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  • Uggggggghh writing can be a pain in the ass! I'm trying to write a new song for my band ( not famous YET so not sayin the name but I can't come up with any lyrics!!!

  • Nice Lyrics

  • DAMN! i was just thinking of a band name that was something to do with an amp setting or something (it was gona be overdrive but someone else has tht =@) and then i find out your band is called feed back ! if id had a couple more minutes i would of probably come to tht lol

  • pro..

  • I actually wrote a song about killing people. But for that song I pretended that the teenage version of myself was inhabited by one of the 2 kids from columbines soul. and when you hear the lyrics with that in mind the song makes perfect sense.the 2 boys could have said some of the same things before they got to the point of actually doing the killing.the point of the song is to teach people not to mentally torture people, not only is it wrong but we dont know what they are thinking.listen to it

  • i'm in crisis at the moment. everything i write is epic power metal. i've tried everything to stop it. i dont write fantasy, at all!!! and my lyrics often having negative themes such as internal issues and nuclear war. yet no matter what i write my band can still compare it to kamelot or gamma ray. and their getting pretty sick of my lyrics because we play prog-metal. but nothing i can do and nothing i write seems to be hugely different or take a new approach. no matter how much i try to change.

  • Trying to write songs like Asking Alexandrias old songs.....kinda stuck on inspiration though xD

  • i have a problem in finding an interesting intro :S I mean the rythm of the intro, not the lyrics...Any advice??

  • i'm trying in vain to write really good speed/power metal lyrics but i also enjoy dark emotion in my writing. but i'm drained of ideas and any lyrics is write seem to be more cheesy than stratovarius.

    i'm sick of always coming up with corny lyrics and stuff i need inspirations to come up with something dark and gloomy.

  • 99,99999998%? So i could still have a chance

  • What is the song on step 2?

  • how did u make the video

    

  • Yes Dream Theater!

    

  • awesome song choice

  • hey mate at 0:49. thats wrong lisent to this song

    watch?v=R2F_hGwD26g&p=F70DD56B­F123B847&index=3&playnext=3

  • Love the first song isnt panic attack by dream theater

  • i lysten to System of a Down to inspire me!

  • 0:51 Holy fuck, what is that song? Thrashy as fuck!

  • @varulv234 toxic waltz by exodus

  • heyy whats the song called at 1:33?

  • love the intro song bro

  • Hey my name is lucy.If someone really needs lyrics I can always help.I am a writer =)

  • Hey man, your advice was awesome

    I wrote my own lyrics and want feedback from some people

    ddo you reckon i could msg you them and recieve some feedback?

  • nice songs!

  • mk im trying to write death metal and those usualy have break downs near the end.. any advice on break downs?

  • My advice on breakdowns is do a solo instead. If you have to do a breakdown don't do one in every song cos they get old fast.

  • @REDWOOD904 make them brutal! well what kind of death metal? name some bands that you want to "sound like"

  • ha holy wars. awesome. nice vid, helped alot.

  • thanks im a drummer, my bassist is obsessed with writing about killing people and hate and it has no real emotions or anything. this really helped

  • THanks... if you need any help just message me if you need any other ideas

  • @angryscottishdude Dont hate on the bass, hate the playa

  • nice vid man i will see how it goes i am lead guitarist but can write nethin without good lyrics so i'll see how it goes :)

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