A lovely recitation. Nice job. That is one of my favorite Whitman poems. I think Whitman may be the only poet I really understand. Thanks for reminding me of this.
A lovely recitation. Nice job. That is one of my favorite Whitman poems. I think Whitman may be the only poet I really understand. Thanks for reminding me of this.
A lovely recitation. Nice job. That is one of my favorite Whitman poems. I think Whitman may be the only poet I really understand. Thanks for reminding me of this.
Beautiful poem. I can tell you like it as well. Yet, please take this advice: poetry must not be read as if it was a list of stuff you need to bring from a grocery store. I don't mean you have to yell it out or go all sarah bernhard on the poem, but it is all about feeling. It's music. It has melody. Listen to it, feel it and understand it. Understand your relation to it, then say it, feeling it.
You know why Nicole Kidman won an oscar for portraying Virginia Woolf? It was not the fake nose or the fake accent. It was the way she says "Always the years between us, always the hours!" It's just her voice. She's not even speaking on screen. But at that moment you know how sentimental you really are, how vulnerable to beauty you can be, how manipulative art is supposed to be. That's what it's all about. :)
Ha thats cool that you did this in 7th. Im in 8th and i have to memorize it by tommaro : / but as our choices go we have: Growing pains by Jean Little, Dream girl by Carl Sandburg, A posion tree by William Blake, The road not taken by Robert Frost, Alone by Edgar Allen Poe, And O Captain, My Captain, By Walt Whitman.
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(So I'm going to judge you, because it's what everyone likes to do to others when they're feeling insecure...don't take offense, just ignore it.)
So you think that just because you put on some makeup and have a black and white filter so all the imperfections of your face aren't as noticeable, that you are a great reciter of Whitman's poetry?
What, because you try to look and sound depressing, all the emo guys are going to see this and fall madly in love?
so you mean you're insecure to here? hahahaha kidding!
I think she did "recitation" and not declamation.... yupyupyup!! but she could do it in either way...... but i think if she did the declamation... the video would be better......
Wait! is it really a vintage video or they just put some effects?
(Just as you critique her, I will critique you.) That, my friend Solange0001, is not true at all. The black and white signifies the two sides of this poem - not good and evil, but life and death. The gray area, if you would get technical, could signify the space between, wherein the character being narrated and spoken for in this poem must lay, to be telling his captain how much of a captain he was, and to be telling his captain that he is dying.
The "emo guys" aren't going to fawn over her because she looks or sounds depressing. They would fawn over her more due to the fact that she is reciting Whitman's poetry, and doing a bang-up job of it. You need to learn to read between the lines. Have you never taken a tenth grade English class? Significance and symbolism.
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ooohh....you're such a literary genius!! just look at the way you use your loaded words and terminology!! oh, little old me, i feel embarrassed!! i could never seem as smart as YOU!! (disregarding the fact that I've taken all honors courses of English in high school, including AP English, passing the exam with a 5...AND I thoroughly enjoyed what I read and analyzed it to a college-level extent). Are you a guy? if so, you're probably defending her because your dick went hard when you saw her.
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solange0001 you're either an amazing troll and a fucking moron, or just a fucking moron /= also: condescending, pretentious, superior, shameless, big-headed, egotistical and just a little off in the grammar and spelling, not enough to care if you weren't being an arrogant cunt, but enough to point out because it's ironic. Congratulations, you should be a politician.
Well done! 5 stars! You mention you're worried about getting some words wrong? The only one you really missed was "its voyage CLOSED and done" (You say, "SAID and done"). Only 1 word off of a poem you memorized 10 years ago? Impressive!
I had to memorize this in 7th grade too and still remember all the words. It was over 10yrs for me too, isnt it funny how u dont forget the words. Also wouldnt it be weird if we had the same teacher. Mine was named Mrs. Duffy
You read it good, but get the fuck out of the bed and show some faceemotions, you look pretty dead, don't misunderstand me, you're cool and I respect you, but when you make a video you need to show emotions, but the reading was perfect!
