I had a debate in class today about whether or not computers should reside in an educational setting. I think that teaching should always be allowed to transcend physical spaces, and reach the minds of people across the world, reach the minds of those you would never meet.
Mr. Mali is a teacher of mine, and I have never met him.
this is agonizing in its sincerity. your life has been amazing in pain and beauty-though the line between the two is slim. thank you for writing this, for posting it, for having the courage to speak your truth and a thank you to all the wonderful teachers i've had-though Mr. Mali was not one of them.
I'm a 24 year old combat veteran, tours to both Iraq and Afghanistan. I graduated from a small school in Texas back in 2005. Through my years of high school, I would be involved as much as I could in everything to include UIL Poetry. Taylor Mali was, and still is, one of my heroes. While deployed, I was blown up, shot at, and lost a great friend of mine. I came home with PTSD. While going through my old stuff I found my old poetry binder. As I read Mr Mali's poems the pain and fear I felt seemed
It's unfortunate that such a brilliant writer that offers such a great influence for our society happens to believe in a magical man in the sky...I guess even the best of people have flaws...
@MrLycanthropy it is unfortunate that someone so well spoken can't think of a more respectful way to refer to another person's beliefs than "magical man int he sky." Really now, can we all graduate from the elementary school name calling? just cause you don't believe it doesn't mean you have to count it as a flaw. Faith of any kind, be it in God, science or magic is a strength and any who disagree are fooling themselves. Please be more respectful in the future. thank you
@TheSparrowhawk13 Belief in Science is not "Faith" Faith is supporting something that has no intelligent or visible reason to support it. Faith is saying "yeah it makes no god damn sense *pun intended* but I am gonna believe it anyways". Which in no way shape or form follows a belief in science. Sorry, I don't respect ignorance.
@MrLycanthropy "Faith: 1 complete trust or confidence in someone or something 2. strong belief in God or in the doctrines of a religion, based on spiritual apprehension rather than proof. 3. a strongly held belief or theory." None of this mentions Faith riding on something "not making sense." Faith is having confidence in or "believing" in something regardless of sense. Calling it foolish saying one cannot have faith in science and not respecting people who have it shows your narrow mindedness.
@TheSparrowhawk13 When you speak of Religious "faith" you aren't talking about 1 or 3. Your talking about 2, which is the idiotic one. Believing in something based on apprehension rather than proof, apprehension meaning you'd rather believe it total batshit nonsense because of the fear that if it's true *even though it's about 99.99999999% unlikely* you would still rather follow that then common sense because of the horrors that come if your wrong....that's not only foolish but cowardly too.
@MrLycanthropy I was speaking of ALL TYPES of faith as I have REPEATEDLY stated, you DOLT! you have missed the point entirely; simply, all faith all definitions are valid. so, you have no problem with having faith in say science, but as soon as one brings up God they are an idiot? think; a man says "god do not let me drown" and a boat saves him. To that person, who sees god as a moving real force , logically it was god who sent the boat that day. That is not bat shit from a logical standpoint.
@TheSparrowhawk13 All faith is not valid, if you want me to respect your faith blindly simply because your stupid enough to follow it then fine. I will. And tomorrow morning I'm starting a faith where you kidnap 9-year old girls, force them to fuck horses on camera and then throw them into the river weighted by cinder blocks. And you better fucking respect it even if you don't like it because it's my faith and as you've clearly stated faith is something that has to be respected Right?..idiot.
@MrLycanthropy No, that is not right because what you described is not faith. You are either trolling or an idiot. People like you and the fundamentalist Christians are what is wrong with the world today; too caught up in your own twisted views on reality to respect anything outside of your own world. You, in the end, are no better than the Westboro Baptist Church. Faith is believing in something bigger than yourself. I respect that you don't believe in God. Go in peace and don't be a dick.
