need to improve,im saying that you guys come across as negative and discouraging.
ssscybro2 1 year ago
creol you rally need to improve, you've been uploading animation for a long time now and it hasn't improved one bit. You need to work hard and practice before you upload another video
Pikadav 1 year ago
@Pikadav ill try really i will
creol4 1 year ago
C'mon Creol.... You used to show a lot of promise, and now you're going backwards man! YOU NEED TO TRACE FOR THE MOMENT. Get the character's looks down first so the proportions come out right. On all of your new videos, the characters have giant blocky bodies and they don't look like themselves. (same with the Ben10 video) Trace a panel and work from it. You can't expect to get better this way until you get the basics down.
FinalJinchuuriki 1 year ago
Creol, study anatomy and composition in the each scene.
make a lot of sketches on the paper
and if you dont have scanner or tablet, try to trace them somehow to the screen, i dunno, do something.
you are doing animation, but it's bad.
Pagatcha 1 year ago
Amazing man. But there are a couple of proportion problems so you might want to work on that a little more. Line art needs improvement and you need to start using effects, the only effect i spotted here was gaussian blur.
UchihaAnimator 1 year ago
Are you continuing the animation?
shamanfighter100 1 year ago
@shamanfighter100 no, actually it's worse that his other vids
everything there is bad, creol is not even trying to improve.
lines is one of the last things as well as colouring
Pagatcha 1 year ago
@Pagatcha Crap. Dang youtube. I just typed a comment and it deleted it. I mean he imrpoved like animation wise. But yes i agree with you on the drawing. They are off and you need to trace for just a little bit more. And the colorings off also. And you could use straighter lines like in your sasuke vs raikage vid.
shamanfighter100 1 year ago
@Pagatcha i am trying to improve i just dont know how im trying like different things but ill try the trcing till i can get better line things if you could tell me somethings to improve on please tell me no one is telling me nothing
creol4 1 year ago
@creol4 i`d say for starters, work on basic movement, and better proportioning with you characters. I admire that your doing full body, but its not easy to get the basic down that way, don`t be ashamed to use stick figures. something else i noticed is that the timing at which your guy runs doesn`t convey the sense of speed, his legs move too slow, like wise the spinning of the shuriken, also too slow ( look up some tutorials on animating swords you`ll understand what i mean). - my 2 cents lol
khetto4life 1 year ago
@creol4 trace, it really helps.
study anatomy, watch our vids after all : D
Pagatcha 1 year ago
@shamanfighter100 thnx maybe if some ideas pop up
creol4 1 year ago
@creol4 i think people r bein to harsh on u :\
lookedynamixhales92 11 months ago
@lookedynamixhales92 yeah i know i just wanted to try a animation without my tablet and thy just gang up on me like i traced the manga all wrong...
creol4 11 months ago
@creol4 tbh i dnt think theres nothing wrong with thiss.. apart from makin progress which every animator has to do anyway...and ure styles unique its not a fanimation where it looks like the cartoon which is just a copy i like it and with out a tablet this is pretty neat .... would u do me a favour and check my coral animation tell me wot u fink and if u want sub coz i cnt get any subs :\ mayb we could collab to anyway dude keep doin ure think and dnt let people hate on u to much :)
lookedynamixhales92 11 months ago
Wow you did so much better. I really have to say good job. But work on the lines and your good. :D wow.
shamanfighter100 1 year ago