Whitman was the greatest of poets!! I've been told this was Whitman's least favorite poem, due to it's meter - which is unlike any other Whitman poem. Thank you for reciting it. Still they are great words.
this poem makes me want to cry (oh how i wish i could cry) your delivery was impressive. Your eyes were solemn but radiant. Your a very beautiful girl.
I dont want to seem like the American who posts the hot phrase and so forth. You know, the rash or rude compliment. But that was just a petty arguement to try and blur the original saying which is: You have a very interesting face and i have a reason to believe you know this. I dont understand it. Your eyes, i guess its the eyes.
This is beautiful
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A lovely recitation. Nice job. That is one of my favorite Whitman poems. I think Whitman may be the only poet I really understand. Thanks for reminding me of this.
pschlehr 4 months ago
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A lovely recitation. Nice job. That is one of my favorite Whitman poems. I think Whitman may be the only poet I really understand. Thanks for reminding me of this.
pschlehr 4 months ago
A lovely recitation. Nice job. That is one of my favorite Whitman poems. I think Whitman may be the only poet I really understand. Thanks for reminding me of this.
pschlehr 4 months ago
Damnit, I thought this is another Beautiful Agony video.
O Captian! My Captain! Where are thou le petit mort?
ninuxy 7 months ago
Thank you.
MusclecarsMeditation 7 months ago
Beautiful poem. I can tell you like it as well. Yet, please take this advice: poetry must not be read as if it was a list of stuff you need to bring from a grocery store. I don't mean you have to yell it out or go all sarah bernhard on the poem, but it is all about feeling. It's music. It has melody. Listen to it, feel it and understand it. Understand your relation to it, then say it, feeling it.
VideoCrime 7 months ago
You know why Nicole Kidman won an oscar for portraying Virginia Woolf? It was not the fake nose or the fake accent. It was the way she says "Always the years between us, always the hours!" It's just her voice. She's not even speaking on screen. But at that moment you know how sentimental you really are, how vulnerable to beauty you can be, how manipulative art is supposed to be. That's what it's all about. :)
VideoCrime 7 months ago 2
Love it; the sound; the shot; the black & white; the look. Really great. Congrats.
siriobobo 9 months ago
Love it; the sound; the shot; the black & white; the look. Really great. Congrats.
siriobobo 9 months ago
Looks like your reading it.
Xx13jonelle13xX 9 months ago
i am in 8th grade i have to memorize it for friday.. wish me luck i only know the first paragraph... ahhh g2g gotta study :)
auddielovesmusic 9 months ago
@auddielovesmusic Lol you watched this too Audrey? Hahaha...
Xx13jonelle13xX 9 months ago
Ha thats cool that you did this in 7th. Im in 8th and i have to memorize it by tommaro : / but as our choices go we have: Growing pains by Jean Little, Dream girl by Carl Sandburg, A posion tree by William Blake, The road not taken by Robert Frost, Alone by Edgar Allen Poe, And O Captain, My Captain, By Walt Whitman.
krimdilakrim 10 months ago
i like this girl.. she doesn't emote to much
reibaful 11 months ago
wtf! who the fuck are you! disappointment!
whole27 11 months ago
loved it, very charming, and moving--I love uncle Walt
KerouacTulku 1 year ago
You dicked this up. Remember that for the rest of your life--you dicked this up.
ninuxy 1 year ago
@KeikouPoison more like dicks!
Intactisin 1 year ago
I was listening to the other recitations, particularly the ones with the animated Whitman. That guy did it COMPLETELY WRONG!