@TheSparrowhawk13 No the behavior itself is not faith, but faith would be an excuse to commit such atrocities. Just like how people of faith believe non human creatures are somehow ours by right, and that gays shouldn't be allowed to get married. Religion does horrible things, THAT is the deep point that you don't get. Have a happily ignorant life :)
@MrLycanthropy Look, I am not asking you to agree with his faith on God, only to respect it as what he and others believe, but what you have done is be belligerent and a douche bag and have argued from a point that I INVALIDATED WITH A SIMPLE REFERENCE TO THE DICTIONARY! You are showing how narrow minded and intolerant people have become of one another and more than that are only making the lines that divide people more distinct rather than MATURING THE FUCK UP and showing another HUMAN RESPECT.
@TheSparrowhawk13 Why the fuck wouldn't you have faith in boats instead of god? That is the problem, any random act can be attributed to an all powerful space daddy with nothing more than blind ignorance. You did not invalidate my argument by grabbing the dictionary because any intelligent person can tell you there is a huge difference in the term faith from science to religion. It doesn't mean the same thing, which is why the dictionary sections it off by number. You can't use it the same.
you kinda just know. you have this need to write, like some people need to draw, or sing, or talk. the first words just come to you, and then you just keep writing 'till your hand's cramped and your vision's blury, 'till you've gotten it all out.
but whatever you do, it's never as good as you know it could be. and that's how you know
Hats off to you Taylor Mali and the amazing seventh grader Tony Steinberg. (And your quote about old vikings dying with swords in their hands will be going up on our wall in the English classroom at Aragon High)
stumbled upon this by accident, now i find myself stuck in this chair untill i have seen every single one of Taylor Mali's clips. Thank you for the sore ass, Thank you for the burning eyes. Thank you for you!
So moving! this must be the little boy he is dedicating the 1000 inspired teacher's mission to. (If he inspires 1000 people to be teachers he is cutting his hair and donating it to Locks of Love)
I did not cry but I can admit that I was at the point of tears! The second I found out about the boy chills ran down my back! Cause I have known what is like to have a friend with such an illness.
It's inspirational because he is demonstrating that death can effect people of all ages and that children with their innocence can understand this. It is inspirational because 12 boys shaved their heads and forgot about what people with think just so that they're classmate would feel happy again.
@Firenzzo Its about finding a sense of brotherhood, even at a young age, that binds us together in a memorable moment. Even in death, these kids will learn what it truly means to have someone they care about taken away, and the spiritual feeling of honoring their brother's passing. Its inspirational because of the rarity... and the fact that no one honors a death like these kids did.
Mr. Mali. I'm an university teacher. One of the major programs in which I'm teaching is PE. I find your work very inspirational and since I've discovered your work one week ago I'm now officially your fan.
I loved this poem the first time I heard it. A few days after I watched this, my dog died, and I knew exactly what to do for a sort of goodbye ceremony for him.
thx for making me cry, and being able to make ppl cry, which was also beautiful in itself ( seeing that some ppl can still be touched by simple poetry and beautiful stories). still wish you were my middle school teacher one day
This is amazing. It starts out so descriptive and inspiring and suddenly your heart breaks. Thank you sir. I will forever remember the name Tony Steinberg.
Thank you for the inspiration. I read your poetry and I am determined to go into work tomorrow and be an even better teacher. Sometimes we teachers need reminders about how important our work is. We can get bogged down in meetings and paperwork and nonsense. You do a great job of reminding us!
My creative writing teacher Christian Kaminsky, who has opened for you, played this in my class. You voice rang out loudly in our silent classroom. i sat, three seats back and listened. Suddenly my heart filled with such emotion. Just from your words. For this i commend you. You are my hero.
I've loved this mans poetry since I first heard what a teacher makes on def poetry, but of all the poems I've ever heard read or read silently or verbalized passonatly to my self and anyone else that was in hearing range, of all the poems of my life, this one was the most powerfull, beautifull, passionate and moveing.
My teacher in sophomore year played this poem for our class. The moment it ended, we sat it utter silence for ten minutes before the lunch bell rang. No one spoke. It was the most eloquent silence I have ever heard.
