Me Playing the Old castle Pictures at an exhibition

[MrSaxophonekid]

This has to sound more ominous. Plus you should be using vibrato

[tenorsaxman56]

@MrSaxophonekid thanks for your opinion i actually haven't played it in a while. but i will try to work more on the vibrato

[KANGAPONY]

Too fast. It's a slow tune. You also weren't getting the mood right for most of it.