YOU did it CORRECTLY!
sevenonpaper1 1 year ago
pretty good. need a beard and cool hat though
Quantumew 1 year ago
sonds too monotone and not very alive.do not read it like an anchor! sry :)
(and yes, before everybody begins to swear, i cannot do it better.but that does not matter at all)
GIwillo 1 year ago
great tone in your voice. nice read.
xDorieliciousx 1 year ago
i had a dream of but that will soon be dead too
TheFriedLiverAttack 1 year ago
Nicely Done!
wsmith1213 1 year ago
i had to learn this for yr 6 and i dont remember thigs well :S
Tazza2424 1 year ago
beautiful! loved it <3
LiLaLuse 1 year ago
You said it really well but I think you should sit up instead of laying down.
Gleek216 1 year ago
aww thts kl
TheBashmentgual 1 year ago
YAWPPPPPPPP
719madison 2 years ago 2
Nice job. Don't listen to the negative comments.
puppetlit 2 years ago 4
nice one, i enjoyed you reading that.
mrstephenjamessmith 2 years ago 2
I think there's no reason anybody needs to hate.
SFsuperforte 2 years ago 2
no hay palabras equivocas, ellas cambian para dar un nuevo sentido.
gentenormal 2 years ago
Amazing video. Great voice, lovely face. I really love this poem.
Congratulations!
brahipster 2 years ago 4
you are amazing!!!!!!!!!
ScarletTheAwesome 2 years ago 3
mala onda xD
ellawieder 2 years ago
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(So I'm going to judge you, because it's what everyone likes to do to others when they're feeling insecure...don't take offense, just ignore it.)
So you think that just because you put on some makeup and have a black and white filter so all the imperfections of your face aren't as noticeable, that you are a great reciter of Whitman's poetry?
What, because you try to look and sound depressing, all the emo guys are going to see this and fall madly in love?
solange0001 2 years ago
so you mean you're insecure to here? hahahaha kidding!
I think she did "recitation" and not declamation.... yupyupyup!! but she could do it in either way...... but i think if she did the declamation... the video would be better......
Wait! is it really a vintage video or they just put some effects?
Lovesterfab 2 years ago
(Just as you critique her, I will critique you.) That, my friend Solange0001, is not true at all. The black and white signifies the two sides of this poem - not good and evil, but life and death. The gray area, if you would get technical, could signify the space between, wherein the character being narrated and spoken for in this poem must lay, to be telling his captain how much of a captain he was, and to be telling his captain that he is dying.
nachtsilence 2 years ago 2
The "emo guys" aren't going to fawn over her because she looks or sounds depressing. They would fawn over her more due to the fact that she is reciting Whitman's poetry, and doing a bang-up job of it. You need to learn to read between the lines. Have you never taken a tenth grade English class? Significance and symbolism.
nachtsilence 2 years ago 2
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oh you really showed me, "nachtsilence"! way to go for showing me up! You feel proud?
solange0001 2 years ago
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ooohh....you're such a literary genius!! just look at the way you use your loaded words and terminology!! oh, little old me, i feel embarrassed!! i could never seem as smart as YOU!! (disregarding the fact that I've taken all honors courses of English in high school, including AP English, passing the exam with a 5...AND I thoroughly enjoyed what I read and analyzed it to a college-level extent). Are you a guy? if so, you're probably defending her because your dick went hard when you saw her.
solange0001 2 years ago
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solange0001 you're either an amazing troll and a fucking moron, or just a fucking moron /= also: condescending, pretentious, superior, shameless, big-headed, egotistical and just a little off in the grammar and spelling, not enough to care if you weren't being an arrogant cunt, but enough to point out because it's ironic. Congratulations, you should be a politician.