This made me want to cry....and believe more than ever that all the time, and stress and inability to do what I want because I'm working on a lesson plan or philosophy statement for an education course is worth it. young people in this country have more strength of character than we ever give them credit for.
i've heard this poem many times before. this is the first time i have listened to it as a teacher, and boy was it powerful listening to it this time! beautiful, yet sad story.
Dear Taylor- cant wait to welcome you in Sydney when you come to Australia next year to be poet-in-residence in Queensland! You have a huge fanclub in my company already! What is the timing of you visit? Annalie (BTW, I am bringing my kids to NYC for XMAs & we will go to Bowery Theatre on Tuesday 29 Dec _ hope we might c u there again?)
While I love this poem and I love his poetry, I have to disagree with the theological point of view. The god of mathematics made a rather chaotic universe. Maybe my point of view about God is cynical and atheistic, but even that poem moved me hard. The possibility of God existing still remains.
hey taylor my class is trying to raise enogh money for you to come to our school and do a preformence but your a"agents" say that your fee is $3500 so if we can i hope you will come or all that spear time and money we raised for you to come to our school wouldn't count i hope you come i and akll of us love your poems
I posted a video response to this, though it hasn't showed up yet. Thank you, Mr. Mali, for making a recording of this poem available! I've been looking for one for quite some time.
Mr Mali, your poetry is simply inspirational, from the absurd and playful to poems such as these you never fail to hit the mark. Your students are lucky to have you for a teacher - even if it will take them a decade to realise it.
My hat goes off to you, sir, and my heart to the boy in your tale.
Why do I always get allergies when I listen to his poetry?
shallowbthygame 13 hours ago
12 times I watched this. 12 times a tear dropped down my cheek.
bamfkejk 1 week ago
That was awesome
aziaandyancyarebored 3 weeks ago
That was absolutely amazing. I loved it. Thank you Mr. Mali.
TwilightFan2 1 month ago
I actually just cried. What a beautiful poet.
theresabaum 2 months ago 4
this is beautiful! :)
Jessi181 3 months ago
This video always makes me sad
lilharris802 4 months ago
Oh this made me cry :(
Poplopo 4 months ago
I had a debate in class today about whether or not computers should reside in an educational setting. I think that teaching should always be allowed to transcend physical spaces, and reach the minds of people across the world, reach the minds of those you would never meet.
Mr. Mali is a teacher of mine, and I have never met him.
oxonameless 4 months ago 26
Manly tears have been shed this day....
xZOMBEHZx 4 months ago
yeah i need to be warned for stuff like that
dand3100 4 months ago 2
this is agonizing in its sincerity. your life has been amazing in pain and beauty-though the line between the two is slim. thank you for writing this, for posting it, for having the courage to speak your truth and a thank you to all the wonderful teachers i've had-though Mr. Mali was not one of them.
PsychoticPhey 4 months ago
Without fail I cry every single time, it's just beautiful
dawntigga 4 months ago
Very moving, thankyou.
Bethygivesyouhuggz 5 months ago
That was beautiful, Mr. Mali. Thank you.
jcs1122 5 months ago
@Goth3m3
"God" often refers to the universe.
cherokeehernandez 5 months ago 3
Beautiful, but right angles don't have varying degrees.
widgetboy 6 months ago
I had been trying to cry for at least a month. Thank you.
vitalsentiment 7 months ago
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vitalsentiment 7 months ago
I didn't believe the comments saying people had started crying. Having watched the video, I apologize.
sammincheva 7 months ago 5
Don't believe in god... But an amazing poem none-the-less.
Goth3m3 8 months ago 2
to go away. Taylor, thank you. You have been a great inspiration and your words have touched me deeply. Keep the great work coming.
SGT Donald Kimbrell
Texas Army National Guard
ChemicalWarrior74D 8 months ago 2
I'm a 24 year old combat veteran, tours to both Iraq and Afghanistan. I graduated from a small school in Texas back in 2005. Through my years of high school, I would be involved as much as I could in everything to include UIL Poetry. Taylor Mali was, and still is, one of my heroes. While deployed, I was blown up, shot at, and lost a great friend of mine. I came home with PTSD. While going through my old stuff I found my old poetry binder. As I read Mr Mali's poems the pain and fear I felt seemed
ChemicalWarrior74D 8 months ago 2
Oh my god....Taylor, your work is ingenious.....thank you.
TheGuerrillaPoet 8 months ago
Actually crying here
ZACCYBABY4EVA 8 months ago
WOW
s4njuro 8 months ago
my English teacher showed us this in class last year.... everyone was crying. it is a well loved poem in our class.
loverofbooks111 8 months ago
It's unfortunate that such a brilliant writer that offers such a great influence for our society happens to believe in a magical man in the sky...I guess even the best of people have flaws...
MrLycanthropy 8 months ago
@MrLycanthropy it is unfortunate that someone so well spoken can't think of a more respectful way to refer to another person's beliefs than "magical man int he sky." Really now, can we all graduate from the elementary school name calling? just cause you don't believe it doesn't mean you have to count it as a flaw. Faith of any kind, be it in God, science or magic is a strength and any who disagree are fooling themselves. Please be more respectful in the future. thank you
TheSparrowhawk13 8 months ago
@TheSparrowhawk13 Belief in Science is not "Faith" Faith is supporting something that has no intelligent or visible reason to support it. Faith is saying "yeah it makes no god damn sense *pun intended* but I am gonna believe it anyways". Which in no way shape or form follows a belief in science. Sorry, I don't respect ignorance.
MrLycanthropy 8 months ago
@MrLycanthropy "Faith: 1 complete trust or confidence in someone or something 2. strong belief in God or in the doctrines of a religion, based on spiritual apprehension rather than proof. 3. a strongly held belief or theory." None of this mentions Faith riding on something "not making sense." Faith is having confidence in or "believing" in something regardless of sense. Calling it foolish saying one cannot have faith in science and not respecting people who have it shows your narrow mindedness.
TheSparrowhawk13 8 months ago
@TheSparrowhawk13 When you speak of Religious "faith" you aren't talking about 1 or 3. Your talking about 2, which is the idiotic one. Believing in something based on apprehension rather than proof, apprehension meaning you'd rather believe it total batshit nonsense because of the fear that if it's true *even though it's about 99.99999999% unlikely* you would still rather follow that then common sense because of the horrors that come if your wrong....that's not only foolish but cowardly too.
MrLycanthropy 8 months ago
@MrLycanthropy I was speaking of ALL TYPES of faith as I have REPEATEDLY stated, you DOLT! you have missed the point entirely; simply, all faith all definitions are valid. so, you have no problem with having faith in say science, but as soon as one brings up God they are an idiot? think; a man says "god do not let me drown" and a boat saves him. To that person, who sees god as a moving real force , logically it was god who sent the boat that day. That is not bat shit from a logical standpoint.
TheSparrowhawk13 8 months ago
@TheSparrowhawk13 All faith is not valid, if you want me to respect your faith blindly simply because your stupid enough to follow it then fine. I will. And tomorrow morning I'm starting a faith where you kidnap 9-year old girls, force them to fuck horses on camera and then throw them into the river weighted by cinder blocks. And you better fucking respect it even if you don't like it because it's my faith and as you've clearly stated faith is something that has to be respected Right?..idiot.
MrLycanthropy 8 months ago
@MrLycanthropy No, that is not right because what you described is not faith. You are either trolling or an idiot. People like you and the fundamentalist Christians are what is wrong with the world today; too caught up in your own twisted views on reality to respect anything outside of your own world. You, in the end, are no better than the Westboro Baptist Church. Faith is believing in something bigger than yourself. I respect that you don't believe in God. Go in peace and don't be a dick.