SvenneRio 2 years ago
Oh Solange , my Solange...I'm so shure you're an ugly piece of shit...
sonotantobello 2 years ago
Beautiful......reminds me of losing my dad
robindavies24 2 years ago
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Performance with no emotion, no feelings, you just say some words you learned by heart, but reciting, this is something else
1/5
hastapup 2 years ago
So beautiful poem, so beautiful girl.
nemtudommegjegyezni 2 years ago 4
Beautiful performance!
ediann 2 years ago 4
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ediann 2 years ago
Well done! 5 stars! You mention you're worried about getting some words wrong? The only one you really missed was "its voyage CLOSED and done" (You say, "SAID and done"). Only 1 word off of a poem you memorized 10 years ago? Impressive!
greymattersblog 2 years ago 2
so beautiful!
please memorize some more poems!
best wishes
dervortex 2 years ago 2
You are classically beautiful.
dontpushmedute 2 years ago 3
you are cute! :-)
chrobbb 2 years ago 2
aww that is soo cool
fiochu 3 years ago
great
youlivewhatyoulearn 3 years ago
I had to memorize this in 7th grade too and still remember all the words. It was over 10yrs for me too, isnt it funny how u dont forget the words. Also wouldnt it be weird if we had the same teacher. Mine was named Mrs. Duffy
ScaesarBtech 3 years ago
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You read it good, but get the fuck out of the bed and show some faceemotions, you look pretty dead, don't misunderstand me, you're cool and I respect you, but when you make a video you need to show emotions, but the reading was perfect!
thnx
idiotkrati 3 years ago
Shame it cuts the final line off. One of my all-time favourite poems, and a pretty good rendition.
Elfdaughter 3 years ago 3
aww, i think you recited it well :)
TheBrunoYouKnow 3 years ago 7
....for those of you who feel slightly more daring...O captain, my captain!
alexthemod1 3 years ago 2
Sounds ok,but she looks too pretentious.
jimfarrowlove 3 years ago 2
This is a lovely job.
solwolfpunk 3 years ago
She is good in bed I promise.
vibby098 3 years ago
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Pretty bad reading
Paradiseonme 3 years ago
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..........cold and dead
pinkhobo666 3 years ago
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FAGGS! who lieks poetry
MoeDizi39 4 years ago
People that can spell. :)
mellowyellow06 3 years ago 8
Whitman was the greatest of poets!! I've been told this was Whitman's least favorite poem, due to it's meter - which is unlike any other Whitman poem. Thank you for reciting it. Still they are great words.
mldenman 4 years ago 3
Fallen cold and dead.
You have a better memory mthan I have and this is my favorite poem.
Rosiercentral 4 years ago
I like your Face. I love you.
6395544 4 years ago 2
I love being an English major. We're covering Whitman right now.
Adrianrulz 4 years ago 2
To Robin Davis24 who asks for explanation. The poem is about Lincons death/assasination.
abuBakr97 4 years ago 2
Very good :D
I'm from Germany and we read the book "Dead Poets Society", where Oh Captain My Captain! is very important :D
We had to learn this, too.
KoharuSarah 4 years ago
there's a mbook?
Rosiercentral 4 years ago
Whitman, greatest of all poets! you did well, you did very well.
rondar623 4 years ago 3
Great poem, great words...greetings fron Spain.
Oh capitán, mi capitán
rumenige 4 years ago 2
Great poem, never studied...strikes me as a metaphore for the death of a father or mentor can anyway explain??
robindavies24 4 years ago 2
Like cancontrl said, this is a poem that Walt Whitman wrote about Abraham Lincoln.
chaychull 4 years ago 3
Abe Lincoln, his "captain"....
cancontrl 4 years ago 3
beautiful girl reciting walt whitman. love it
prospectnyc 4 years ago 3
you are not bjork
rottenapplez 4 years ago
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wots bjork.
pinkhobo666 3 years ago
this poem makes me want to cry (oh how i wish i could cry) your delivery was impressive. Your eyes were solemn but radiant. Your a very beautiful girl.
funyanX 4 years ago 3
it cut off the last "cold and Dead"
Psychochaos3 5 years ago 2
I dont want to seem like the American who posts the hot phrase and so forth. You know, the rash or rude compliment. But that was just a petty arguement to try and blur the original saying which is: You have a very interesting face and i have a reason to believe you know this. I dont understand it. Your eyes, i guess its the eyes.
Saoff 5 years ago 2