TheSparrowhawk13 8 months ago
@TheSparrowhawk13 No the behavior itself is not faith, but faith would be an excuse to commit such atrocities. Just like how people of faith believe non human creatures are somehow ours by right, and that gays shouldn't be allowed to get married. Religion does horrible things, THAT is the deep point that you don't get. Have a happily ignorant life :)
MrLycanthropy 8 months ago
@MrLycanthropy Look, I am not asking you to agree with his faith on God, only to respect it as what he and others believe, but what you have done is be belligerent and a douche bag and have argued from a point that I INVALIDATED WITH A SIMPLE REFERENCE TO THE DICTIONARY! You are showing how narrow minded and intolerant people have become of one another and more than that are only making the lines that divide people more distinct rather than MATURING THE FUCK UP and showing another HUMAN RESPECT.
TheSparrowhawk13 8 months ago
@TheSparrowhawk13 Why the fuck wouldn't you have faith in boats instead of god? That is the problem, any random act can be attributed to an all powerful space daddy with nothing more than blind ignorance. You did not invalidate my argument by grabbing the dictionary because any intelligent person can tell you there is a huge difference in the term faith from science to religion. It doesn't mean the same thing, which is why the dictionary sections it off by number. You can't use it the same.
MrLycanthropy 8 months ago
i hope this is a true story, absolutely moving
yertlemcfuzz 9 months ago
@yertlemcfuzz I'm sure it is.
RyukoAkari 9 months ago
Crying!
zirtavia 9 months ago
how do you do that with your words? when did u know that your words were powerful?
lightsonme 9 months ago
@lightsonme
you kinda just know. you have this need to write, like some people need to draw, or sing, or talk. the first words just come to you, and then you just keep writing 'till your hand's cramped and your vision's blury, 'till you've gotten it all out.
but whatever you do, it's never as good as you know it could be. and that's how you know
justbeiiingme29 9 months ago
Every time I watch this, it always brings me to tears. It's very powerful and moving.
TheMyrrdhin 9 months ago 3
Hats off to you Taylor Mali and the amazing seventh grader Tony Steinberg. (And your quote about old vikings dying with swords in their hands will be going up on our wall in the English classroom at Aragon High)
arcturus0starwatcher 9 months ago
stumbled upon this by accident, now i find myself stuck in this chair untill i have seen every single one of Taylor Mali's clips. Thank you for the sore ass, Thank you for the burning eyes. Thank you for you!
MrBimslice 10 months ago 20
Sweet Jesus. Choked me up.
victorgtz 10 months ago
2 people have no hearts because there is no way that you could not get chills from this
stormfan25 10 months ago 2
.. i got chills. holy. :|
boomboompowish 11 months ago
Apparently he changed the name for the poem... in another video he talks about a seventh-grade student, Toby Stein, who died of leukemia.
mrdrprofmack 11 months ago
@mrdrprofmack
you gotta be serious leukemia is blood cancer and maybe he changed the name because the family wanted him too.
nico6510 10 months ago
So moving! this must be the little boy he is dedicating the 1000 inspired teacher's mission to. (If he inspires 1000 people to be teachers he is cutting his hair and donating it to Locks of Love)
KappaCutie 1 year ago 3
Awesome Poem
noobzorz47 1 year ago
Oh c'mon, who in their right mind would dislike this??
Beautiful, this is just too amazing
xxxHikaruxKaoruxxx 1 year ago 5
Aaaand we're crying again. :_)
esama2 1 year ago 2
wow oh wow. you make me realize that the world is such a bigger place, and my problems are just not so huge.
erinmtdew 1 year ago 3
I did not cry but I can admit that I was at the point of tears! The second I found out about the boy chills ran down my back! Cause I have known what is like to have a friend with such an illness.
Silverexx 1 year ago 2
Sorry, I don't get it. How is this inspirational again?
I'm not trying to be an ignorant douche. I just can't get it. Really.
Firenzzo 1 year ago
@Firenzzo
It's inspirational because he is demonstrating that death can effect people of all ages and that children with their innocence can understand this. It is inspirational because 12 boys shaved their heads and forgot about what people with think just so that they're classmate would feel happy again.
InkStainedWord 1 year ago
@Firenzzo Its about finding a sense of brotherhood, even at a young age, that binds us together in a memorable moment. Even in death, these kids will learn what it truly means to have someone they care about taken away, and the spiritual feeling of honoring their brother's passing. Its inspirational because of the rarity... and the fact that no one honors a death like these kids did.
nightwolf117610 1 year ago 2
this was beautiful, you truly have a gift Mr. Mali. Thank you for sharing it
sakuramana91 1 year ago
holy sh**.
mfl728 1 year ago 2
wow! just cried, his poetry is amazing
kay11d 1 year ago
Mr. Mali. I'm an university teacher. One of the major programs in which I'm teaching is PE. I find your work very inspirational and since I've discovered your work one week ago I'm now officially your fan.
Thank you for your work!
Ivan from Bulgaria.
dmvic 1 year ago
This poem makes me cry every time I watch it, but it remains my favorite poem of all time. It's perfect, Mr. Mali. Thank you. Thank you.
KageHikarii 1 year ago
two years ago i heard this slam poem at my school, and a year later i won second place in a slam competition.
thank you Taylor Mali
snailbytrees 1 year ago
Ooooooo, had ik deze maar gekend toen ik vanmiddag voorlichting gaf over cultuureducatie aan Pabostudenten.
WAUW
IEBakker 1 year ago
This moved me.
LighthammerStudios 1 year ago
made me cry, too.. just "wow!"
progre55 1 year ago
I'm amazed... I always thought he was an atheist. What a guy.
cobrabase 1 year ago
OK I'm officially addicted to this guy. Definitely beautiful.
VocalEdgeTV 1 year ago 6
Dammit...I'm choking back tears here.
oldetownecoffee1 1 year ago
I love all his poetry, however, even his most emotionally charged poems never brought me to tears... until this one.
This one got me good.
supervanillabear4 1 year ago 2
@supervanillabear4
Yes that makes 2 of us... first time ever a pem did make me cry!
lilee88 1 year ago
Outstanding....
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RonanADunne 1 year ago
I loved this poem the first time I heard it. A few days after I watched this, my dog died, and I knew exactly what to do for a sort of goodbye ceremony for him.
1ogeck 1 year ago
@1ogeck Aw yes, I sure feel ya on the death of your dog! It's like losing a family member.
VocalEdgeTV 1 year ago
Amazing.
dphillphilo 1 year ago
Damn I cried, that was beautiful
Poplopo 1 year ago
Definitely beautiful
Definitely beautiful
Definitely beautiful
Astromarine 1 year ago 24
this made me cry.. it was so boutiful
LittleMissLiit 1 year ago
Almost too intense to bear.
fireweasel 1 year ago
dammit mali, itz too beautiful
DemonWolf47x 1 year ago
Amazing. I can't even grasp how this poem is so powerful. It just is.
Alexc0999 1 year ago
made me cry too! :( :(
broadwaybound128 1 year ago
T.T wow
chatanwarrior 1 year ago
Absolutely beautiful
IamAubs300 1 year ago
beautiful man.
LighterB 1 year ago
no words. Only tears. Phenomenal
nightdaughter1 1 year ago
OMG that is wonderful and wow...i'm crying
OreoCookie1228 1 year ago
This reminded me how fortunate I am to call myself a teacher and work everyday with amazing young people.
4ascroggs 1 year ago 2
one word: beautiful. *sob*
kjwannabe 1 year ago
how beautiful... his use of symbology and how he ties everything in at the last moment is amazing.
funnyfinder31193 1 year ago
taylor mali is a lamed vovnik.
dfunk4321 1 year ago
oh my god.
thecharredremain 1 year ago
Woah. Tear.
Softballdragonfly 1 year ago
I was full out sobbing by the end lol
thecharredremain 1 year ago 2
thx for making me cry, and being able to make ppl cry, which was also beautiful in itself ( seeing that some ppl can still be touched by simple poetry and beautiful stories). still wish you were my middle school teacher one day
Noranapps 1 year ago 2
I don't think anyone can hear this and not think..."Damn...."
Koribaby1 1 year ago 5
hey, why are my eyes leaking?
geekgurl2000 1 year ago 167
@geekgurl2000
i cried
pauliejay77 1 year ago
by far one of my favorite poem by taylor..
valeicha 2 years ago 2
Ahhhhhhhhh Man!
patdlover1916 2 years ago 2
This is amazing. It starts out so descriptive and inspiring and suddenly your heart breaks. Thank you sir. I will forever remember the name Tony Steinberg.
jakeouren03 2 years ago 7
Holy shit.
There's nothing else to say.
TheR3sistanc3 2 years ago 3
I sobbed when my philosophy teacher showed this today during a discussion of art. Art it is indeed.
ThisIsAnInsideJoke 2 years ago 4
v'chayim aleinu v'al kol yis'ra'eil v'im'ru
Amein
Oseh shalom bim'romav hu ya'aseh shalom
aleinu v'al kol Yis'ra'eil v'im'ru
Amein
excitedbike 2 years ago 3
excitedbike 2 years ago 3
Yep, and me. It was the reminder of how truly excellent kids can be, with the shaven heads.
Lokifan13 2 years ago 4
made me cry tooo
4ndiland 2 years ago 56
made me cry man....so beautiful...
auran5 2 years ago 6
Brilliant.
KatLoveMusic 2 years ago
Im doing this for my Poetry on the forensics team , i make everyone cry who listens.
jordanprince08 2 years ago
Thank you for the inspiration. I read your poetry and I am determined to go into work tomorrow and be an even better teacher. Sometimes we teachers need reminders about how important our work is. We can get bogged down in meetings and paperwork and nonsense. You do a great job of reminding us!
amyeileen 2 years ago 6
this one actually made me cry, which is not easy to do...
inatreefort 2 years ago 3
I love it sir. My teacher is Jerry Seeger and were big fans
mrf792 2 years ago 2
lol glad im not the only one that cried. this hit me hard
anthemofadam 2 years ago
Wow. I actually cried. That was brilliant.
MarleyMe95 2 years ago 2
My creative writing teacher Christian Kaminsky, who has opened for you, played this in my class. You voice rang out loudly in our silent classroom. i sat, three seats back and listened. Suddenly my heart filled with such emotion. Just from your words. For this i commend you. You are my hero.
hottie2001032515 2 years ago 7
I've loved this mans poetry since I first heard what a teacher makes on def poetry, but of all the poems I've ever heard read or read silently or verbalized passonatly to my self and anyone else that was in hearing range, of all the poems of my life, this one was the most powerfull, beautifull, passionate and moveing.
Duhnata 2 years ago 2
My teacher in sophomore year played this poem for our class. The moment it ended, we sat it utter silence for ten minutes before the lunch bell rang. No one spoke. It was the most eloquent silence I have ever heard.
ally617 2 years ago 5
Oh my god, that's so beautiful <3
zirtavia 2 years ago 6
It made me cry... May his spirit rest in peace.
corrosiveCUPID 2 years ago 3
I cry everytime
humminbird7 2 years ago
This made me want to cry....and believe more than ever that all the time, and stress and inability to do what I want because I'm working on a lesson plan or philosophy statement for an education course is worth it. young people in this country have more strength of character than we ever give them credit for.
Sammery 2 years ago
I cried.
Minikimii 2 years ago
God...just....wow.
ImminentlyWise 2 years ago
Wow! As the tear rolls down my face!
ivorytower54 2 years ago 2
i've heard this poem many times before. this is the first time i have listened to it as a teacher, and boy was it powerful listening to it this time! beautiful, yet sad story.
redranger332 2 years ago
this poem made me cry.
Jhara121 2 years ago
i cried
wordsayers 2 years ago
That was so elegant and beautiful.
Upper9T 2 years ago
Fucking Awesome doesn't begin to describe it.
vorwoz 2 years ago
Amazing story, even listening to it for the 5th time, I still get teary eyed.
h2freak 2 years ago
wow. i dont know what to say. this is so moving. just like the "depression too is a kind of fire" piece, they reduce me to silence. becautiful x x
bexter28 2 years ago
wow
mma32lmm4 2 years ago
All of your poems are incredibly moving, but this is the first one that made me cry.
Simply amazing!
sachemgal 2 years ago 2
I loved seeing you at CMU and sitting through your workshop.
BlueLycan87 2 years ago
Dear Taylor- cant wait to welcome you in Sydney when you come to Australia next year to be poet-in-residence in Queensland! You have a huge fanclub in my company already! What is the timing of you visit? Annalie (BTW, I am bringing my kids to NYC for XMAs & we will go to Bowery Theatre on Tuesday 29 Dec _ hope we might c u there again?)
maverickwoman2 2 years ago
MR. MALI a living poetic legend. This brought tears to my eyes. I loved every single bit of it!
raybaboon 2 years ago 5
While I love this poem and I love his poetry, I have to disagree with the theological point of view. The god of mathematics made a rather chaotic universe. Maybe my point of view about God is cynical and atheistic, but even that poem moved me hard. The possibility of God existing still remains.
Thank you, Taylor.
mathgeek37 2 years ago
fuck, every time i watch this i still get teary eyed. beautiful piece mr. mali.
canihelpyou 2 years ago
You are amazing.
mistyjocasta 2 years ago
No matter how many times I hear it, I still tear up.
brklyngirl4life219 2 years ago 3
jimmy its ben and im in jimkilla69s class and hes not lying we are raising money for u it is $3500 and i hope we are able to have you come !!!!!
goalie900 2 years ago
hey taylor my class is trying to raise enogh money for you to come to our school and do a preformence but your a"agents" say that your fee is $3500 so if we can i hope you will come or all that spear time and money we raised for you to come to our school wouldn't count i hope you come i and akll of us love your poems
jimkilla69 2 years ago
thats was absolutely beautiful. thank you. please visit SDSU one day.
iorishura 2 years ago
that was absolutely incredible!
SlimeInKorea 2 years ago 2
Thank you!
DanielWLin 2 years ago
that was beautiful
ravensmomscorp76 2 years ago
Classic! Thanks for sharing your experience with us.What a privilege. What a joy.
delohsteve 2 years ago 2
I posted a video response to this, though it hasn't showed up yet. Thank you, Mr. Mali, for making a recording of this poem available! I've been looking for one for quite some time.
MissingLeftSock 2 years ago 3
It takes a lot to render me speechless, but this did it. All I can say is "Wow."
fishyface07 2 years ago 4
absolutely amazing
msg3tr1ght 2 years ago 4
I am in tears.
alucardmai 2 years ago 5
That was incredibly moving, so very touching, and beautiful. I love your work, Mr. Mali.
SparklingGrey 2 years ago 4
Thank you for all those outstanding poems Mr Mali. This one is an absolutely heart moving masterpiece!
shinryu2527 2 years ago 3
A great poem can make you cry. THAT was a great poem.
sandythepoet 2 years ago 4
Mr Mali, your poetry is simply inspirational, from the absurd and playful to poems such as these you never fail to hit the mark. Your students are lucky to have you for a teacher - even if it will take them a decade to realise it.
My hat goes off to you, sir, and my heart to the boy in your tale.
NotEvsie 2 years ago 3
That was a brilliantly touching piece of poetry. Thank you.
grnlfe01 2 years ago 4
Wow. That was fantastically powerful.
Misterate 2 years ago 3
Genius
MrSedarati 2 years ago 3
I'm very impressed by this poem. I love your work.
Positivevlog 2 years ago 3
Mr. Mali, you are truly one of the greatest inspriations in my teaching career. Thanks so much for this, and for all you do.
NewfieBullett 2 years ago 3